Crap-tasict Transformer adventers

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by sixshot2K, Jul 11, 2008.

  1. sixshot2K

    sixshot2K Soundwave is #1!

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    Comic 1-All Hail battle
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  2. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    This is crap-tatsict.
     
  3. Katamari Prime

    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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    It certainly lives up to it's title.
     
  4. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    I'm...afraid I must agree with Katamari and Dremare there.

    There's lots to say here, but I'll keep the list simple:
    1. Spelling - Needs improvement.
    2. Word bubbles - Would make the text a lot easier to read.
    3. JPG instead of PNG - Ridiculously large file sizes for such small comic panels.
     
  5. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    And the evil double posting strikes again...
     
  6. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    Heck, you even spelled Adventures/Adventurers wrong. I lost interest after reading the entire thing. There is no explanation in it all!!!
     
  7. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Hey Sixshot good buddy...It's me Autovolt....

    It's not bad but you need some word bubbles and the words in the right order and some puncation but other than that it's not that bad.

    Who's the bot that shot blackarchinda?
     
  8. sixshot2K

    sixshot2K Soundwave is #1!

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    Darkwing ok new topic i make
     
  9. Jazzy Zx

    Jazzy Zx Wants too be called Jz :P

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    Try GIMP, it's free and It's better then paint.
     
  10. sixshot2K

    sixshot2K Soundwave is #1!

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    I dont use paint I use photoshop
     
  11. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    That made the comic a bit worse, dude.
     
  12. Jazzy Zx

    Jazzy Zx Wants too be called Jz :P

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    Oh okay, I couldn't see that you used photoshop, but good luck and hope this comic turns out better.
     
  13. Autobus Prime

    Autobus Prime Transit Former

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    :lol 
    Now that's a snappy bit of dialogue!
     
  14. Omega Charge

    Omega Charge Prepare for trouble...

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    yes it was!

    it really wasn't that bad.
     
  15. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    Yeah, I saw some good parts in it, besides, I've seen worse comics.
     
  16. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Yeah, that bit got a chuckle out of me too. :lol 
     
  17. sixshot2K

    sixshot2K Soundwave is #1!

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    Ok I will contine it in a new topic
     

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