Doctor Who over Transformers- SOMEONE GIVE ME A TITLE!

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    Shining Blitz Well-Known Member

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    Doctor Who over Transformers- Chapter 1 Up! Please comment!

    All right. Several people have speculated about this sort of thing. The UK Marvel Comics even made a direct connection, via Death's Head, yes? There's been fanart, and a Mosaic, and even a costume. And everyone knows that the whole point of such a thing is to A: Get the Tardis to transform, and B: have the Doctor sonic a few Decepticons. Yet so far, noone has actually WRITTEN anything of substance. Until now.

    Please note. Diologue in [square brackets] is over secure Autobot frequencies. Diologue in {pointed brackets} is over Decepticon (secure) frequencies. I need a better way of showing the TFs speaking out loud (better than quotes) so I'm open to suggestions. This universe is a vauge version of the G1 'verse, akin to the history of Beast Wars, that skews a tad more realistic and... well, you'll see. Sorry for the long and rambling intro. Fiction starts next post!
     
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    And here we go!
    PROLOGUE

    Earth, the year 2009. For several years now, this small blue planet has been the center of a war between two factions of an alien race of living machines, machines capable of restructuring their bodies to disguise themselves. They are the Transformers. Their endless war has destroyed dozens of civilizations and touched hundreds more. But soon, their war shall touch a universe they have never known, and only one man will be able to save all of creation…

    [Optimus, ah just shot down Thundercracker. He's O-L, but well out of the fight. How ar yeh doing versuz Megatron?]
    -kzzst-{T-C down! T-C Down! Requesting urgent assistance!}
    SILENCE, Thundercracker. Stop hogging the frequency. Stay quiet, and we might just come back for you.}-kzzst-
    [Alright, Ironhide. But it wouldn't hurt my pride if I got some backup...]
    {My apologies, Megatron. T-C out}-kzzst-
    [Ah'll be on my way. Wait, got tah stomp this cownehead. Sorry.]-kzzst-
    [Prime! We got a bogie by the gas station... or what's left of it, anyway]
    [What is it, Bumblebee? Human? Or Decepticon?]
    [Neither, Boss Bot. It's a kind of ripple in the air. No, not a heat wave, it's got a shape. Like a box. Maybe 7 feet tall? Wait, it's becoming more solid! There's this noise, too...]
    [Bee, I’m busy. Call up Hound. Patch him into your audio receptors.]
    [Rodger that. Hound, you listening? Patching in. Here it goes. -click- vwoorp… vwoorp… vwoorp… vwoorp -click-. And it’s pulsating with the ripple…]
    [Never heard that before. Coming over, just took down Rumble and Frenzy.]
    [Wait, don’t! It’s solidifying! It’s some kind of big blue phone booth. Inspecting…]

    Suddenly, just as the box had materialized, the sound stopped… just in time for the box to rocket forward at top speed across the street, tearing up what was left of the pavement and creating a nice-sized crater in the opposite wall. The doors opened with a groan, and a tall, thin man in a beige overcoat and blue suit strided out, nonchalantly. He looked up pleasently to the five-meter yellow robot, whose mouth was agape, and then to the red,grey, and blue robot only a few yards away, who was busy shooting at Autobots with great joy. Somehow, even in the roar of battle, everyone heard what he said next.

    “Hello. I’m the Doctor. Who might you all be?”

    {[Insert really awesome remix of Doctor Who+Transformers themesongs here, prefixed by Doctor-Who style Electronic Scream.]}
     
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    All right. There are a few thing I still need to decide, such as what companion (if any), what the nature of the TF universe is relative to the Doctor, and what excuse I could possibly have to make a Tardisbot. I know only two things. One, the Companion won't be Rose; and two, the Daleks will NOT be involved. Any suggestions?
     
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    Ratchet2007 Neither Here Nor There

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    Donna :D 

    Maybe, the Docs known about it for some time yet he's never got involved ? But maybe now he's forced into joining a side ?

    Good work anyway, like to see how this goes on
     
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    I like Donna, too. Definately considering her. I mean, there's already been the interaction, via Death's head, in the Marvel comics, yes? So the Doc has some knowledge of the Transformers (as real beings), that's definate. Thing is, I don't know if I want the Transformers franchise to exist within the DW universe. If it does, that offers up tons of opportunities for the companion to slip up and mention something about the TF verse he shouldn't know. Explanation is either a variation on the "Land of Fiction", from the 2nd Doctor story The Mind Robber; or a handwave that some ideas leaked across realities to create the TF francise in the DW universe, a la that old Archie special for Sonic the Hedgehog, "Sonic LIVE". Have I rambled enough today? Sorry. Update coming soon, maybe today.
     
