2D Artwork: I love Beachcomber <3

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  1. TedimusPrime

    TedimusPrime Well-Known Member

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    "Do you really love the lamp, or are you just saying it because you saw it?"
    "I love lamp. I love lamp."


    I don't know why I'm drawing minibots, but hey, who can complain? I'm not sure how I feel about the piece, so give me a critique. Please? I feel pretty good, especially since I drew about 85% of him at school
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  2. ThaConqueror

    ThaConqueror Rock! Robot Rock!

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    Honestly, I feel this is fantastic. The only think I can find possibly wrong with it is his clenched right hand kinda jars against the whole "hippy robot going fishing" thing, but hey, maybe he's thinking "I'm gonna catch SO many fish today, I can FEEL it!" inside, who knows.

    Do have a deviantART profile? I'd love to see more by you.
     
  3. TedimusPrime

    TedimusPrime Well-Known Member

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    Optimus-wave A.K.A. Omega-Wave

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    wow, i like that piece quite a bit, clean up the lines, add a decent enough background, and that is one wickedly rad work right there bro!
     
  5. galvascream

    galvascream Apple Junkie

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    Any plans on who to draw up next? I'd recommend Outback.
     
  6. Soundwave_FSD

    Soundwave_FSD Yoda in a track suit...

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    Fantastic! I love your art style. Keep 'em coming.
     
  7. SpeedFreak01

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    Dude, you are awesome! Go and work for Hasbro right now!
    Lawl, psychedelic Beachcomber!
     
  8. Rotorstorm

    Rotorstorm OriginalRotorstorm Fanboy

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    Very nice, the style reminds me of the Japanese style of artwork.
     
  9. kjeevahh

    kjeevahh n/a

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    generally great, but his peace leg is thinner than the other one
     
  10. Blitz.

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    I really dig a lot of this The paint job is a really cool idea and I see we share a similar eye when it comes to detailing. So this gets my official thumbs up
     
  11. TedimusPrime

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    Awesome critique. I wouldn't consider this a formal piece, so I didn't put as much effort into the clean up as I would, lets say, pieces to come. Thanks!
    I'm actually probably going to finish up some OC character art I've been working on after I'm done doing a commission for a friend.
    Thanks! Nice seeing your art more often.
    That's actually what I really want to do. I've been looking into toy design. I'm only 17, so I have some time to improve.
    Whoot
    I honestly didn't notice until you said that! :D  Guess I'll have to pay more attention to that
    We do? (looks away, I haven't been looking at your tutorial) ;)  Obviously your more realistic toy like art has really inspired me, so I'm glad you appreciate it.
     
  12. kjeevahh

    kjeevahh n/a

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    absolutely, there's lots in common between your style and blitz's.
     
  13. SpeedFreak01

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    Wow, what a coincidence! I'm interested in toy design too! Of course, being 14, I still have a way to go too, but I hope you and I can both show Hasbro a thing or two in the future!
     
  14. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    The right hand doesn't bother me at all, especially after your wonderful explanation here. I totally agree with your assessment of this piece. :thumb 

    TP, I hope we see more and more from you here :thumb 
     
  15. B'Bantor

    B'Bantor Bug Drone

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    I love this! :D  The hippie graffiti is a very nice touch
     
  16. KA

    KA PENIS GOES WHERE?!!

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    hippie!
     
  17. Infosaur

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    love the graffiti. Has anyone else ever thought of it?

    Then it pleases me (that you are) first.
     
  18. TedimusPrime

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    It's possible, but I didn't do any research to see if anyone had done it before me. I just kind of thought of it and decided to go with it.
     

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