Delta Squad-the true heros behind the war

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  1. Rhinox007

    Rhinox007 Liquid Fire

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    This is a little project of mine. I got this idea a few months ago, and now I'm starting it. But I'm first going to wait for the reactions, to see wether I have to continue or not. All characters don't excist in the Transformers Universe so I am going to post Bios if I'm continuing. But trough my bussy school live I have decided to ask if someone wants to be my partner in wrighting this story. If you are intrested wright an own chapter for this story and I will decide who shall be my partner. And whit that pm we will discuse some rules for our partnership. Then if I decided, we will send each other the chapters and will adjust were nescesary. The deadline for the candidates is next week tueday morning. I shall let you know who is the winner on this thread and with a pm. Now enough information, enjoy the delta squad:

    Delta Squad: The Heros behind the war

    The Beginning:

    We were born in battle,
    we shall die in war.
    The spear is my weapon,
    Logic is my way…

    This ound came over the hills of a dessert planet. There was nobody nor something, on this secluded planet.

    We shall not stop,
    before they yell.
    We will continue,
    ‘till their spark rests in my hand.

    On top of the hill appeared a Figure, holding a spear. A few seconds after him others joined him to. They all seemed to sing at once.

    We are the Delta Squad,
    we are invinceble,
    Decepticons are the enemy,
    but they are no match.

    A flag carrier followed his compagnions, on his flag stood the Autobot symbol. After him another flag carrier appeared, he carried a flag with their one symbol. A giant blue triangle, with a red orb in it.

    The Delta squad,
    The honorful troop.
    We are the saviors of the galaxy,
    Turn your back ‘Con.
    You will not rule,
    Cause we are the Deltas!!!


    ‘That’s enough boys, or do you want that the beasts of this owful planet hear us.’ Souned a metalic voice.
    ‘They can try, but they wont succeed, that’s what I tell you.’ Replied another one. With these words some spider-cat looking creatures came running towards them.
    ‘Now do you have what you want?’ said a smaller robot.
    ‘Shut up Smacker. Hellbringer, Death Shock, Fire Flare, grab the nets. The rest, Tri Ball formations!!!’ shouted the captain. The other tree placed themself on a line while the pointed ones grab a large electronic net. Armada Convoy, the leader, placed himself in the middle of the action. He lifted his arm and one of the animals jumped. Armada grabed him. ‘Deltas, attack!!!’ The net was thrown and the others fired. ‘Transform Decepti brat, or yopu will end like your friends,’ said Armada with great pleasure.
    The beast transformed and it spoke a message: ‘I just am a messenger of the great leader, even greater than Megatron. He is almost ready to show his true form, and then, bye bye Auobots.’
    ‘Bring this to your leader, the war is lost. We just have to put out the trash, you can forget your leadership. We will always be there. Smacker, get the Gaya-catapult.’ Armada laughed and the messenger started to pay resitence.

    The group sat round a campfire. They didn’t need the fire, but they wanted to give their optics a rest. From the left sat Armada, Smacker, Hellbringer, Death Shock, Fire Flare, Thunder, Lightspeed, Gamma-Jones. Everyone thought it was a strange name for a robot, but they didn’t mentioned it. They were telling storys about their time with other squadrons. Everybody had told one and finally they came by Armada. ‘So what’s your story chief?’
    ‘I’ve never told one before, but cause you all are so brave to concuer the past, I shall do it to. In my first years as a soldier I was placed in the front lines of the early war. I have seen many things that you won’t see in your life. I entered with my brother and father. It didn’t take long before they met their devil. I was shocked, I didn’t left my tent for a month. Then I went back to war filled with anger, I killed an entire infantry. There I got my nickname, Blood Taker.’
    It went silent for a minute. ‘Then I was reassigned to this place with you guys.’
    ‘I didn’t know, I’m sorry’ said Thunder who asked in the first place. ‘Never mind,’ Armada replied, suddenly a Data-con fell down from the sky. It went online and a hologram came out. ‘This is Ultra Magnus speaking, the war has started over again. Delta Squad, you’re new task is to infiltrate in the Decepticon base to kill Dark Shadow, the King of teh Decepticons, the leaedr of Megatron.’ Armada closed his eyes, ‘farewell world, the end is near. It’s starting over again…’
     
  2. Rhinox007

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    I believe that there's no one interested?
     
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    Since nobody send something in, I will stop this thread
     
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    Rhinox007 Liquid Fire

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    So, I understand nobody's interested in coöporation. But, I think there's much potential in this story so I'm going to continue this, on weakly bases. If there's someone interested eventually, pm me.
    I already typed some bio's, none of them are complete, but, they will be completed as the story continues:

    Armada Convoy:

    Function: Leader of the Delta Squad
    Vehicle Mode:Cybertronian Flying Tank or The C.F.T.(tank mode, jet mode, combined mode)
    Weapons: 2 missile launchers on the shoulders, fusion rifle, jets, laser sword, giant tank canon, laser spear
    Strength/weaknesses: trough his past his spark turned into stone. He saw his family die trough the hands of Decepticons. His personality is hard, but just. His alt mode isen’t the fastes but well the heaviest armored. Most of the time he will not use his strongest weapon to protect his comerades. His only weakness, when he’s reminded of his brother en father he will almost shutdown.

    Smacker:

    Function: front line soldier
    Vehicle mode: Desert Patrol Vehicle
    Weapons: Light Handgun, net shooter, EMP granades
    Strength/weaknesses: He’s always a bit enthousiastic, what could get him killed. Trough his light armor he’s the fastest of the group. He will always apologize against his friends.

