Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Falldown, Apr 22, 2008.
#1 - Mess
Not a bad start...look forward to see what else ya got!
Not bad at all, gives off a start for a story here and introducin' some characters in a way that you can easily get a grasp of what kind of people they are in such a short time.
And Cheetor's a kindred spirit to so many in this forum; "Collectibles, not toys!"
Thanks for the comments. Hopefully the next few updates will pick up the pace a bit more. I've written up 9 updates fully, and have planned this initial arc to last 11. Where things go from there remains to be seen, but hopefully this first arc will be an enjoyable story on its own .
#2 - Look Up And Learn
Ugh. Didn't realise the floor was so dirty ...
Anyway, hope you enjoy this.
Yep, interesting so far, nice transformation shot of Arcee.
Nice so far.
Good job so far.
Glad you're enjoying it .
She actually balances quite well in mid-transformation. Made things much easier.
I've made up some character profiles. Was feeling generous, so have 4 to post today. Normally I'll do 2 at a time - 1 'Bot and 1 'Con - until I've no toys left to make them for.
.......Geez, Magnus is a bigger dick than Prime.
Cheetor has his own toy collection, that's awesome.
Like the profiles!
Been think of making a few of my own!
your going to finally make a cheetor g1 loyalists respect? That will be quite the day.
Its also kind of spin on shanes recent haunted house of robot heroes comics.
make some more. you seem to have talent in both photography and writing.
And at Cheetors favourate funny being Obsidian's Lament. I can just see him sat there, reading it and thinking "Damn, I'm cool! Look at what I just did! Oh yeah, I'm BAD!"
Exactly the image I had in mind.
Not intentionally. I hadn't actually seen those updates until I was ready to post my first. Personally, I think Shane made it funnier.
Please excuse the low budget flight effects in panel 6.
#3 - Decepticon Attack Part 1
That's what I was thinking!
Toys playing with toys? Unheard of!
And I didn't know Sunstorm was a reader of Fun-ness.
Thanks for the comments, and to everyone who's taken the time to read this but hasn't commented. Glad you're enjoying them, because I'm having a ball making them.
Sunstorm claims it's because of the way Primus and Unicron have been portrayed, although I think he may also be smitten with Arnval. I am hoping to work in the fact that they're all aware of other comics into mine in the future, so that might be an interesting point to play off for a silly strip .
On a partily unrelated note, I've got to learn not to read funnies and be on eBay at the same time. Fun-ness has me wanting to buy Mao, or any Shinki for that matter. Hard time finding them in Aus though.
Anyway, hope to have an update (or at least some new bios) up in the next couple of days. Thanks again for reading.
I thought those were great props, I'll reiterate my statements, that story and funny trumps any effects, and Waspinator wanting to make a mid flight course correction for some cakes was classic Waspy!
Awesome so far.
I love that your characters read the comics here.
Waspinator distracted by cakes. No wonder he doesn't get to go on many important missions.
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