2D Artwork: Dark fo the Moon Custom Wallpaper

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Kurai Prime, Feb 23, 2011.

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  1. Kurai Prime

    Kurai Prime Well-Known Member

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    Hey, guys I originally made this as a YouTuber's background (EastwoodClinton, he's making updates on Dark of the Moon, I suggest you check him out :D ) but it turned out that I really did like it, so I converted it into a background for myself. Recently finding this website, I felt it would be a great place to share my hard work, so here it goes.

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    I took the movie Autobot and Decipticon insignias and used the gradient tool to give them the G1 feel, the same going for the Dark of the Moon title itself. The moon I wanted to have the feeling you could see the sun rising over a "dark moon" so I used a lens flare to create this effect.

    I think I could make a pretty good fan-made movie poster with this, so please tell me what you think. You can also use this as a desktop if you want, and in a YouTube video, you just have to give me credit.

    Thanks! ~ Kurai Prime

    P.S. My first post on the site :) 
     

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    Kurai Prime Well-Known Member

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    Can anyone respond with criticism so I can maybe improve it somehow?
     
  3. TacomaPrime

    TacomaPrime Cybertronian Tacoma

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    I will give you honest feedback but no offense is intended.
    Everything buy the transformers faction symbols is blurry.
    The words are too hard to read, maybe do them in a different color.
     
  4. Kurai Prime

    Kurai Prime Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the feedback Captclueless! I originally had made the moon and logo blurry on purpose to give it sort of the outer-space feel through the Gaussian and Radial Blur effects on Photoshop, but if you think it's too blurry I could probably fix it. Thanks again!
     
  5. Soundwave338

    Soundwave338 Broke College Student

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    You should probably put some bots in it, or maybe Shockwave's eye looking over the moon.
     
  6. Kurai Prime

    Kurai Prime Well-Known Member

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    I was thinking of putting bots in, but then I thought how silly it would look. Shockwave, I did think of putting behind /overlaying the moon, but I wasn't too sure. Besides, wouldn't it be too resembling to that fan made poster from a few months back?
     
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    Moy Constructicons!

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    MEgan fox isn't there.

    J/k. Not bad, but why not make the moon more important, and maybe place the faction symbols on each end of the title. And the title above?
     
  8. Kurai Prime

    Kurai Prime Well-Known Member

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    Thanks :D 

    I'll take your suggestions and I'll be back with an updated version by either today or tomorrow. :) 

    Thanks again
     

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