    Hellbringer:

    Function: second in comand
    Vehicle mode: 40 ton tank transporter “Dragon Wagon”
    Weapons: Giant shoulder canon, underarm blades, chest rockets
    Strength/weaknesses:

    Death Shock:

    Function: Strategist, weapon specialist
    Vehicle mode: Giant armored army vehicle (amfibetic)
    Weapons: Chest, shoulders and arm guns, laser lans, dualswords
    Strength/weaknesses:

    Fire Flare:

    Function: Scout
    Vehicle Mode: Black Hawk Jet (Cybertron Form + extra jets)
    Weapons: rocket gun, schokwave gun
    Strength/weaknesses:

    Thunder:

    Function: aerial striker
    Vehicle Mode: F-117 Nighthawk stealth fighter (Cybertronian form)
    Weapons: rocket launcher, stealth bombs, laser guided rockets
    Strength/weaknesses:

    Lightspeed:

    Function: aerial striker
    Vehicle mode: SR-71 Blackbird stealth plane (Cybertronian form)
    Weapons: laser crossbow, neo energy pulse charged gun
    Strength/weaknesses:

    Gamma-Jones:

    Function: Paramedic
    Vehicle Mode: Cybertron hoovering ambulance
    Weapons: Nobody ever saw him using weapons
     
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    Rhinox007 Liquid Fire

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    It's maybe a little slow and boring, but it's just the start of this story, still working out some ideas, expect more soon.

    Chapter One: Back To Cybertron

    On planet NHPO-53 The Delta Squad was very, very quiet. They just received a message from Ultra Magnus, the right hand of Optimus Prime, that they had to infiltrate into the enemy base. The lore of the Decepticons, the throne of Dark Shadow. But there was one problem, nobody knowed where their camp is. The camp fire was almost extinuished, when Armada Convoy stood up.

    “Come on men, you’ve heard what Ultra Magnus said. It’s time for our mission,” he turned his back and transformed. His legs bowed and clicked together as jets, his chest clicked over his head and his arms turned into guns. Wings flapped up from his back. Armada was transformed in a C.F.T., or a Cybertronian Flying Tank.

    “But sir, we don’t know were their hiding place is. In fact nobody knows,” Hellbringer protested against his captain’s order.

    “Yeah boss, Helly is wright.”
    “Shut up Smacker, this is something between the boss and me,” Smacker bowed his head and mumbeled something about apologies.

    “I know that Hell’, and that’s why we’re going to look for it.” Armada Convoy didn’t want to discuss anymore and took off. The rest transformed and followed him.

    ***

    On their way to Sky Linx, Smacker went driving besides Hellbringer. They didn’t say a word for a couple of minutes. Death Shock stood on Hell’s backspan. He growed tired of the silence.

    “Yo, Smacker, if there’s something on your mind, than say it. I’m growing impatience of this stupid silence,” Hellbringer sliped and made a whole donut in the sand.
    “Death Shock, get off, I want to talk with Smacker.”
    “Can’t you do it without that I have to drive?”
    “Get off!,” Hellbringer transformed and the lazy Autobot fell of his backspan.
    “Alwright, alwright. Jeeze you don’t have to get angry on me.” Death Shock drove off and folowed the others while Smacker also transformed and start walking with Hellbringer. The lieutenant of The Delta Squad was a lot bigger than Smacker. But their friendship was perfect. The fact that Hell’ was higher in range didn’t interfere with their comunication. The little Autobot always had a lot of respect for his friend.

    “So, what did you wanted to say to me?”
    “You’ve noticed that Convoy is a little.. not himself?”
    “Yeah, since that message came, he’s different. Like he’s someone else.”
    Hellbringer stopped walking and grabed Smacker by the shoulders.

    “Listen friend, what I’m going to say now stays between us ok. I think that Armada sees this as a chance to take revenge on his fallen brother and father. What ever happens, we have to keep an eye on him,” Hellbringer’s gaze was certain. He was wright, Armada could be dangerous in this state.

    “But how are we going to do that? If I understand everything wright, there will be a battle soon. We can’t control him when we’re figthing Hell’.”
    “You’ve got a point. But I’m second in command, and that means that I’m almost always on his side. But when it gets rough we’re going to need someone who follows him everywhere without being seen,” Smacker turned himself to the disapearing group, he looked at the stealthflyers. If there was someone good enough to do this, then it was one of their friends: Thunder or Lightspeed.

    “Do you think what I think friend?” asked Hellbringer.
    “yeah, Thunder or Lightspeed. But wait a click, they’ll probably be in the fight to.”
    “Yes, that’s a problem, then we have to find someone else. But who?”
    They transformed and joined the group again. Nobody but Death Shock knowed about their conversation.

    ***

    The Delta Squad arrived at the meeting point with Sky Linx, the giant Autobot wasen’t their yet. Everyone transformed and waited for Sky Linx, nobody said a word. The silence was painfull. Now everybody had noticed the change in behavior of Armada Convoy. Gamma-Jones walked over to Armada but Hellbringer stopped him while shakking his head.

    “Thunder, Lightspeed, I want you two to take off already. Tell the boss of the library that we’re coming. Also tell him not to give away all the books of ancient lores. They may come in handy”, the two Autobots nodded and left. Smacker and Hellbringer looked at each other. Smacker shaked his head and walked over to his boss.

    “What the hell is wrong with you boss? Why are you acting like this. It isen’t you’re normal behavior.”
    “Acting like what soldier?”
    “You know what I’m talking about,” Smacker was throwing with his arms like he was arguing about life and death.

