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Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Spiderus Prime, Jun 14, 2008.

  1. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    Here's Some Picture you like to see.

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    There will more of them.
     
  2. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    I'm think they funny.
     
  3. Jazzy Zx

    Jazzy Zx Wants too be called Jz :P

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    Huh?
    I know it's your first comic but it doesn't make much sense.
    The only one I got was the last one with Soundwave.

    Anyways keep trying!
     
  4. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    I love your sig! Very clever!
     
  5. Spoiler

    Spoiler Autobot Spoiler

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    I am inclined to agree, it may just be the grammar. Because the first 3 have improper grammar, and that could be why they aren't making sense.
     
  6. Chaos Incarnate

    Chaos Incarnate Not just a name.

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    I don't understand what the punchline is.
     
  7. Katamari Prime

    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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    If your trying for LOLcat type humor, it needs polish.
     
  8. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    There's some potential here, but is the improper grammar because english is not your first language, or are you trying to be different?
     
  9. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    One thing first The speak clound can get out of the picture,2nd those are just edits & 3nd I have been work hard on those edits for know.
     
  10. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    Wha-huh?
     
  11. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    Yes I do make more this are real funny than other ones.
     
  12. Jazzy Zx

    Jazzy Zx Wants too be called Jz :P

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    Eh, I little better but you should proof-read it to make sure it fits the picture.
    Also a trick is not to use light texts in speech bubbles.
    I always think it is easier to take pictures and add text and not take a scene from a television show so the comic has more inspiration than what your doing , for example take a look at Shane's Comics or my Jazz's Fanasty comics.

    WARNING! SHANE'S COMIC HAS OVER 400 pages of chip lovin' goodness
    Linky: http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/showthread.php?t=91364&page=1

    Jazzy Zx's comics: http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/showthread.php?t=175337&page=1
     
  13. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    I did Proofread and I like Jokes.
     
  14. Mastergeorge

    Mastergeorge I should burn my wallet.

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    How about improvising? I'd think you'd do better with a sprite comic or a photo comic? Even Robot heroes would be better. Try speech bubble generators! They look better than paint splashes.
     
  15. Jazzy Zx

    Jazzy Zx Wants too be called Jz :P

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    Agree bout' ya George.

    I'm sorry but they just ain't funny in our opinon and it's your own opinion if you think they are funny.

    Just try with a different method than what your doing here, even though this way has alot of potential, I don't think it's going to work out for you.
     
  16. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    This one is the once one that I made.
     
  17. Jazzy Zx

    Jazzy Zx Wants too be called Jz :P

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  18. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    Optimus Prime as a pirate.
     
  19. Mastergeorge

    Mastergeorge I should burn my wallet.

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    how about you try Photoshop? It looks a lot better than MS paint. Also can you use proper grammar? (English 101)
     
  20. Omnius

    Omnius Well-Known Member

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    What...? I'm... not sure what to make of any of this. Are the typos supposed to be intentional?
     

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