Dark of the Moon Done Right

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Yaujta, May 19, 2012.

  1. Yaujta

    Yaujta Broken. TFW2005 Supporter

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    Let me preface this by saying I typically avoid fan-fictions like the plague.
    With that being said, my gf's an aspiring writer, and did this one for fun a little while back.

    Deus Machina Chapter 1: Prologue, a transformers fanfic - FanFiction.Net

    If you like this, check out some of her other stories. Even though there are a few I'm not fond of, she really enjoys what she does and I know would appreciate the traffic.
     
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    I'm liking it. In chapter two I noticed the Dinosaur reference.

    *original film*
    Kron: We've got a lot of first timers here. Make sure they get it. We stop for nothing, and no one.
    Bruton: If this is your first crossing, listen up. There is no water until we reach the other side; and you better keep up. Because if a predator catches you, you're on your own. Move out!
    *this fanfic*
    Sentinel: We've got a lot of new workers here in this district. Make sure they get it. We stop for nothing, and no one.
    Soundwave: If this is your first selection, listen up!... And you better keep up!

    I like it thus far. :) 
     
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    scary story. she's written it well !
     
  4. nobleboivin

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    I just put it on favorites on my fanfic account
     
  5. Yaujta

    Yaujta Broken. TFW2005 Supporter

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    Thanks guys! I just showed her the comments and she's really pleased that it's being received so well.
     

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