    “I’m ‘acting’ like usual. And another thing,” Armada turned around and brought his face to the same level as Smacker’s

    “If you ever yell at me again, I will take actions.” A sound of a landing plane interrupted the conversation. It was Sky Linx. The enormous jet mode was perfect for transporting Transformers. A door slided open and Armada Convoy got in. Smacker mumbeled something about apologies.. again. It took a few seconds before everyone followed. Armada went to the cockpit.

    “Sky Linx, destination Cybertron, Main Library.”
    “Affirmative, Hyper Space or normal speed?”
    “Galactic travel, I want to be there as soon as possible. If were seen, open fire and leave Hyper Space for a Galactic Warp.”
    “Prepare for take off,” Sky Linx closed the doors and prepared some adjustments for the trip.

    ***

    Gamma-Jones sat next to Death Shock, they both were surprised of the fight between Smacker and Armada. They’ve never saw something like this before. They understood the question off their friend Smacker. Armada was acting strange. He wasen’t himself lately. Gamma-Jones wished they never had received the job.

    “What do you think were going to do in the library Death Shock?”
    “I think were going to do some research. The boss mentioned something about books. So he’s going to look for some clues where the base’s hidden. And that’s the perfect oppurtunity for me to think out a strategy.”
    “Yes yes, true. But we does he wants to travel in Hyper Space?”
    “He wants to be home fast, what else would be a reason?”
    “Yes, you’re wright. Maybe I can pick up some medical equipment.”
    “Do that,” Death Shock stood up and went to Fire Flare.

    “So Fire Flare, was there actually something interesting on that planet?”
    “No not really…”

    End of Chapter One

    Now it's your choice, a chapter of The Delta Squad in the cybertronian library or a chapter about the Decepticons
     
  6. bryan_too

    bryan_too is Deadpool

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    I think making a change to the 'cons would be nice since most of the story is based on the Delta and the Autobots. 'Cons!:D 
     
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    Then it will be the 'Cons!
     
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    Chapter 2: Plans revealed

    Somewhere on Cybertron-

    It was dark in the hallway, no lights, no sound. The place seemed deserted. A door opened and a dark figure stepped in the hall. Carrying something, he walked further. The package seemed to be alive. The figure kicked against the bag.

    “Quiet, the boss is meditating. We may not disturb him.”

    The package stopped moving. Again there wasen’t any sound. The two arrived at a big door. He knocked. No response, until a smaal portch opened.

    “Name?” asked a rough voice.
    “Megatron, leader of,” a heavy voice interrupted him.
    “You’re maybe a leader of you’re group Megatron, but not the leader of the Decepticons! How dare you to claim that you are! I have eyes and ears where you’ll never suspect!”
    “One day I will be the leader, the Decepticons belong to me!” Megatron answered wit a yell.
    “An entire army isen’t a possession! If you keep believing that you’ll never come even close!”

    Megatron growled, he knew it was true. As long as Neowave sat on the throne, he wouldn’t have a chance.

    “I forgive you one more chance Megatron. Use it wisely. Why did you came here. You know I didn’t want to be disturbed.”
    “A scout has returned from the dessert-planet, he’d encountered Autobots.”
    “Did he reported to you?”
    “No sir, he only wanted to report to you.”
    “A wise choice. Release him out of the bag.”

    Megatron did as ordered. In fact the scout was a predacon, that faction always coöperated with the ‘Cons. The beast crowled and bowed for his master. The half-spider-cat transformed and bowed again.

    “Sir, permission to speak frealy?”
    “Only if it has to do something with your mission.”
    “The Autobots have left the dessert planet, they think they won the war. I’ve heard from some of my fellow-preds that they stil name you Dark Shadow. But I relly can’t understand why it is good that they don’t know your real name?”

    A shadow approached Megatron and the pred. A leg turned vissible. The transformer at the door walked outside and closed the only entrance. Two lights turned on and showed the head of their boss. It was filled with scars and symbols. A crown of some sort gold metal stood on his head.

    “That’s just the most important part of my plan. If they run my ‘name’ trough the databases, they will find a very, very old transformer that died several eons ago. They will turn crazy if they can’t find us. Now, I have a new mission for you. Go to Earth’s moon, there will be an energon mine. One of the guards will give you a package, deliver it to me.”
    “Right away sir, I’ll leave immediatly.”

    The pred left the room. Neowave stepped closer, inch by inch Megatron felt fear growing. Something he never felt before. The King raised his arm, grabbing Megatron’s chin.

    “Now you’re punishment Megatron, I have something perfect in mind,” Neowave laughed, a loud, irritating laugh.

    ***

    Megatron sat in his jet, thinking of a sceem to throw of Neowave. Everything went wrong in his life. Even he has a chance to become something important, he yells at The King. Now he was ordered to distract Optimus Prime and his team. They should be somewhere on Cybertron. Somewhere in Iacon. He was allowed to make a team. So he brought his most loyal soldiers. The Seekers, Shockwave, Soundwave and his cassets, Blackarachnia en Mirage. He decided to do what Neowave said, but not for long.

    “Starscream, make a fire or something, distract everyone. I’ll go inside the council and search for Prime.”
    “Yes sir. How much fire to you suggest?”
    “I want it to be seen from Earth.”
    “Gladly sir.”

    The Seekers left the ship. The other Decepticons watch their coleges. Hoping if they were allowed to make fun to.
     
