Drift's Revenge

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by DecepticonSpike, Aug 11, 2010.

  1. DecepticonSpike

    DecepticonSpike Kimber/Stormer Fanboy

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    I finally found a use for a broken KO Bonecrusher I had in the junk drawer. :) 

    The story is that Drift is "interrogating" Bonecrusher for information on an upcoming Decepticon raid on a new energy source discovered by scientists.
     

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  2. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    This seems to fit the Funnies forum a bit more, so here we are!
     
  3. Blitzving

    Blitzving Has issues...

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    not so good a start....

    Im not saying give up, it's just all you did was post one picture, there's no text, and you had to tell us the storyline. That's a bad sign. the comic is supposed to tell it, not the forum post.

    All I'm saying is no one will want to read this if it's just going to be these one shot things and you just describe what happens.
     
  4. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    Well, in this guy's defense, he did originally post this in Fan Art, so his "start" is very much just that. I'd say give him some time to develop things a lot more as well as offer up any encouragement to help make his story all the best :) 
     
  5. Autobus Prime

    Autobus Prime Transit Former

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    Broken toys make great casualties,don't they? :D 

    Obviously, Bonecrusher's alibi hasn't got a <sunglasses> leg to stand on.
     
  6. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAHHH!

    Had to.
     
  7. DecepticonSpike

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    *Rimshot* :) 
     

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