Grimlock_13's Attempt at Funnies

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Grimlock_13, Nov 21, 2006.

  1. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Let me start out saying I make no guarantees you will laugh. The strips are quite stupid, but hopefully a little amusing to more than just me.

    Also, I'm faily computer-retarded, so the first couple strips have some major issues, so give me feedback and if you can't read the words PLEASE let me know and I'll post them. I finally figured out a better way to do things after I read a mini tutorial in Cataclizm1's awesome funnies thread...so by strip 3, it's MUCH better.

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  2. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Here's #2


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  3. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    And, #3 (This is where I stopped being a dumbass figgured out how to do it better)


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    As a final note...Armada Hot Shot's dialogue will be easier to read in the future, I promise. I'm still working the kinks out...

    Hope you enjoy.
     
  4. Eric

    Eric RIP AND TEAR!!!

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    Armada Hot Shot's retarded. :lolol :lolol :lolol :lolol  Not bad for a first start!
     
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    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Thanks man, the first stips I have are pretty slow...and yup Hot Shot's definitely retarded ;) 
     
  6. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    I like 'em all, but the last one is the best. "Why shouldn't I let your insubornination slide again and again?" :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol 

    My only real critique: pics are a little big. Other than that, they seem fairly clear and readable. I enjoyed the comics. :thumb 
     
  7. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Thanks:)  I still have a lot to practice, especially getting the sizes right.
     
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    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    :lolol :lol :lol  Great job!
     
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    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Thanks! (and thanks for your inadvertant help with your tutorial!)
     
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    CdnShockwave The Prince of Poses TFW2005 Supporter

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    Welcome to the beast, you're off to a good start. "you ate paint chips as a kid" :lol  :lol  :lol 
     
  11. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    Those are really funny, expecially the SS coronation part :lol :lol :lol :lol  Still a lil big though but a great start :thumb 
     
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    Blunticon The Oddjob

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    Great start man, looking forward to more.
     
  13. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lolol  Agreed, the coronation was teh funny.

    And yeah, the pictures could do with some resizing.
     
  14. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol 

    These are great, but you might want to make your pictures smaller. They are taking up more room than I have on my screen.

    Also two of the pictures are not loading--the first one and the sixth one. Try reuploading them.
     
  15. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Thanks for all the feedback guys! I'll definitely work on getting the pics smaller for strips I do in the future...the next few might be pretty big as well. Like I said I'm pretty computer-retarded and I'm still in the learning stages so I'll try to get them resized before I post them but I can't make solid guarantees.

    I'm at work at the moment but I'll try to get pics 1 and 6 uploaded again.

    Thanks!
     
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    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Here's #4

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    I know the pics are still big, I'm working on it! More to coming soon, thanks for reading!
     
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    Lord Megatron FFFF

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    Just size the pics down to 640x480.
     
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    Most excellent!
     
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    Renidragon Toys on my table!

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    Oh, I like these. Was Sideswipe trying to walk or something?
     
  20. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    I'm going to say.....yes. I actually had no clue what I was doing with Sideswipe, I just figgured I'd have him fall around...but the walking idea makes better sence...Sideswipe was trying to walk, it's now official canon!
     

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