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    Plot device

    Decepticons versus Daleks
     
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    Ratchet2007 Neither Here Nor There

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    He said he doesn't want Daleks

    I don't blame him
     
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    Maybe?.....

    Howabout a silver Dalek that says,"Such Heroic Nonsense...Mate",then shoots K-9?(LOL!!!) You do have a valid point though,Daleks do get more story time than any other Dr.Who villian.
     
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    Because they're popular.
    That's like complaining Optimus Prime gets more storytime than any other Transformer.

    Anyway an excuse to make a TARDISbot....Decepticons adapting Time Lord technology? Does it necesserily have to be the Doctor's TARDIS?
     
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    My Bad...

    I wasnt trying to complain ,(because I'm a Dalek fan myself),I was just giving my own embellishment to the storyline.
     
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    No, Daleks are overdone, for one, and secondly they would make no sense for the story i have roughly thought out. I want a Decepticon- Who villain alliance and the Daleks would just try to EXTERMINATE everyone, not go Decepticon. And since the rule of Inverse Ninja Strength applies to Daleks as well as Ninja, not even a metric S***ton of them would be enough of a threat to justify a Tardisbot. It just doesn't work out. I have ideas as to the nature of the enemies at hand, and I think they make sense. I think its not hard to guess who would want to ally with the Decepticons. And yes, it will be the Doctor's Tardis; and I plan for the Doctor to control it directly.
     
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    This sounds so fun! Can't wait for more.
     
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    Whoo-hoo, UPDATE! And it's a Big'un. May come back to this to fix formatting later.
    Chapter 1
    “Foolish human!” screeched the Decepticon jet. “You dare to interrupt our victory!? Your life is forfeit!” He was raising his arm-mounted blaster towards the strange man, but was quickly cut out.

    “Oh, shut up, Mr. Null-rays. ” shot back the Doctor. Starscream,taken aback by the “human’s” knowledge, did so. “The way I see it, this is just about a stalemate. And right now, if I were a tiebreaker -which I usually am, by the way- then I think I’d want to side with the faction NOT pointing guns at me.”

    “Tiebreaker? YOU!?,” chortled a man-sized lavender robot with what looked like jackhammers for arms and a spool on his chest. “A weak human like you couldn’t even touch a Decepticon!”

    The Doctor pulled a silver instrument not much larger than a swiss army knife from his pocket, pointed it at the off-purple Decepticon and pressed a button. Frenzy’s* jackhammers began to run uncontrollably, sparks shooting from the shafts as he tried desperately to stop the servos.
    “S-s-som-m-m-b-bod-d-dy h-h-el-p-p m-m-m-eeee!!!!” cried out the cassetron, helpless, but all of his teammates gave him a wide birth.

    “Well, then it’s a good thing I don’t have to touch one.” The Doctor turned to face the other group of robots, and asked nonchalantly, “Soooooo. What exactly is all this fighting about? And why here, on Earth?” He sounded almost as though he knew the answer already. The leader of this team crouched down to the Doctor and introduced himself.

    “I am Optimus Prime, leader of the Autobots. We come from the planet Cybertron, a planet of metal that has run out of energy. We began searching for other sources on other worlds, but some of us wanted to take energy from inhabited worlds, by force. We…”

    “Sorry to interrupt, but I get the picture. Those blokes behind me are trying to steal all the Earth’s energy, whereas you are tryng to stop them and/or find peaceful alternatives. Right. Which means I’m entirely in the right if I do something like this.”

    As he said that last sentence, he extended his Sonic Screwdriver and pointed it at the Decepticons in general. Before any of them could stop him, he fired off a large blast of sound that knocked most of the Decepticons out cold.
    “All right, tie broken. I suggest (he turned to the remaining Decepticons) that you guys retreat and let me retrieve my ship. You lost this round.”

    The Decepticons stood still.

    “I said GO!”

    They went.

    The Autobots, who had no idea what to think, turned to Prime. Prime, who had been watching the Decepticons retreating, turned back to the Doctor.
    “I expect the Decepticons to build up an immunity to that,” the Autobot leader said, calmly. “Soundwave is a master of sonic technology, he’ll install dampers. Regardless, we thank you for your help. The question is, how did you get here?”