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    Chapter 3: Revenge Isen’t Sweet

    The trip took long, the only sound was Sky Linx’s engines. Armada sat alone in front. Smacker and Hellbringer sat together, a few meters away from their boss. Nobody dared to talk, not even to their own. It was very quiet. Armada Convoy didn’t moved a bit, only when the beeper went off. They approached Cybertron. Sky Linx landed on the correct spot. The boss stepped out and went immediatly to the library. The rest thanked Sky Linx and followed their leader. In the library Death Shock went to the lybrarian, an onsentinal robot.
    “All the books, or data-cons about old Decepticon lairs.”
    “Section B-45, kwadrant CY”, answered the metallic voice without emotion.
    He noded and left the robot lone. The books were actually some sort of chips. He inserted a few in his memory bank and received all the info within the second.
    “Nothing usefull, those bases are already cleaned out”, he inserted another chip

    Gamma-Jones didn’t went to the library, in stead he went to the infermery. There he saw Ratchet. An old friend of him. Ratchet was higher in rank than him.The only time when he showed that was on duty? They saluted. The usual ‘nurse’ greating: the hand on the chest, and the other one in front of the head.
    “Already back Gamma?”
    “Yessury Ratchet, the planet was really desserted, besides some Pred’s.”
    “Nice to hear. So what are you doing her. I don’t suppose you’re here to help me with some of the ‘Bots.”
    “No, I’m comming to collect some stuff for my next mission. I’m going to need.”
    “Take all you want. It’s better to take to much than not having it at all.”
    “Nicely said. Now, take good care, and see you next time?”
    “yeah, old friend, next time.”
    Gamma-Jones took his stuff and left.

    Hellbringer folowed Armada, he had send Smcker out on a private mission. Something bnot to difficult. A visit to his old friends, he would need it. There he was, Armada Convoy, checking some chips and Data-cons. Sometimes his boss said something like ‘interesting’ or ‘usefull’. Hell’ placed himself on a table. Observing his boss. He acted a bit to strange lately.
    “Wait a sec, this is the far most interesting thing I’ve ever seen!” sounded Armada’s voice.
    Hell’ jumped up and ran towards his boss.
    “What is it”, he didn’t mined blowing his cover behind the racks.
    “So, you did follow me, I shall forgive you ones. I found an article about a base that isen’t swapped yet.”
    “And why is that so interesting. There are many unswapped bases in the entire universe.”
    “You don’t understand Hellbringer. This base was Trypticon, you remember him falling by the hands of Primacon. Well, he was restored but he couldn’t leave the area where he was. So in a secret operation of the Decepticons, Bruticus and Devastator, made some sort of transportation device which teleported them back here on Cybertron. Nobody noticed. But for there own cause they deactivated his spark. Then everyone asumed trough the disactivation of Trypticon, that the Decepticons left him. They didn’t swp the base becuse it was unnecesary”, Armada turned silent for a moment. He sighed and continued.
    “I think we have to look there.”
    “Why, I think Dark Shadow is a smart guy and would hide himself far away from us.”
    “No no, he wants us to think that. If we would search for him, we would leave the planet, so he could reactivate Trypticon and take over the planet.”
    “I understand, I’ll gatter the troops.”

    There they are, at the entrance of Trypticon. A giant base, just like a city. It seemed deserted, but everybody knows, Transformers are more than meets the eye. The Delta Squad entered with there weapons ready. In their most used formation, the Delta Triangle, they watched each other’s backs. They almost covered the entire robot, but they saw nothing. Suddenly, next to the main chamber they heared a noice. An awful scream, they’ve never heared something like that before. At the end of the hall-way they saw two red glowing eyes. Another scream, and the lights went off. The eyes came closer. A voice came true the intercom.
    “So you’ve found my base Delta’s, see if you can find my pet in the dark.” A murderous laugh and the ‘pet attacked.

    End of part 1


    Comments and critics are welcome, it means a lot to me. You're opinion counts, it could improve the story!
     
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    Now, a question for the readers, who's attacking the Delta's? This is some sort of a competition. Whoever answers the question wright will receive a 'present': the winner of the competition may choose out of this prises:
    - a look into the future of the Delta's,
    - a drawing of Armada Convoy, or any other Delta memeber,
    - the last coice is: a drawing of al the members of the Delta's
     
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    Sorry for the wait, the next part of chapter 3 will be up within a day, certainly.
     
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    As promissed, here's the next part of chapter 3. The story has finally begon!

    Chapter three - part 2

    “Night vision everyone!” shouted Armada against his team in the dark.
    “We don’t have that upgrade, we didn’t received the forms!” shouted Hellbringer back.
    “Then use your lights fools!”
    The Deltas listened to their boss, and putted on their lights. It wasen’t much, but enough to see the incoming threat. A giant unknown beast with dangerous red eyes. Smacker went to the front of the group and start firing. He missed, the beast was to fast for him. It jumped over him and smacked him away with it’s tail. The little Delta crashed into the wall, he went in stasis lock. The ‘beast’ had more power than Armada expected. Fire Flare, Death Shock and Gamma-Jones stepped in front of their fallen friend.

    “Jones, take him away, make sure you get him to a safe place. We will keep this thing bussy.” Ordered Death Shock.
    Gamma-Jones noded and left with his friend. Fire Flare and the strategist fired at their attacker. The beast easily evaded the shots and went straight for Armada Convoy. When the attacker jumped Armada ducked and punched it in the stummic place. Everyone surrounded it. The thing transformed, and became larger than the Deltas.

    “That was your last hit Autobot,” growled the Decepticon.
    “Oh ya, tell that to our rockets!” Thunder, Fire Flare and Lightspeed jumped over Armada and transformed into their jet modes. They fired everything they’ve got.

