Greenshadow0's Random World!

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  1. Greenshadow0

    Greenshadow0 Well-Known Member

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    Hello there, and welcome to GS0's random world. Here, you will experience the unknown and the uncalled for. You will see "randomness", as I call it. While enjoying your stay, fell free to post constructive criticism, thoughs, and ideas about my comic.

    Episode 1: How it all started.

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    Note: I was at Chaosbringer_00's house, So I used his autobot/decepticon base.

    My first attempt at being funny (In this forum). Now post your thoughts here! :lol 
     
  2. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    I DECLARE WAR! I WIN! >=]

    That's a good start.
     
  3. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Yet more random-ness.

    The "your-mom" line was :lol , but random-ness in general without any motivation or meaning tends to get real stale real fast.

    That is, if you intend to make more comic goodness. :) 
     
  4. Greenshadow0

    Greenshadow0 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the comments, I'll take them into consideration. :) 
     
  5. chaosbringer_00

    chaosbringer_00 I am indescribable.

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    Yeah, ol' Greenshadow has a grand total of TWO TF's to work with, so it'll be interesting to see how this turns out. And my TF's declare war on your TF's becuase you used their base w/out permission. YOU WILL BE DESTROYED!!!
     
  6. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    I declare war on both of you. I win.
     
  7. chaosbringer_00

    chaosbringer_00 I am indescribable.

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    I WILL NEVER SURRENDER!!! NEVER!!! POWER TO CHAOSBRINGER_00!!! YEAH!!!
     
  8. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    You'll fall quicker than France!
     
  9. Greenshadow0

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    Hey I have 3: 2 hotshots and armada cyclonus.

    Anyway, more comics to come in the future. And I if you declare war in the random world, war declares itself on you, backfiring, Colbalt. :wink: 
     
  10. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    You guys are declaring war like a bunch of.... I can't think of anything right now:( ....Anyway,nice start!:thumb 
     
  11. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    That's retarded. I win by default for that stupid comment.
     
  12. chaosbringer_00

    chaosbringer_00 I am indescribable.

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    You'll fall quicker than...um, Greenshadow0's popularity!!! HAH!!!

    You can't even find Cyclonus!!!
     
  13. Seth Buzzard

    Seth Buzzard R.I.P. Buzzbeak Content Contributor

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  14. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    :lol  Nice start keep it up.
     
  15. Golobulus

    Golobulus heh heh heh

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    Sorry...But I didn't find this funny ...at all

    And I'm not going to lie and say you're off to a "good start", because in my opinion, you are not. And if I were to say something like that, you would assume you could just make comics of two robots yelling nonsensical gibberish at each other and tackling one another, and it would be entertaining.

    And it isn't.

    It doesn't matter if you only have two toys. You can find ways to be creative using just those two, though I'd reccomend getting more if you intend to do a regular series.

    First off.

    Don't just start a comic thread just so "I can have funny comics like the other people in TFR"

    And second, well.. don't do this, and by that I mean, don't do what you did with this first comic. Come up with a script, toy around with ideas, use other toys ( they don't HAVE to be transformers for yours to interact with).
     
  16. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Good Start :lolol  :lolol  :lolol 

    But Greenshadow 1 Thing GET MORE FIGURES LIKE CYBERTRON.CLASSICS. Alternators,Tiatanium This comic is going to go hell if you don't get any new TFs with only Hot Shots and a Cyclonus GET MORE TFS
     
  17. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    You've got a point there. I used to do this with my old strip Moments with Soundwave and Galvatron, where Soundwave and others would constantly be abused by Galvatron. The thing is that Galvatron was insane, so it kind of fit together until I introduced the purple repaint... and things just kind of went off from there....
     
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    Could be better. Definately needs more figures.
     
  19. Greenshadow0

    Greenshadow0 Well-Known Member

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    I'll think about these comments and plan my comics and get more transformers. :) 
     
  20. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    Good for you! I can see the comedic potential in you.....Man, I sound like a Jedi:redface2: 
     

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