Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by TerraDestroyer, May 4, 2007.
Two of my fav' characters from Beast Wars Neo.
Hmmn, the two Maximals are good, but Deadend...Not so much. He's drawn well, but he's lacking a proper action pose. This seems more like a techspec pose, while he could, say, be blocking the flameburst more intensively (right now it's like Cohrada has a really weak aim and that Deadend is saying "HA-HA, you suck at aiming!").
Hmmm...interesting. Perhaps some motion-blur would help? I drew this REALLY fast, so I suppose my attention was moreso on Cohrada and just getting Dead End's details right, rather than his action pose.
Thanks for the advice!
Yeah, I think some motionblurr could help. And glad to hear that I was of help.
This is penomenal. The detail is astounding. Awesome job! As for making Dead End look a little more action-y, you could try a couple of things:
1. Raise his upper arms outward, while bringing his forearms inward, yo give them an appearance of being pulled tight to protect himself.
2. I noticed that Dead End's legs are splayed, which helps moake him look more fluid and "in-action." However, it's not very visible because a.) the picture cuts off his legs before you really notice, and b.) the dust Cohedra is kicking up blocks some of the view. Changing one or both of those things might help.
I hope this helps a little. All in all, a spectacular piece of work. I personally love it. I look forward to seeing more from you
Man that pictures is Uber Awesome.
I really really like it.
Nice work man!
A note for the colors: utilize a blue hue to over the background (and the rabbit dude) to give it depth.
Always nice to see new BW fanart. Keep them up, GodzySamurai!
awesome work. I love Cohrada and Dead End, too. But Stampy in the background is hilarious. He looks like he is either cheering them on or wants to join in. Either way, it fits the characters. Great job.
Cohrada is distracting Dead End, that's why he missed. Dead end will be over confident and Stappy will jump him.
Awesome pic. That Cohrada looks fantastic!
really amazing! some of the best art around here!
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