Humor: Brave Battles the Avalanche

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  1. griffn29

    griffn29 Well-Known Member

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    The following writing piece is something I made a few months ago, a story that was supposed to be so bad that it was good. It was a short fan fiction about robots battling an avalanche in the Appalachian Mountains.

    (Author's note: I did not do much research on the brave franchise before I wrote this.)

    Hope you enjoy!


    BRAVE: THE AVALANCHE

    The world was Quite, (two quite). but then there was a avalanche!
    “There is the avalanche on the mountain. “Said all the people on the mountain. The Avalanche would attack them all on the mountain!
    It is the future now at the brave headquarters HQ all the robots are there. There is J-Decker(he turns into a polise car). Ambulance man turns into an ambulance car. Crane ru turns into an construction And Hon-ru is Blue.
    “there was an avalanche” said J-Decker.
    “where” said Hon-ru.
    “In the mountain!”. All the brave had to go to protect the people from the evil avalanche.
    It is now 60 (military time) and all the brave reached the avalanche at the mountain to stop the evil avalanche at the mountain(the one that has the avalanche at it!
    ”Oh NO!” said ambulance man. “THE AVALANCHE IS RIGHT HERE!”.
    “We have to protect the people”! said Crane-ru
    “But not the bad guys.”said J.
    “NO!” Said the ambulance man who was very angry now, even for an ambulance car.”LOOK J-DECKER. THE BAD ARE ALSO PEOPLE ON THIS MOUNTAIN WHO ALSO HAVE THE POLISE LIKE YOU AND ME.”
    “Really?” said J.(Decker)
    “YES” said Ambulance Man. “YOU HAVE TO SAVE THEM BECAUSE EVEN THOW THEY ARE BAD, THEY WILL HAVE TO CHOSE BETWEEN ROBING A BANK AND AN AVALANCHE AND A MOUNTAIN AND THEY WILL CHOSE THE AVALANCHE (to avoid and not rob also) AND THAT’S’ WHY YOU HAVE TO SAVE THEM.”
    “Ok. Then I will save them.” Said JD-ecker “I have a hunch;”
    “Ok” the Ambulance man was angrier not any more.
    And then J-Decker saved all the bad guys on the mountain because.
    Also and all the dogs and cats and birds and plants, and trees, and snow and Nintendo ds’s and The Nintendo wii’s and good people, on the mountain so that the avalanche would all be by them no.
    (He also saved all the lake so that they could go swim.)
    “Thank you J-Decker.” Said all the things that J-Decker just saved. (They said it to J-Decker(he is J-Decker))
    But then the avalnche came and started to battle the city!
    “We will stop it” Said Hon-ru and Crane-ru!
    So Hon-ru and crane-ru then combind together and punched the avlanche in the face and it ran away.
    Then there was a police car that came to capture the avalanche and put him in jail.
    (WHERE IS THE AVALNCHE? Said the polise car
    “Its in that invisbal airplane” said Ambulance Man.
    Then The airplane then showed up and the avlanche came out, but the avalnche energy canseled out the plane energy and It explded.
    “Oh no” said Megatron. “the avalanche Explded!”
    “Was that yor evil plan all along?” Said Crane-ru
    Yes (said Megatron)
    “Then I will be yoer best frend.” Sed J-Decker. “So That you can be my best frend.”
    “ok” Said Megatron.
    Then J kiked his but and used all the muney to buy Candy.
    “The End.” Said Hon-ru
    The End
    P.S. Megatron is evel but J-Decker not evel.
    P.S.S. When it said J it really stood for J-Decker
     
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    SPLIT LIP AKA Beve Stuscemi

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