    “I hope that was enough,” said Fire Flare with a smile on his face.
    “You hope so Autobots, my guardian is well equiped with different kinds of armor,” said a voice over the intercom. The voice laughed.

    The Deltas backed of when they heard a screeching yell. The Decepticon stepped out of the dustcloud wich was made by the rockets. Not e-ven a scratch was made. The so called ‘guardian’ transformed back to beast mode, but this time, a rocket came out of his back.

    “Wait a minute,” said Armada Convoy in a rush while pointing his tankgun.
    “Thats an upgraded version of Transmetal 2 Cheetor! From the Beast Wars, hows that possible?”
    Cheetor laughed, and fired with his rocket. Fire Flare and Lightspeed were hit. Hellbringer and Death Shock jumped in front of them.

    “Death Shock hold him off, I’m going strength mode,” Hellbringer his robot mode changed a bit, his arm became equiped with hydraulique pressure pomps. Death Shock smiled.

    “My new experiment.”
    Both attacked the new Cheetor with all their force. Cheetor gave ressistance wath made the Deltas task even harder.

    “Armada, get your big boss ass towards The Decepticon King, and end this parody. Maximals attacking Autobots my ass.” A few punches into Cheetor’s back and the cat turned angry.
    Armada Convoy didn’t mined being talked to like that, he was wright. He started to run. Fire Flare and Lightspeed got back up and fought back to.


    ***

    It didn’t took long before the Delta Squad leader found the enemy. Dark Shadow, a.k.a. Neowave. He sat on his throne, smiling, waiting. The giant crown on the haed was a contradiction. The meaning of crown and the wishes of the Decepticons weren’t the same. A crown was noble, just, and good. And the Decepticon cause… pure evil. The evil one stood up and walked around with his hands folded behind his back. Armada growed tired of the waiting. He grabed his laser spear and throwed it before Neowave’s feet. Neowave looked at it and pulled it out of the ground.

    “Interesting structure. But I’m afraid you have to do better than this.” He cracked the spear and threw the pieces back. Armada watched in fair. He always used this weapon in combat, never it had failed slicing an enemy in half. So easily broken. Other strategy plan. Closer combat.

    “Your days of terror end here Dark Shadow. Right here, right now.”
    “Hmmph, you still use that old name. Dark Shadow, it isen’t even worthy my place at the throne. Let’s see what you can do. Bring it,” The King transformed in a destruction vehicle of high class. With several pulse cannons and rocket launchers.

    “Meet your end!” Neowave attacked with unseen precission. Armada had problems with evading the attacks. Neowave transformed back to robot mode. Grabing his light weapons and storming upon Armada.

    “That was just a warming-up. Can you still handle me?”
    “I’m not Ultra Magnus,” Armada growled and attacked his enemy. Wit his laser sword he cut off the loop of Neowave’s guns. The King wasen’t surprised and grabed Convoy at the neck and lifted him. A knife clicked out of the Decepticons arm. Neowave stabbed Armada in the chest, he missed his the spark with a few inches. Armada fell to the ground.

    “Actually, I’m dissapointed Autobot. I expected more from you. But let me tell you this. I know who killed your family,” The King placed his foot on top off the scratch. Armada Convoy svcreeched in pain. But he was well awared of what Neowave said.

    “One.. of yo.. your Decepticons.. killed them… and I will.. not stop until I.. found them,” he tried to lift the foot of his chest. Neowave laughed.

    “You don’t get it, do you. I’ve killed them wit my own hands. And now, I’ll put you offline!” Neowave lifted his powerfulst weapon. A light came out of it. At the moment Neowave wanted to fire Armada’s team came in the room and fired at Neowave with all of their weapons. The Decepticons King was blast away trough the surprise attack. Hellbringer grabed his boss. The entire team ceased fire and left Trypticon. They all ran outside when the giant Transformer started to move.

    “What’s that?” asked Thunder.
    “Great another problem. I think Dark Shadow is activating Trypticon.” Answered Death Shock. He was wright, Trypticon came back to life, making a pat of destruction. A voice over the arm-comunicaters: “All Autobots, retreat from the Cybertron. This is an imediate order of Optimus Prime himself. Regroup at earth.”

    The Delta squad gazed at each other, this meant they’ve lossed the war and Cybertron. Their home. But they had another problem, their team wasen’t complete. Gamma-Jones and Smacker left the menace sooner than the rest. The team reached an escape pod and left the planet.

    ***

    Their sat Neowave, pried of his victory, no Autobot on the planet. Trypticon back to life. His plan was forfilled. He laughed even harder.

    “Cybertron is mine!”


    Comments and Critics are welcome

    EDIT:Sorry, but I had to make that joke about Ultra Magnus:D . If someone had any questions about Cheetor attacking The Delta Squad, it will all be explained
     
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    Rhinox007 Liquid Fire

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    Well, I had some spare time, so I (tried) to draw Armada Convoy
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    Ok, the legs are a bit small, and one of the arms is messed up, but hey, nobody's perfect:d I'll post more drawings when the story continues. The next one will be Hellbringer
     
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    Here's 4! Actually it's fun to write such a story :) 

    Chapter 4: Delta Squad incomplete!

