2D Artwork: First Gen's first "Mosaicish" Comic

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by First Gen, Feb 27, 2008.

  1. First Gen

    First Gen I AM

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    This is my first try at doing a comic since my miserable last place finish in the first round of the IDW contest.

    Story by Curt "Duke of Luns" Lunsford

    Art and Color By Steven "First Gen" Serrano


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  2. transmetal2dinobot

    transmetal2dinobot Sub-Commander

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    this would work as a mosaic, i think that exact subject matter had already been touched on though
     
  3. kronos

    kronos PSN = KRONOSX1

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    I like the sory! The art is ok! But i have a recomendation, that font is really hard to read. get a unified color and use that. this is a great start!
     
  4. Moonscream

    Moonscream YES, We EXIST!

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    Word balloons/boxes are your friend.

    Your writing and layout are pretty good, tho.

    --Moony
     
  5. mattarmstrong

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    cool
     

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