Decepticon Fall #1

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  1. newguy

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    This is my first time so be nice. Its all g1 alt modes.

    As war covers Cybertron all Bots and Cons and nothing more then fighters. With ambush around every corner there is no time for medial assistance or a large battle plan.

    Red covers the sky of the Decepticons last base. After a large rumble with the Autobots only a few still stand.

    Megatron: Decepticons we are failing. We can't take another blow from the autobots like that. We have lost some of our best. Who will replace Onslaught? Or what about Skywarp? He was our best seaker.

    Starscream: Thanks a lot Magatron. In a time like this we don't need you discusing who is better than who.

    Megatron steps closer to Starscream crushing debree from a crushed Autobot.

    Megatron: As we fight for our lives and belief you question me? I am incharge here Starscream! So next time you open your mouth think about what your going to say!

    Starsceam gets even closer to Megatron.

    Starscream: Oh speaking of beliefs why are we fighting the Autobots? Why cant we-

    Megatron graos Starscream by the throat and lifts him up so they meet eye to eye.

    Megatron: You have clearly not listened Starscream! I have no use for a moron on my team. I demand that you leave or die!

    Starscream: Well Megatron how do you plan to kill me?

    Megatron raises his fusion cannon and shoots at Starscreams feet.
    Clearly seeing the danger he is in Starscream Transforms and takes off.

    Megatron: Now is there any one else who can't coperate with my law.

    The Autobot base is the same sight as the Desepticons.

    Ultra Magnus: Autobots who else besides Prime fell in that battle?

    The faces of the Autobots remain blank as they look down at the floor.
    Finaly Prowl steps forward. Bits and pieces of his hood are missing after a direct hit from Megatrons mase.

    Prowl: Ultra Magnus sir we lost... we lost Sunstreaker, Cliffjumper, and Groove.

    Bluestreak punches the wall next to him leaving a large dent in the the wall then he exits the room.

    Bumblebee: Only if he could do that in battle.

    Prowl turns around and beats Bumblebee down in one hit.

    Ultra Magnus: Prowl! If you behave like that i can't have you on this team.

    Prowl: Sorry Magnus but i just can't take shit like that in a time like this.

    Bumblebee: Well jeez dude, I understand this is a sad period of time, but holy crap get some theropy.

    Prowl pulls out his gun and shoots Bumblebee several times.
    Bumblebee falls to the grownd motionless.

    Ultra Magnus: Prowl! You are no longer welcome on the team. Leave now in peace or we will have to use force.

    Prowl: Well this team isn't any good with a leader like you and bots like him. (points to bumblebee)

    Well thats all i have now. What did you think?
     
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    does anyone view this thread section? there is really awesome stuff in here. Read it!!!
     
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    #2

    Ultra Magnus: Autobots we must stand together. I can't loose any more of you.

    Bumblebee: Well i don't think we need a hot head like him on our team.

    Ultra Magnus: Bumblebee *sigh* you are the reason he is gone. We can't have smart ass behavoir right now. There is no time for fun and games any more.

    Ironhide walks forward. A panel on his leg is ripped open causing circutry to drag on the floor.

    Ironhide: Well Ultra Magnus sir, if we set an attack like that again we might win.

    Ultra Magnus: Im sorry Ironhide, but we can't risk loosing three more autobots.

    Ironhide: In that one fight we killed Onslaught and Sky Warp. The combaticons are dead now and with one seaker gone they will all fall.

    Ultra Magnus: Im sorry Ironhide but without any medical assistance we can't win. I mean look at you. You are all ready for the scrap heap.

    Bluestreak returns to the room.

    Bluestreak: I think Ironhide is right. We still have Wheeljack. He built the dinobots i know he can fix us up.

    Ultra Magnus: How Bluestreak? You sall Thundercraker and Skywarp rip off his arms. How can he fix us?

    Bluestreak: Hes can tell us what to do. He has been teaching me a lot of stuff.

    Ultra Magnus: Fine, but if it doesn't work we stop.

    Back at the Decepticon base things havn't improved.

    Megatron: You think you can just walk out there with some men and kill the autobot arm? We are Decepticons! Not idiots!

    Thundercracker: I have the location of the Autobot bas we can kill the-

    A large object smashes throu the roof of the Decepticon base. The Decepticons walk closer but stop a few feet away.

    Devestator: What is it?

    Megatron: Our ticket to win.
     
  4. jazz4ever

    jazz4ever I'm turned on by numbers

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    i actually like it despite the grammar errors otherwise it is very good
     
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    sorry for that. haven't been in school for a while so i forgot every thing.
     
  6. Novastorm

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    Interesting to see where this may be going. Prowl and Starscream are now outcasts. That would be an odd team-up. And what is this Golden Ticket that has landed at the Decepticon feet?
     
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    Youll find out. Ill try to make it it a little more discrtiptive then i have. Normally im a really good writing but it seems it has disapiered
     
  8. jazz4ever

    jazz4ever I'm turned on by numbers

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    is it the key to vector sigma?
     
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    No its the figure im buying you know but dont spoil it
     
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    jazz4ever I'm turned on by numbers

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    oh...but how does that work?
     
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    Hes not a key but a vailuble team player that will help destroy the Autobots
     
  12. jazz4ever

    jazz4ever I'm turned on by numbers

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    well i knew that i was just wondering was he unconcious or was it the dark matrix or what
     
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    #3
    The object cracks open.

    Devestator: It's some sort of a pod.

    Soundwave: There is no faction signature most likely a message.

    Megatron: No it's Nemesis Prime! (Megatron starts to totaly lol)

    Nemesis Prime stands up out of the shell and walks twords Megatron.

    Devestator: I thought he was just a black version of Optimus, but he looks more like Ultra Magnus.

    Nemesis Prime: So what i always have to look like Optimus? I can't be diffrent?

    Megatron: I apologize for Devestator's behavior.

    Nemesis Prime: No wonder you needed my help. A decepticon leader never apologizes for his mens behavior. I will now take your place Megatron as Decepticon leader.

    Megatron: No I'm leader of the Decepticons. You are just here to help not to rule.

    Nemesis Prime: You sound more like Starscream so i'll treat you like Starscream.

    Nemesis Prime grabs his own fusion cannon and points at Megatrons face.

    Megatron: You can't do this. I'm the Leader of the Decepticons you will listen to me.

    Nemesis Prime: It's not a very smart thing to question my rule.

    Nemesis prime blasts Megatron. The beam of pure energy hits Megatron in the face not forceing him back, but quikly melting his head.

    Thundercracker.: All hail Nemesis Prime!

    All the Decepticons: All hail Nemesis Prime.
     
  14. jazz4ever

    jazz4ever I'm turned on by numbers

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    um...well...it is not as good as the first few but okay.
     
  15. jazz4ever

    jazz4ever I'm turned on by numbers

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    no new update? or have you abandoned it?
     

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