Create an Epilogue/Post-Credits scene

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  1. Chosen40k

    Chosen40k Active Member

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    What would you like as a post-credit scene?

    Mine would be:

    (Autobot *lab* with Prime, Rachet comes in)

    Ratchet: Optimus, may I have a moment? It seems the humans have made an interesting discovery.

    OP: What is it Ratchet?

    R: (Hologram pops out) At an archaeological site, the humans have dug up this fossil claw of a Deinonychus antirrhopus, also know as the Velociraptor. What's interesting is that the fossil is dated at around 4 million years ago, and the species was thought to have died out 100 million years ago on this planet.

    OP: That is very interesting, although I have the feeling that's not why you brought it to my attention.

    R: No. Analysis of the fossil shows faint Energon markings. Not just that, they seem to be an advance form of refined Energon, more efficient than the ones we use.

    OP: But how can this be? This technology is beyond our capabilities, but it seems it has existed in the past....

    R: I don't know Optimus, but it looks like the Primes were not the first Cybertronians to visit Earth....

    (scene focuses in on the image of the fossil and then cuts to black)

    (cue Beast Wars theme)

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    Sorry if it sucks, I'm not really good at writing fanfic, just thought this would be a really interesting scene.
     
  2. erjaho0614

    erjaho0614 Autbot/Maximal

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    Bay wouldn't go for it since he sounds like he's all that fond of Dinobots of any type. I wouldn't mind seeing Beast Wars on screen but I don't think it would do all that well since there's absolutely no humans in it for the audience to really connect with.
     
  3. Bountyan

    Bountyan Well-Known Member

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    *Optimus Prime walks into hangar*
    *Sees mysterious man standing in the shadows*
    Optimus Prime: Who in the name of the allspark are you?
    *Mysterious man walks out from shadows*
    Man: Nick Fury. Director of SHIELD. I'm here to talk to you about the Avenger initiative.

    ZING!
     
  4. unicronic

    unicronic TFW2005 Supporter

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    I'd rather cut to the battle scene and see Igor re-attaching Megatron's head to his body, seeing him reactivate and flee the city.
     
  5. darthrage

    darthrage Leader Class

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    The Autobots at NEST HQ and Ratchet repairing and reattaching Optimus's arm and in the next shot, optimus transforms and all the autobots roll out.

    Sam is working at a higher up position at his job or with another company and leaves work, to have carly waiting outside of his office and they both drive off in bumblebee
     
  6. erjaho0614

    erjaho0614 Autbot/Maximal

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    Pretty good set that I'm sure a lot of people would be happier with than what we got.
     
  7. Oracle_Aesir

    Oracle_Aesir Outback is back

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    After a while, Igor has returned to Africa and goes to the Hatchlings, who all look scared, then looks up to see Overlord charging up his cannon whilst draining one of the other Hatchlings of it's Energon
     
  8. Dolza_Khyron

    Dolza_Khyron Well-Known Member

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    Optimus prime: "Damn i wanted to be a lanterin!"

    :lol 
     
  9. Omegatron Prime

    Omegatron Prime Well-Known Member

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    Scene opens with a long shot of megatron's remains in a NEST hangar. Close up of his face. His eyes flicker red before slowly reactivating.

    Mysterious voice:Megatron. Welcome Megatron.

    Megatron:Who..who said that?

    Unicron:I am Unicron.

    Cut to black.
     
  10. Autobot_Wall-E

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    This so much :lol 
     
  11. StuntPrime35

    StuntPrime35 Dreads for life

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    A fans epilogue as such.....

    Do we want a TF4? Why is Prime so bad-ass? Why the plot holes? In this tiny bit of fan fic which may or may not get moved I hope you agree that this maybe serves a tiny bit of justice to the franchise.....