    The war on Cybertron had end. The Decepticons have won so far. The surprise attack of the mighty Megatron had interupt the meeting of the Autobot leaders. They were helpless, not possible to fight back. So Optimus Prime ordered to retreat from their home planet, planet Cybertron. They had to regroup and once more take refuge on planet Earth. The planet of the humans. Well, that was the plan. But it didn’t went the way they wanted. The entire Autobot alliance seperated in space, seperate amongst the stars. Knowing that they’ve lost. Lost their sense of pride, lost their home, lost their friends…

    Being part of this group was the Delta Squad. A secret group that was ordered to infiltrate in the Decepticon base and take out their real leader. The Decepticon King, Dark Shadow, or his real name, Neowave. But Armada Convoy, the leader of the Delta’s, was overtaken by an emotion. An emotion that was created trough the friendship with humans. Revenge, fear, anger. Armada fell pray to this emotion. His wish to kill Neowave for his crimes, the crimes on his family, father and brother. Armada was so filled with anger and desire for revenge that he lost his mind. In this state he couldn’t resist the huge power of Neowave. He almost lost his life.

    Now, on this very moment. Trypticon is unleashed, destroying Autobot City. The Decepticons now are the owners of Cybertron and his precious energon. The Delta Squad, a part of it, is travelling to Earth. Armada Convoy is in critical state. If he isen’t being treated by a medic like Gamma-Jones or Ratchet, or any other medic. He’s doomed to go offline.Hellbringer, the second in command, now the leader, is taking care of Armada’s job.The rest of the shuttle’s travalers: Death Shock, Thunder, Lightspeed, Fire Flare are waiting in fear. Gamma-Jones and Smacker are still on Cybertron, hiding from the scout drones. Thinking of a plan to abandon their home for eternity.

    Here starts the actual story of The Delta Squad, the true hero’s behind the war

    The sky was dark, no cloud, no shuttle. Only drones. Giant, metal-colored drones. Scouting the planet’s surface for remaining Autobot forces. Alone in the dark sits Gamma-Jones. He and Smacker found an empty house. It was good enough for a few cycles. But they wouldn’t stay for long. It will not take long before the drones entered the building. Jones treated Smacker. He wasen’t injured bad, but good enough to be taken out with one shot. Smacker didn’t had the strongest armor of the planet, but his pride was good enough for two. A searching light came trough the window and went over Jones head. He didn’t moved a bit. The light stopped and a strange sound followed. The medic feared the worst, he lifted Smacker and left the building. At the back their was a well hidden door. First he looked and observed, noone could see them. He transformed and drove off.

    ***

    They both drove up a mountain. They heared voices so Gamma-Jones and Smacker transformed to obot mode. Smacker was better now and could take care of himslef. They sneaked further up and heared some talking.
    “…ready. Did you finished your task?”
    “Yes sir, the Nega-Energon is collected from the tubes. It can now be used for our project.”
    “Good, Neowave will be glad to hear that. Now, your next task…”
    The two Delta’s went a bit down again. They gazed at each other. Nega-Energon? What the hell?
    “What’s Nega-Energon Jones?”
    “I don’t know, I’ve never heard of it. Now quiet.”
    They sneaked back up and started listening again. It were two giant Omnicons. There was a small elevator shaft behind them. Sometimes the elevator came up with a basket of black gems.
    “Ok, that wouldn’t be a problem.”
    “After that you may get Optimus Primal out of the cryo chamber. Make sure he doesn’t escape.”
    “Yes sir,” the smallest Omnicon left. The other one grabed the basket of black gems and went the other direction.
    “When this project is finished, we can go to Earth and use the Nega-Energon there.”
    Gamma-Jones and Smacker now went to the elevator shaft. There was no one in sight. Another basket came up. Jones grabed a cristal and ran a diagnostic scan.
    “Well what is it?” asked Smacker.
    “It has elements from pure energon, but it’s nothing like that. It has a high level of radioactive material and gamma-readings. There’s hnothing about this new substance in my data bank.”
    “Why were they talking about Optimus Primal, wasen’t he another Maximal. And who’s Neowave?”
    “Not another one, thé Maximal. He was their leader, the strongest of all. But I thougt he was lost in the core of Cybertron to reformat the planet, and I don’t know who Neowave is. But the most important question is: What are they going to do with Primal?”
    Both Delta’s gazed at each other. They had to find a way out of here, and report to Armada.

    ***

    The shuttle flew trough space, silently evading the stars and planets. Heading for destination Earth. In side the capsule it was silent. Nobody talked, they all sat around a table with a body on.
    “Will he be okay?” was one of the questions heared before departing.
    “I don’t know sonny,” was the most common anwser.
    The body was Armada Convoy, stasis lock…
    Hellbringer came in the chamber, not even thinking, just moving. He looked at his boss, for one moment, it looked like the transformer.. cried.
    Not able to feel any emotion, they grow more and more sentient. They grew emotions.
    “So this is how it feels to,.. to be scared,” said Thunder.
    “Yes sonny, this is what feeling is.” Replied Death Shock. He never was a speaker, but now, his vocal procesor didn’t had the time to rest.
    “Will he be better soon?” asked Lightspeed.
    “He will be better when we reach Earth.” Said Hellbringer in the dark.
    “If we only had Gamma-Jones, then he would have a fair chance.”
    “No Fire Flare, he already had his fair chance.” Answered Hellbringer to Thunder.
    “When?”
    “When Dark Shadow stabed him.”
    It went silent, again. Hellbringer left the room again. Death Shock went after him. The cockpit was cold and dark. The only light came from the buttons on the control panel.
    “Everyone feels sorry for him. You don’t have to overreact.”
    “It isen’t that Death Shock. I’m the leader now, but I can’t promise them what Armada promised them.”
    “You’ll do good.”
    “Hmmph, we have to land somewhere, our energon supply is almost empty.”
    “There’s a mine just ahead.”
    “Then we will land there,” Hellbringer inserted some coördinates and laid back again.

