2D Artwork: Breakdown the Fourth Wall

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  1. Warper

    Warper Master of the Void

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    Breakdown the Fourth Wall
    Breakdown of the Stunticons is having a crisis on his hands; he believes that the Universe does not exist and/or is not real. Is the Universe truly a fictional place? Are they nothing more than ideas formulated by individuals? Does Motormaster even care?

    Here's a short little comic that a friend and I are currently working on. We're not quite finished yet, but we are coming along.

    Note: This is NOT a Mosaic, since it's going to be ore than a comic page long.

    Story, colors, text and character designs by: Krekka01 on deviantART

    Pencils, lineart and panels by: armandoestebanquito on deviantART

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    More to come.
     

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    :lol  Breakdown is the not Deadpool of Transformers,but the Bulleyes of Transformers.
     
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    wow, this is nice, i like the colors, the beat-up style, the flow, and the designs. I mean, this is one awesome piece. The "what" line from MM threw me off at first (i thought it was going down not left then down)
     
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    Dude, when did Mike Mignola start doin' TFs? LOL ;) 

    This is gonna be awesome.
     
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    Wow! Great start! I actually have an idea like this in the works, with G1 Skids questioning the reality of the universe. I guess great minds think alike!
     
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    Breakdown's paranoia has finally consumed him.
     
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    I think this version of Breakdown is a "her."
     
  8. Warper

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    I'm not as proficient in Marvel comics as other people are. How is Breakdown comparable to Bullseye to you?

    Thanx.
    My friend did the lines while I did the colors.
    Perhaps some guidelines from panel to panel would help.

    Heh... gotta tell my friend this!
    Thank you.

    Thanx!

    But it'd probably be played for laughs. Nothing TOO serious.

    Nope. Breakdown is still a "him". It's TFA Dead End that's a "her".
     
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    hey nice!

    i look forward to seeing more pages!

    definitely inspiring seeing a couple guys making their own comic. great job guys!
     
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    This artwork has a touch of Mignola and a touch of Keith Giffen that really makes for a fantastic illustrative style. I really enjoy this page!

    The layout of the last two panels is a bit confusing, though.

    I'm really excited about seeing more! Thanks for sharing :thumb 
     
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    You should know this about Spiderus already. Everything's all Marvel Superheroes and Ben10 with him. :rolleyes: 
     
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    QTSMT (Quoted to save me typing :p ).

    Love the expressive artwork, and I'm looking forward to seeing how these versions of the characters develop.
    But yeah, the last three panels have a far from intuitive flow, and it'd be really helpful, if it's not possible to actually rearrange the panels (and I can see how that'd be difficult), then at least to have some sort of graphic device (like an arrow of some kind, even built into the frame borders), that help lead the reader through the direction of the story.
     
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    love the art and the colors would love to see your concepts for the characters
     
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    Thanx. It is a good feeling having people work together on a common goal.

    Thanx, though I'm not too familiar with either artists (I'm certain my friend might).

    Huh. Still, makes me scratch my head how Breakdown is like Bullseye.

    Thank you!
    Yeah, I realize the panelling may be confusion with what they say and what order they say it.

    Thanx! Let's hope his scanner gets up and working again soon.

    Anyway, after much pointing-out, I've included little arrows in the bottom panels in question for easier reading.
     
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    Google Image Searches are your good friend :) 
     
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    YES! I hope we see some Combaticons up in hurr!
     

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