    “Weelll, that’s something of a long story. If you could retrieve my ship (he gestured to the blue box) -and carefully, I have a friend in there with me- and take us back to your base, we can sit down and talk.”
    “Tracks, go get his ship,” instructed Optimus.

    Tracks raised his browguard. “What could two humans possibly be doing in a small, wooden box?” Prime glared at him, but over secure Autobot frequencies, Ratchet, Gears, and Sunstreaker sent “lols” Tracks’ way.

    END CHAPTER 1!
    *Yes, in DW over TF, Frenzy is Blue, Rumble is Red.
    And yes, Tracks' character is going to be... heavily inspired by a certain DW fan favorite. I think I can handle it, though.
     
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    Need thread retitling

    Okay, I should have another update soon (it'll be edited into this post), but there's something important I need to do. I need to change the thread title to A: reflect my new title and B: make it clear that I've actually written something. I changed it in the edits of the first post, but they won't take. Help? Is a mod required?
     
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    Update Time! Chapter 2!

    Update Update Update FUNFUNFUN!

    2 Hours Later

    "Martha? Martha, wake up..."
    Martha Jones, medical student, awoke within the Tardis. The first thing she saw was the Doctor's face looking down at hers. She wondered, for a moment, if she was awake yet. Her uncertainty, however, was almost immidiately torn away.

    "Oh, very good," said the Doctor, promptly getting up and helping Martha to her feet. "We've crashed. Into a parallel reality. Fortunately, the sequence you started converted and saved some of the Tardis' power. Within a day or two we'll be ready to head back to our universe..."
    Before the Doctor could finish, Martha suddenly snapped wide awake.

    "Parallel universe? Are you joking with me? What about that energy signature you were chasing? And... how parallel?"
    "Yes; No; I think it's somewhere nearby; and not quite. Martha, regardless of what you see outside, say nothing. Make no assumptions."

    "Why, what's out there? A universe where it rains biscuts, there's world piece, and my parents are still together?" Though sarcastic, she seemed hopeful.
    "Not exactl..." Before the Time Lord could finish his explanation, Martha opened the Tardis doors to take a look. "Oh, you'll find out - in exactly 3... 2... 1..."
    Right on cue, Martha turned left, and saw the very last thing she ever thought would be there.
    "No. Way. This can't be real. You're..."
    The 30-foot robot only a few yards away gently introduced himself.
    "I am Optimus Prime, leader of the Autobots here on Earth. Not to sound egotistical, but I take it you've heard of us?"
    "Oh, Mr. Prime, sir, you have NO idea..."

    Martha turned to go back to the Tardis and ask the Doctor what in the world was going on, but she found him standing not three feet behind her, hands in the pockets of his beige overcoat, and with a small smile on his face.
    "We've heard a lot about you, indeed," he interjected, before motioning to Martha to come back into the Tardis.

    Once inside, he began to explain.
    "A long time ago, at least for me, the Time Lords made travel between parallel worlds common, easy. One of those universes most commonly visited was called the Land of Fiction. It sort of... spiraled around our "prime" reality, occasionally intersecting it. Any ideas or characters or worlds that were, at the time, promenient in enough minds in our universe would manifest there. Sherlock Holmes, Hercule Poirot, King Arthur, you get the gist. it looks to me that, since the destruction of Gallifrey, the Land has begun to fray into numerous universes based on individual works. It looks like this one first met ours sometime around 1984. We haven't just fallen into an alternate universe, Martha. We've crashed into an alternate multiverse. And so has someone - or something - else."

    Da-na-naa-nah-na!
    Tardis-to-Decepticon-Symbol-Flip

    Starscream was alone in a deep underwater cave, far from the Decepticon headquarters.
    "It is I, Starscream! Your friend and ally!" the Decepticon sceeched. "I bring news of the man in the Blue Box!"

    Suddenly, several human-sized figures appeared out of the shadows. Starscream bent down to talk to them.

    "You have seen the Doctor?" asked one of the figures, its voice devoid of emotion.

    "Indeeed, friend. And he has allied with the Autobots. His sonic weapon drove us off, but we had been winning the fight, thanks to your... secret enhancements."

    "You must destroy him. I trust that your auditory specialist has constructed a means of stopping the Sonic Screwdriver?"

    "Yes, Soundwave is a genius. If only he were not so loyal to Megatron..."

    "Cease your scheming for the time being. Soon you will be operating at maximum efficiency. This world's energy will be yours, and its people will be ours."

    END CHAPTER!
     

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