    ***

    Everybody but Death Shock got out of the shuttle. He was going to stand guard. Hellbringer send Thunder, Lightspeed and Fire Flare on a scouting mission. He was going to collect the energon the needed. The mine was abandoned, only energon was left.
    “Where are they?” his voice echoed trough the mine. A growl answered his question.
    “Oh no, not again. Will this ever stop.”
    Another roar came from down the tunnel. Hellbringer activated his strength-mode again.
    A transmetal T-rex came in sight. It was Beast Wars Megatron! An upgraded version.
    “Who dares to trespass my domain?”
    Hellbringer stepped back, this was too much to handle now. He drove off, as fast as possible. When he left the mine, Megatron was still behind him. Hellbringer saw Death Shock, the weapon specialist waved and immediatly saw what the problem was.
    “What the hell have you done?”
    “Nothing Death Shock! Call the others for an aerial strike!”
    “Already done.”
    After a few clicks the three Autobot phlanes attacked the prehistoric Megatron. He couldn’t resist the attack, it was massive. Death Shock came closer, a black flued ran out of the body.
    “What is this substance? It has the same elements as energon. But at the other side it doesn’t resembles it. It’s something else. I don’t like the feeling about this Hellbringer, we have to leave this place, fast.”
    Hellbringer nodded and shouted his orders. Everyone did as he ordered, they didn’t want to stay here. What Thunder, Lightspeed and Fire Flare saw wasen’t beautiful. The entire construction site of the mine was destroyed. Everywhere lay bodies. Bodies of Autobots, torn in half, or just the head or another part of the body.
     
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    Here's a drawing of Hellbringer. If you have any questions about him, just ask.
    Later on the day I will post the vehicle mode of Neowave/Dark Shadow

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    Sorry people, but I was working on chapter 5: new enemy's and my Word has some 'problems', and now everythings gone :(  stupide computer! so you'll have to wait a bit longer, a few days maximum
     
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    Just finished getting caught up...cool story man, I'll definitely keep up when I can!
     
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    Chapter 5: New enemys

    Short update, hope you enjoy

    Chapter 5: New enemy’s

    Cybertron was hovering in space. A big metal planet. No light, no motion. A giant explosion lighted the sky surounding the planet. It was Autobot City, once the home town of the Autobots, now, no more. Trypticon walked away, followed by several smaller Decepticons. On the lead of the group stood Neowave, with the crown on his head. Filled with pride and glory he stepped further. He held some data-pads, downloading every single peace of usefull information.
    “Hmmph, old information. I need new, like where are they now?”
    “Why would you want to know that sire? We’ve got the planet now. No need to follow those rebellions.” Spoke another Decepticon besides the King.
    “As long as they’re alive, they’re a threat to our civilisation. Search them, find them and annihalite them.”
    “Yes sire.” The Decepticon left off.
    Neowave walked further, thinking. He grabed another data-pad. It showed some readings, two bars were empty. The names in front of the bar were the fallen wariors: Cheetor and Megatron. He didn’t understand why the second bar was empty. But he was going to find out. Once they were reboot with Nega Energon, they were fine warriors. The characteristics of this new energon were rather interesting than amuzing. The personality change effect was interesting, very interesting.
    “Data-pad, show me the video images of the energon mine were soldier Megatron was placed.”
    The data-pad made some bleeping sounds, after a few clicks a video screen appeared. A robot entered the mine and Megatron showed up. After a short battle, Megatron went offline.
    “Delta Squad”, he growled.
    “Fire Rain, come here!”
    A robot came walking besides him and greeted him. Neowave gave him the data-pad. Fire Rain looked at it and gave it back.
    “You want me to kill those Autobots?”
    “Yes, and bring their leader with me. Assign a team of your own and present them to me.”
    “Yes sir”, he saluted again and ran off.

    ***

    Neowave sat on his trone. Waiting ‘till his soldier came back with his team. He didn’t had to wait much longer, the door opened slow. The new guardians stepped aside and three Decepticons entered. It were Fire Rain and two other, very similiar robots. It seemed twins. The three kneeled, Fire Flair lifted his head.
    “This is the team my liege. Canon and Bolt are under my command now.”
    Neowave stood up and walked over to the Canonbolt brothers. He expected them very well.
    “A robotic twin, something never was seen before on the surface of Cybertron. A great scientific discovery, but yet, they’re freaks.”
    The two brothers bowed their head even further.
    “The only thing they’re usefull for is a sceme.”
    One of them jumped up and pulled a giant gun. A light started to burn in the gun.
    “Demoleculiser ready, aim…” Fire Rain jumped between them and punched the gun away. Where the blast hit the ground their now was a big hole.
    “Perfect, that’s the spirit I want. Now go search those filty Autobots!”
    “Yes sir!” the three left.
    “Specialists in spark meltdown. Now I only have to order Megatron to follow them.”
    ***

    Megatron sat on his chair, following the space ship in front of him. The cloak device was activated so they wouldn’t be seen. Starscream stood on his side. Soundwave on the other. The seekers stood behind them.
    “What are we supposed to do sir?” asked Starscream.
    “Stake-out, boring old stake-out,” he let go a sigh.
    “Stake-out? Why can’t Neowave order an other team to do this.”
    “Because he doesn’t want us to interfere in his plans. And WHO are you to ask questions?”
    “Sorry my sir. I won’t do it again.”
    “He doesn’t want us to ruin his plans,” said some one in the back.
    Megatron jumped up and fired his gun in that direction.
    “Don’t you ever, ever hear me, say that again Shockwave!”
    The one-eyed Decepticon noded, planning his sceme in his head. Where he would throw Megatron and Neowave from the throne. Little did he know Starscream was thinking the same.
     