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    "In war, casualities are expected," Optimus began "yet here on Earth, we Autobots became family and any death was a personal death, even if I may not have expressed those emotions at the time." The battle-hardened leader looked embarressed yet swiftly continued. A large human crowd was present around seven large graves, all Earth-bound Autobots were also present. Media crews were in their hundreds.
    "Today, we bid a final farewell to seven of the most courageous Autobots I knew," Optimus announced "Jazz, lost buying time for all of us against Megatron in the Battle for Mission City, Elita-1, althought not a fully independent 'bot, still moured as she was murdered by Shockwave, for whom justice has now been served, Jolt, also killed by Shockwave, who without which I would not be here today." The crowds murmured to themselves as Optimus took a moment to name the final four.
    "Q, or Wheeljack to his older friends, who was mercilessly slaughtered in Chicago a great inventor and whose weapons helped turned the tide of battle for us many times, Skids and Mudflap, the handful as Ratchet liked to call them whose youth and inexperience in battle gave way to true courage as they died warriors attempting to stop the traitor..." Optimus paused, and Sam Witwicky standing in the front row could see a leak underneath Prime's right eye.
    "Is he crying?" he asked Carly. He turned to see Carly crying and comforted her, shaking off any impression that robots could cry, that was a stupid idea.
    "Finally, I'd like to pay tribute to my oldest and most faithful friend, Ironhide, without whom I would not be the leader I am today. He deserved more than a death by a chemical rust, yet I'm sure he would be happy with the number of 'Deceptichops' he dealt with in his time." Optimus chuckled to himself, then looked at his 'family',
    "Till all are one"
    "Till all are one" the crowd echoed, and all broke into applause. Optimus layed Ironhide's one remaining cannon on his grave and looked to the skys in hope that his friend was looking down on him in spirit.



    (Far away in the depths of space)

    Scattorshot looked at his station in disbelief. He quickly got up and raced to Paradron's command centre. Bursting in, many turned around to see what all the commotion was about.
    "Commander!" Scattorshot shouted in a vaguely Texan accent, "I just received a third outbound message from Prime!"
    The commander of Paradron turned in his chair and spoke in an accute English accent,
    "Prime survived? What does it say Scattorshot?"
    "In short, Earth is safe from the Decepticons,they did lose another four in battle, but they won sir. All Earth related Decepticons are terminated."
    "Is the space bridge ready?" The commander asked.
    "Yes sir, tested this morning with the 'Orion' sir, no hitches." Scattorshot replied. The chair turned and open comm to the hanger was established.
    "Autobots, prepare the 'Axion' for departure, it's time to pay Prime an inaugural state visit." Vector announced....


    ....................................................


    Thank you lot so much if you read though all of it. Had a fun morning writing it. C&C appreciated :) 
     
  12. StuntPrime35

    StuntPrime35 Dreads for life

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    I have just done a lengthy epilogue in my ow thread :)  Please give it read, it would be much appreciated ^^
     
  13. Sol Fury

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    This works well for me. Would have gone well with Optimus' narration. The only change I'd make would be before Optimus rolls out, he looks at a memorial for Ironhide and the rest - and include Jazz there! - or something.
     
  14. Dinobot747

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    Wheelie and Brains exit the crashed ship, swimming to shore. They climb out of the water, dripping wet, while Brains says something like "Woah, that was a doozy!"
     
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    Sad face at no comments lol
     
  16. PANTSMAN1973

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    Its a nice idea. Would have put the movie over the three hour mark though.
     
  17. tfan123

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    Me too. :-\
     
  18. cosmicherosa

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    How about Ratchet actually doing some friggin work, fixing optimus' arm, and finally fixing Bumblebee's voice.

    And when BB finally speaks he says, in Barry White tone, "It's about time, you color changin bish ass lazy mofo. I been wanting to tell off that whiny baby sam for a long time....somehow reused Tom Hanks clips ain't cuttin it, dingleberry"
     
  19. Oracle_Aesir

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    Ratchet is alone in the base when he suddenly hears a strange noise, he turns around and Dead End is there and attacks him, all the while hissing "SPARE PARTS!"
     
  20. shroobmaster

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    Wheelie and Brains rise from the fallen ship, true heroes, while a MEGA EPIC XD SUPER POWER TECHNO Remix of More than Meets the Eye plays.

    And then the ship explodes.

    They don't even flinch.
     

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