Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by sixshot2K, Jul 11, 2008.
Comic 1-All Hail battle
This is crap-tatsict.
It certainly lives up to it's title.
I'm...afraid I must agree with Katamari and Dremare there.
There's lots to say here, but I'll keep the list simple:
1. Spelling - Needs improvement.
2. Word bubbles - Would make the text a lot easier to read.
3. JPG instead of PNG - Ridiculously large file sizes for such small comic panels.
And the evil double posting strikes again...
Heck, you even spelled Adventures/Adventurers wrong. I lost interest after reading the entire thing. There is no explanation in it all!!!
Hey Sixshot good buddy...It's me Autovolt....
It's not bad but you need some word bubbles and the words in the right order and some puncation but other than that it's not that bad.
Who's the bot that shot blackarchinda?
Darkwing ok new topic i make
Try GIMP, it's free and It's better then paint.
I dont use paint I use photoshop
That made the comic a bit worse, dude.
Oh okay, I couldn't see that you used photoshop, but good luck and hope this comic turns out better.
Now that's a snappy bit of dialogue!
yes it was!
it really wasn't that bad.
Yeah, I saw some good parts in it, besides, I've seen worse comics.
Yeah, that bit got a chuckle out of me too.
Ok I will contine it in a new topic
Separate names with a comma.