Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by General Magnus, Jun 30, 2007.
sorry for the photos.They suck i know.... grammar and such suck too, but i will try to improve...
I can't read the font!
Damm those small letters. Hopefully next strips will be larger. The front size of these first ones is 22.
They were probably size 22 prior to you resizing the pics to 800x600.
Right now they look like they are less then size 10 font.
Try bold type
Bonecrushers riding Swindle.
Nice Job,But it's too Small.
The random Bonecrusher skateboard interlude was funny.
Good job, only thing is of course: fonts could be bigger. Try to work with strips no bigger than 640 pixels in width.
Time paradox FTW!
You sold me! I want me some Energon X too, for the tyrant in me!
I lawled at that!
We are back! Oh noes!!
Just a tip, put the word bubbles in order from left to right so the dialog will flow better.
Mmm, chicken legs...
I'm also with Cataclizm on the flow of the dialogue.
Is that the character from Black Lagoon?
Separate names with a comma.