2D Artwork: Crisis Of Conscience - Sequel to Courage Under Fire

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  1. Kris Carter

    Kris Carter Mostly Harmless

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    As I said in the Courage thread, my complete gratitude to Allsparkers Newsy, Beamer, Defunct, Trixter, X-Warlock, Mr Blud, Wingus and Shumworld for letting me play with thier toys.

    Special thanks to Josh for again giving me some colour hints to make my crappy line art look pretty. Also massive props go out to Jake and Matt Moylan, for helping with inks and colours to help me speed things up. You are all amazing.

    Kris

    This story takes place shortly after Courage Under Fire

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  2. Kris Carter

    Kris Carter Mostly Harmless

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    Comments and criticism welcome.
     
  3. ILoveDinobot

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    Maximal statis pod! Nice comics!!
     
  4. Autobot X

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    Dude, SWEET comics! Very manageable length and a great story line! Oh, and I love the Maximal stasis pod. Nice touch.

    I can't wait to see how this goes.
     
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    Yeah great work all around!
     
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    wow! awesome artwork and great story! I'm hooked!!
     
  7. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    That's fantastic!
     
  8. lobes

    lobes You okay, Bumblebee?

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    theres only one part i dont understand.

    towards the end he says "sorry trixter, no pets"....but i cant quite fiqure out whats happening in that frame???

    then after that you cant see the decepticon. i gather they killed him but how?
     
  9. robotman7

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    hope this is an adiquette explanation, kris can correct me if im wrong
    trixter says "aww wow hes adorable can we keep him," something someone would say in a cartoon or tv show had they found a small dog or something,

    the "sorry trixter no pets" line is beamers way of saying he doesnt want to have to pick up Xs ...well ....waste back at the base lol

    the deadbot at the end is duplicit, he as the story explains...was killed by beamer, he was an autobot spy...however beamer didnt know this
    you can read how it happend in courage under fire, which kris posted here yesterday
     
  10. Phoenix Prime

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    dude!!! I wanna see the next one!
     
  11. Brave Magnus

    Brave Magnus Hecho en Argentina

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    Awesome work! The lines and the plot are very well done. I definitely want to read the next chapter. :thumb 
    Thanks for making a fembot without lipstick.^^
     
  12. Dirge121

    Dirge121 Eat the chikums

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    Amazing work so far, I'll speak my praise for the first lot too.
    Great Storyline, Brilliant art, good colouring.

    Did you make up the Characters, of were they made by other Fans?
     
  13. Zero Prime

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    Damn man, I love these comics!!!!
     
  14. Kris Carter

    Kris Carter Mostly Harmless

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    Thanks man. Quartz and Duplicit are mine, Headline is newsy's, Defunct and Beamer are Defunct's and Beamer's respectively, Trixter is Trixter's, X-Warlock is X-Warlock, and Desolition is Mr Blud's. Nightbeat is Hasbro's :) . They're all from the Allspark forums.

    In that frame Beamer punches X-Warlock out cold. They then leave X-Warlock in the graveyard, unconscious. I don't kill other people's characters. :) 
     
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    Love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
     
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    Great read, can't wait to read the next comic!
     
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    I really enjoyed both comics. The fan characters are pretty cool and love how you captured the essense of each G1 character shown (especially the dialog between Kup and Sunstreaker).

    One thing I noticed that was different was Sunstreaker's alt. Mode not being a yellow Lambo. Countach. Are the bots with with Earth vehicles getting a make over or just certain ones? Either way this is pretty good and I look forward to the next issue with that Maximal stasis pod.
     
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  19. Cast

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    Very impressive.
     
  20. nkelsch

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    Nice story, Great art. I love that Duocon Design.

    Very nice!
     

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