2D Artwork: "Deja View to Kill" (5 page web comic)

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  1. Magnimus

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    The last line made me chuckle. "See you in another 25 years" but I didn't really see the point to the rest. by that I mean I couldn't tell if it was supposed to be dramatic, or a comedy. (in all honesty, I didn't feel it did either very well)

    I would've taken more time posing the figures for the shots. I know it's tedious getting them right, but it would've made the comic much more visualy dynamic from what I can tell. For instance, the second part with Megatron hunched over and Ironhide 's skewd (sp? I've never actually used the word before in a sentence) picture.

    Just trying to offer constructive critism, though I must compliment you on how cleanly cut out the figures are.
     
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    I just found the idea of Prowl and Ironhide getting scrapped again as they did in the '86 movie amusing. I like to think they'll never catch a break.

    Well, every panel except for the one you mentioned on the second page was exactly as I had planned it. Megatron's hunching was supposed to represent the first step in his jump-and-transform sequence, but I couldn't find a way of executing it on the page, so you're right in that it didn't turn out well.

    Thanks for the comments though
     
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    Pretty neat. Why did Ironhide sound like a pirate though? "Why, ye look just like you did in the movie of '86"

    Robots don't say ye
     
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    Should have been "yeh" to capture that southern drawl. Typotron strikes again
     
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    Wow... just... wow...
     
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