BW: Rebooted

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  1. G1Wheeljack

    G1Wheeljack Bear-sona!

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    Nice update, loved the little Furmanism you gave Spittor there.
     
  2. kingjace

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    I like... haha, question: There will be more to this conflict than the Maximal and Predacon factions huh?
     
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    Wow. Um, "explosive" ending, there. :D 

    What will become of our Maximal friends, I wonder. No guarantee they made it clear, or at the very least that ALL of them made it clear...
     
  4. FeiZai

    FeiZai An Internet White Knight

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    did spittor just go Super Saiyan on the Maximals!? o_O 
     
  5. Noise Maker

    Noise Maker Well-Known Member

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    Yeah, it probably would have been better if he didn't hold a grudge towards the Maximals. :D 

    He was mad enough to begin with for the simple fact that they trespassed on his "temple".

    Thanks!

    The next update should still be here Sunday.

    Definitely.

    I've waiting to give a character the "You wouldn't believe BELIEVE what I can do now!" line.

    The comic will have more than just Predacons vs Maximals. Predacon vs Predacon, for example. Maybe even a three way war between Maxi, Pred, and someone else...?

    :lol 

    Hopefully they'll be okay!

    Something like that!

    He's basically like Waspinator - insane, incompetent - but he's also a real threat.
     
  6. Pravus Prime

    Pravus Prime Sorcerer

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    Wow, just came across your comic, great job! You've really done a great job starting fresh and building a great cast of interesting characters and drama.

    I really appreciate that the texturing effect has been diminished, I had a hard time understanding what was going on at times with some of the battles (Terrorsaur/OP) early on, but I did like the larger pictures.

    Keep up the great work!
     
  7. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Wow! Spittor certainly knows how to make an impact. A mushroom cloud shaped impact....
     
  8. Noise Maker

    Noise Maker Well-Known Member

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    *Is slapped*

    I know I said the next update would be here last Sunday, but the effects are taking far longer than I thought. But it should be up tonight! Hopefully!

    Thank you! And I'm glad you like the characters; I was getting scared that they were too flat. It's a lot easier for me to flesh out characters in fan fiction for me than it is in comic format, but I'm feeling more comfortable with it now.

    Yeah, when I go back and look at earlier updates I see how texturizing them less works better. I've pretty much stopped using Comic Life for the textures because they were too heavy.

    What can I say, he has a flare for dramatics!
     
  9. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Spittor sounds like Gollum. And he's just about as friendly.
     
  10. Noise Maker

    Noise Maker Well-Known Member

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    It was accidental, but I like how it worked out. :thumbs2: 

    Update coming in next post!
     
  11. Noise Maker

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    "Funny" story sbout this update: in the original version, there was a flash back scene that would reveal a little about Spittor. The way it was narrated felt kind of forced, and just didn't flow with the rest of this update. So, the flash back scene will appear in two or three updates from now in a different way.

    But if I just decided I wasn't going to do the flashback in this one, I could have posted this a lot sooner, as the flashback scene had all the effects that took so long to do. :confused2 

    EDIT: I'm trying different pic sizes, so this update's pages are a little big: tell me what you think!

    And I don't have time to send out the heads-up PM right now, but I'll send it in the mourning.

    So, BW: Rebooted Issue Two, Feral Impulses, Part Four

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  12. Pun-3X

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    So, he regenerates. Or something regenerates him. And, of course, the question is what is it that brings him back to life, and why?

    I can't help but wonder if there's a connection to Megatron's beast persona, and that it might not be some freak screw-up based on his beast mode.
     
  13. G1Wheeljack

    G1Wheeljack Bear-sona!

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    I want to put Animated Blitzwing, Spittor & G1 Galvatron in a room & see what would happen, am I a bad person?
     
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    Only if you're gonna charge tickets:scalper 
     
  15. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    Nice effects, this is a good pic size, I can see the toys better, and since I don't but own 3 BW figures, that helps out a whole lot!
     
  16. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Ah, so Spittor's not exactly "his own man," then. He's working for someone else, someone so powerfuly that they can bestow immortality on a transformer.
    So immortal Spittor is hearing voices, Megatron is hearing voices, there's a temple of some sort involved...spooky stuff.:thumb 
    The new pic size works very well, BTW. Like Otispq, I'm not too familiar with BW toys, and the bigger image size helps to ID them. Plus it has more impact IMHO.
    Nice effects with the regeneration sequence, as well.:thumb 

    Hey, I'd glady pay to watch that! :lol 
     
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    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Awwwwsssssssssssoooooooommmmmmmmmeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
     
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    That guy is a walking clusterf**k of issues O_O
     
  19. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    That's strange. I wonder if it's the Vok talking to Spittor? They'd certainly have the power to do that.
     
  20. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    You've done really good job with this comic here. I always wanted BW to have more characters.
     

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