Wait no longer. Notes: + Yeah, you can go ahead and say this too. Not only is Erica a bitch, but she’s a bit of a... I’ll let you guys fill in that blank. + This update was acting as a filler to the first main event of the story. Oooo! <--- If you've seen the movie Puss in Boots, you'll understand.
sad but a bit ironical fact: erica reminds me of a LOT of my students... with the exception that erica is a princess....
Well to use a "safe word" erica is a huge "harlot"? Man i wish i could cross over just so i could beat her like it's my job! She doesn't seem to have good reason to be like that... I think everyone here wants to give her a good punch.
Funny how Crystal is a teeny tiny bit taller than her.... well, "been around the neighborhood" counter part Ah Queen Saber.... If a migraine is what you might just listening to some bickering, then please don't think of what could happen while you're away
Is it just me, or does Erica have a convienient infatuation with every figure of authority around the place? That, and is it wrong that I'm actually rooting for Starscream to kidnap Crystal?
Well if crystal did get captured she'd be around better people Her mom is a strict and mean b&^%( And her sister is a mean, selfish, cruel harlot.... yup. A harlot.
Would be a nice inside joke if the characters go around calling her Harlot instead of Erica McHankyPanky xD Also, in the panel where Saber asks Gabranth to take the girls to their room, her pose made me imagine her saying to Erica "Y U NO SHUT UP" xD
It would, but that kind of stuff would probably be reserved for villains only.It's not like Erica is your average spoiled brat. At least, it seems, even Saber has limits when she's putting up with her elder daughter's crap. Does that mean that everybody can get off of her back now? Yep, just as I have a convienient dislike of Erica. That said, the mental image of big badass Gabranth reading Erica a bedtime story makes me lol. Why? To ensure that Crystal's as far away from her dislikeable older sister as possible, or because it'll allow Saber to make a heroic rescue that would redeem her in the eyes of the readers?
So far both Saber and Erika seem very umplesent people to be around but again Saber my be under the influence of Erika so that may not be Saber's true self.
Say, you lot may be on to something, accidentally, but something. What if these guys are working for a benevolent goal, rather than a malevolent goal!? That would be a twist worthy of Mini-bot! That's my theory, let's see how it pans out.
Who knows? Either way Crystel and her brother do not deserve to live in the lifestyle they have now. Whatever their mother's doing it seems to be making them even more misrable. That kind of thing can destroy whatever love and care they have and make them into not very plesent people. I'm not saying that they should be allowed to misbehave but is using that level of discapline and order worth losing your childrens love? I certainly wouldn't go to that level if they were my children. Still it may be that Saber's under some influence or perhaps soemthing in the past must have made her to go this far who knows?
Aw, she's just a little bit evil. Would probably change her tune if something bad happened to Crys. And the bickering was pretty low-key, as such things go.
hm... i'm curious as what movie screamer was thinking... what does he mean by keep those eyes on erica? i dun get it... well, that's what's update are for! GO FOR IT!!!
Sad, but true about a lot of young girls these days. >.> I might have to have one of the characters call her that in some point of the story. Trust me. Everyone is this universe wants to beat the scrap out of her too. And, you better believe Erica is a bit envious of that fact. Oooh, she won't. She should, but she won't. xD Nope and nope. Both nicknames could be used for her. Glad the pose was coming off as intended. Although, it wasn't just to Erica, of course. I don't think anyone is going to get off her back any time soon, so I might as well put a sign on her that reads, "Queen Bitch". xD When I was writing it, I had a different... disturbing mental image..., for what Erica was really implying. I like the "actually reading a bedtime story to her" image better. Why thank you! Believe me they are very unpleasant actresses to be around too. >.> As much as I'd like to tell you why, updates to follow are definitely going to explain. Sadly, I don't have an update ready just yet. The one I'm working on may require a little bit more time to complete, because of it's nature. I will, however, state that this commenting/bumping of the thread was not completely in vain. I made a mistake in the latest update that is now corrected. If you remember the very first update, it was said that Saber would only be gone for a few short hours. In the latest update, it is said she'll be gone for much longer with no explanation or acknowledgments to the change in the period of time she would be gone. Well, that's fixed now. The change was made in the second image of the update. Tomorrow's my day off, so I'm going to try to get an update done then. And, fix my signature finally!
OMG, how could I have forgotten about what Starscream and crew said about the Queen being gone for a few hours and that when the Queen told the girls about her going away that it sounded like she was going to be away for much longer than just a few hours? Oh well. Oh, I hope you're able to get an update done tomorrow!
