Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Spiderus Prime, Jun 14, 2008.
Here's Some Picture you like to see.
There will more of them.
I'm think they funny.
I know it's your first comic but it doesn't make much sense.
The only one I got was the last one with Soundwave.
Anyways keep trying!
I love your sig! Very clever!
I am inclined to agree, it may just be the grammar. Because the first 3 have improper grammar, and that could be why they aren't making sense.
I don't understand what the punchline is.
If your trying for LOLcat type humor, it needs polish.
There's some potential here, but is the improper grammar because english is not your first language, or are you trying to be different?
One thing first The speak clound can get out of the picture,2nd those are just edits & 3nd I have been work hard on those edits for know.
Yes I do make more this are real funny than other ones.
Eh, I little better but you should proof-read it to make sure it fits the picture.
Also a trick is not to use light texts in speech bubbles.
I always think it is easier to take pictures and add text and not take a scene from a television show so the comic has more inspiration than what your doing , for example take a look at Shane's Comics or my Jazz's Fanasty comics.
WARNING! SHANE'S COMIC HAS OVER 400 pages of chip lovin' goodness
Jazzy Zx's comics: http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/showthread.php?t=175337&page=1
I did Proofread and I like Jokes.
How about improvising? I'd think you'd do better with a sprite comic or a photo comic? Even Robot heroes would be better. Try speech bubble generators! They look better than paint splashes.
Agree bout' ya George.
I'm sorry but they just ain't funny in our opinon and it's your own opinion if you think they are funny.
Just try with a different method than what your doing here, even though this way has alot of potential, I don't think it's going to work out for you.
This one is the once one that I made.
Optimus Prime as a pirate.
how about you try Photoshop? It looks a lot better than MS paint. Also can you use proper grammar? (English 101)
What...? I'm... not sure what to make of any of this. Are the typos supposed to be intentional?
Separate names with a comma.