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    What the hell? I forgot to update in weeks. I'm very sorry for the wait. And another thing, I don't know what happened with my head, I wrote a very strange chapter, hope you like it.(new look for the chapters :D )

    Chapter 6: More Missery​



    Planet Earth, the home of the humans. A beautiful planet, filled with oceans, mountains and wide landscapes. The humans already interacted with the Autobots long before they landed this time. Many space ships and –pods landed on the surface of this blue planet. Hellbringer stepped out of his plane. Looking around. He had never been to Earth before.
    “A beautiful planet isn’t Sunny, and the best of all. No Decepticons.” Said Death Shock
    “How long will it take ‘till they find us?”
    “Since we always come to this place when we’re in trouble. I’d say.. not long.”
    “Then we need to find a medic.”
    “Copy that sunny.”
    They both left in a different direction to find what they needed. The rest of the delta Squad carried their leader to a safer, more convenient spot. Some other Autobots came closer to watch. They didn’t had the chance to ask.
    “Don’t you have somethin better to do!” yelled Lightspeed at them.
    Hellbringer came back, and saw what happened. He smiled and nodded.
    “You don’t have to raise your voice. They only want to help. Now Thunder and Fire Flare. Go see if Ratchet has some time.”
    Both noded and left. Lightspeed stayed. He gave Hellbringer a thankfull gaze. The second in command transformed and drove off, again.

    ***

    It didn’t took long before Ratchet arrived. The two Delta’s were fast in tracking. Ratchet came immediatly. He made a diagnostic scan which let him know Armada Convoy was in bad shape. The medic did some other scans also. He grabed some sort of hoze and sprayed some fluid on the leader.
    “This is one of my own inventions, medical energon. It will heal the small injuries. But for the big ones, I’ll have to bring him in stasis lock.”
    Death Shock lifted Armada on a hovering table, which flew of, direction First Aid.
    “Don’t worry, First Aid is good at this. Red Alert will be warned and the three of us will save him. You’re just in time. You do know that.”
    “Yes, we do. If he wasn’t burned on his revenge, this wouldn’t happen.”
    “Revenge? Tell me more Death Shock. This can help us”
    “Well, we were on a mission. We were supposed to bring Dark Shadow in. But The King killed Armada’s family. The only thin our could think of…”
    “I know enough. Come and see him by nightfall.”
    “We’ll do.”

    ***

    A blury mist. Armada stepped out of some tube thing. He was in a strange place. Everything changed when he looked at it. A tree changed into a giant Appollo 13 rocket. A cheetah changed into Him fighting The King ‘till death. Within a second it converted back to the cheetah, but it had wings. Suddenly he heared a voice behind his shoulder. The tube was gone. Instead stood the same rocket, but now transforming.
    “SAVE ME!!!”
    Armada Convoy ran away, the Transformer followed him and jumped in fron of him. He started to melt, saying the same line as before.
    “Save M…” he was gone.
    Armada started to ran again, everything next to him changed into something else. His team members, a battle. Optimus Prime, The Decepticons.
    Suddenly the head of the melted transformer hovered in front of him.
    “You’re the only one who can save us!!!”
    Armada jumps up from his bed, looking around him. Ratchet, Red Alert and First Aid pushed him back down. He didn’t understand where he was. What just happened to him? He couldn’t calm down, he throwed with his arms, round and round. He heared things fall down.
    “Calm down Armada Convoy, calm down!”
    “It’s alright, everything is going to be fine.”
    “You’re in the CR Room.”
    The voices sounded familiar,.. Ratchet, yes it was Ratchet. And Red Alert, and First Aid. Armada Convoy calmed down. The medici worked further, insertring some fluid. Armada went back in stasis lock.

    ***

    The black enviroment was cold and silent. For the second time it wasn’t as scary as Armada expected. For every wind that came by, a new howl was roared. Convoy stepped around, waiting ‘till the head came back, he was prepared now.
    “Come out, where ever you are!”
    The head appeared, now with a body. Transforming every step into something else.
    “You don’t have to prepare yourself for a fight. I’m an Autobot”, finally he took a vast shape.
    “I can’t stay for long, my molecules are instable, as so my energon supply.”
    “Who and what are you?” asked Armada.
    “I’m a guardian robot, or that’s what they call me. I’m the bringer of doom, a rain of terror for the ones I’m fighting with. I’m created for only one purpose, and that’s Starscream’s goal. My name is Armaggedon.”

    ***

    The Delta Squad leader opened his optics again. Gamma-Jones came closer, laying his hand on his boss’ shoulder.
    “Everything alright sir?”
    “Yes, bring me all the files on Armaggedon, a servant from Starscream.”
    The medic shivered and turned away his eyes.
    “What’s wrong Jones?”
    “Armaggedon… The once so pride and glory of the Decepticons, the second in line with a undestructable spark. Untill it saw the meaning of life. To serve and protect, like the Autobot cause. He fought a one man war, which he won. But thanks to the unfinished spark, the molecules were instable and… The only thing we can remember is that he crashed here on earth, carying a secret that would destroy the Decepticon King.”
    Armada Convoy nodded.
    “With other words, he’s a tiking time bomb.”
    “Yes, he is sir.”
     

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