I practically re-modelled Grimlock because my first version kinda sucked. I hope this version is better. Comments welcome.

 

its looking good man, your model seem decent, but your proportions are off. I would suggest importing some reference images, they are the key to a good model.

What software are you using?

 

That's pretty good!

 

I like the dirty metal sort of feel to the texturing 

 

RHansen's right, some of the proportions, mainly the arms, are off.

Nice start nonetheless

 

3D S Max 8

 

I like the texture of this version.

 

You're definately starting to get there. It's a big improvement over the last one. Just keep on trying it's the only way to learn.