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  1. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    sorry for the photos.They suck i know.... grammar and such suck too, but i will try to improve...

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  2. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    Paradox!!! >_<
     
  3. The621

    The621 Fuck you, that's why!

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    Time Paradox!!!
     
  4. onesock

    onesock Banned

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    I can't read the font!
     
  5. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    Damm those small letters. Hopefully next strips will be larger. The front size of these first ones is 22.
     
  6. Kristof

    Kristof Well-Known Member

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    They were probably size 22 prior to you resizing the pics to 800x600.

    Right now they look like they are less then size 10 font.
     
  7. Katamari Prime

    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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    Try bold type
     
  8. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Bonecrushers riding Swindle. :lolol  :lolol  :lolol 

    Nice Job,But it's too Small.
     
  9. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  The random Bonecrusher skateboard interlude was funny.

    Good job, only thing is of course: fonts could be bigger. Try to work with strips no bigger than 640 pixels in width.
     
  10. Eric

    Eric Per sempre marciamo.

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    Time paradox FTW! :lolol :lolol 
     
  11. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    :lolol  :lol  :lolol  :lol 
     
  12. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    more strips.


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  13. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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  14. Eric

    Eric Per sempre marciamo.

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    :lolol :lolol :lolol  Minty!
     
  15. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  You sold me! I want me some Energon X too, for the tyrant in me! :D 
     
  16. The621

    The621 Fuck you, that's why!

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    I lawled at that!
     
  17. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    We are back! Oh noes!!

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  18. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    :lol  Just a tip, put the word bubbles in order from left to right so the dialog will flow better.
     
  19. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  Mmm, chicken legs...

    I'm also with Cataclizm on the flow of the dialogue.
     
  20. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    Is that the character from Black Lagoon?
     

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