2D Artwork: Cyclonus (Extermination)

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  1. Bumblebee765

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    Here is Cyclonus from my fan fiction, which takes place in the Movieverse. I tried to give him a royal appearance, hence the crown-like head.
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    Technical Data:
    Strength:10
    Intelligence:9
    Speed:10
    Endurance:9
    Rank:10
    Courage:8
    Fireblast:10
    Skill:9

    Here's his vehicle mode:
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    Autobots, roll out!
     

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  2. BLOODRAGED189

    BLOODRAGED189 Getting a job to buy TFs.

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    Same issue, without the wings, shoulders, chest, and leg vents, he's just a robot. Needs less extra vehicle parts than Death Track though. (I can better imagine how this transforms.) Keep up the good work!
     
  3. Bumblebee765

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    Thanks for the advice. One thing I enjoy is constructive criticism. If you look at some of my other fan art (I have Denier from the same fan fiction as Cyclonus here on page two of the forum) I handle the extra vehicle parts better, but I do see what you're talking about. Cyclonus will probably be redone once I finish everyone else...
     
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    Jazzfan0217 Just chillin'

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    this is pretty cool man, nice job !!! :thumb  !!!
     
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    Thanks! Expect Huntress soon, and I also plan to make a scale chart with my characters, so look out for that too!
     

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