blackjkb's transformers fan fic:rise of the junkions

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  1. blackjkb

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    ok... my fan fic is going to be about two races the chromatronians and the junkions.....the war has been raging for 6000 years and starts while the autobots and decepticons are offline on earth. i will need a couple of characters i done have 3 characters made out.

    first update:TBA

    characters

    NO MORE JUNKIONS!


    JUNKIONS
    blackjkb: the leader of the junkions and a expert at wepons.has comedic side but when it comes to fighting.....well lets just say he is "one mean dude"

    gearjammer: blackjkb's right hand man or his body gaurd......gear jammer has a tough attitude and will defend his leader's life....even if it risks takeing his own


    swiftcat: the sniper for the junkions and a femme bot.....has met the autobots before but hasent heard from them for a stellar cycle...has a silent atittude and reminds blackjkb of bumble bee


    jackets once a chromatronion he now fights with the junkions....if it werent for blackjkb he would still be a lifeless protoform left on the battlefield

    OG: once a chromatronion like his bro....this junkion and his bro combine to form a fearsome battle tank....but powerful enough to defeat the general they once served?













    CHROMATRONIONS

    motor roller: a pure solider to the spark.....he will do anything to get his wepons blast on the guy's who destoryed his freinds..... including the innocient and....the junkion leader. he also has the power to heal himself witch makes him a tough opponet

    general tredmaker: the leader of the chromatronions..... is unstopable with his form...a tank with two gun barrles...is seeking revenge for what the junkion leader did to him.....blow his ladybot into peices but this robot dosent know the whole story behind his ladybot's murder

    dentmaker: the "tough guy" for the chromatronions. has fist as big as bulkheads and a form that is mixed with a crusher and a steam roller he has giant crushing spikes on his fender also is general tredmaker's brother...most junkions fear this big guy.

    Batcam: batcam is the spy for the chromatronions and is a bot of not so many words.....he has the abillity to turn invisable and is useful for his form.....a giant bat
     
  2. Swiftcat Prime

    Swiftcat Prime Good always triumphs!

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    Interesting, keep it coming. :) 
     
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    UPDATE #1 before the war part 1

    "setting:a recruting station on the planet junkion while the junkions are gathered round near a tv a their leader pops up on screen"

    blackjkb:ladys and genetle bots! we must ban together to form our army not just an army that you chose to join....one you must join!

    crowd:AWWWWW

    blackjkb:wait a stellar second.....well i gusse you want to get blown to bits by the chromatronions?

    crowd:no!!!!!!

    blackjkb:then lets ban together!

    crowd:YEAH!!!!!!

    "all the junkions join the army in hope that the war will soon be over"

    "setting: a female bot walks up to the recruting station"

    recrutor:yes may i help you?

    swiftcat:i wanna join the army

    recrutor:fine "grumbles" right this way"

    "recrutor turns and heads towards a door marked training room. swift cat follows"

    recrutor:what would you like to be a medic?,ifrantry,sniper?

    swiftcat:i wanna be a sniper

    recrutor:"grumbles" fine!

    "recrutor gets a target and sniper rifle set up"


    recrutor: try to hit that target

    swiftcat:easy

    recrutor: with "moves a punching bag in the way of target" this in the way

    swiftcat:..oh....ok "looks in scope and fires...the bullit whizes past the punching bag with turn and hits the target right in the middle"

    "the recrutors eyes widein and takes swiftcat to the leader blackjkb"

    blackjkb: so....a sniper aye?...pretty risky but on your report here.....it seems that you should be an elite sniper!"
     
  4. Swiftcat Prime

    Swiftcat Prime Good always triumphs!

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    Yess!! Go Swifty!
     
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    next update:when ever i get some more junkions or chromtronions
     
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    UPDATE:#2 begining the war

    setting:blackjkb and the other junkions are disscussing battleplans

    blackjkb: ok....we wont stike untill they do first you hear me! we wont strike till they do......

    gearjammer:but sir!,what if they think of the same thing.....

    blackjkb:good question maybe we should send a sniper to get some intell on the chromatronions plans.

    swiftcat:i vounteer for the job.

    blackjkb: great you leave immeditatly!.....meeting ajurned

    setting: on the chromatronions planet swiftcat is lisnting to the chatter on her sensors.

    general tredmaker: we will strike at dawn those dumb junkions wont know what hit em with the ion cannon

    motor roller:but sir it hasent been tested.

    general tredmaker:silence! i know what i am doing

    "then a chromatronion attacks swiftcat from behind swiftcat then kung fu kicks him in the head and his head goes flying then swiftcat takes of and gives the intell to the junkion leader"

    blackjkb:i knew it! my fellow junkions we must find a more powerful wepon and i think i know which one
     
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    UPDATE#3 the real fighting

    setting: the junkion lab.junkionscientist are trying to make a wepon that will make the junkions live.

    blackjkb:hows the wepon coming along?

    head scientist:not very well

    blackjkb:what do you mean?

    head scientist:we need more supplies mostly cogs,gears,and glue

    blackjkb:"face palm" oh well....swiftcat!

    "swiftcat enters the room"

    swiftcat:yes?

    blackjkb:transform and drive to the inventory lab

    swiftcat:sure thing.

    setting:near the junkion inventory lab....as swiftcat trys to make it to the inventory lab the chromatronions attack.

    swiftcat: oh well im almost there.

    "as swiftcat enters the inventory room and transforms she is shot by stasis beams and wakes up in a jail cell on a chromatronion ship."

    Swiftcat:i wonder if i can radio blackjkb from here.

    "just then a big hole is blown in the wall then blackjkb appears from the hole with his two hand bazzokas..."

    swiftcat:i gotta get me one of those.

    blackjkb: i will ask later....but for now lets get outta here

    "as the two run out of the hole in the wall motor roller shoots blackjkbs foot"

    blackjkb:BISCUTS!!! YE SHOT ME FOOT OFF!

    swiftcat:nice going! you gave away our position

    "but swiftcat notices blackjkb is not listining while he limps toward motor roller holding his 2 battle axes"

    blackjkb:you think that will stop me you are wrong!

    "he then transforms then just before he hits motor roller he transforms and slices him in two"

    blackjkb:swift cat now lets-

    "he is inturrupted as motor roller peices him self back together and the junkion and chromatronion start dualing with their blades....while that is going on swiftcat takes notice to a autobot protoform that crashed landed on earth"

    swiftcat:i will save this "she puts the proto form in her backpack and then grabs her sniper rifle and aims for motor rollers head....all of the sudden a large ray shoots out and every junkion and there grey colors are gone and bright orange,yelllow,and red colors appear and every junkion is pieced back together and live again"

    motor roller:that machine wont save you junkion! this isnt over! CHROMATRONIONS RETREAT!

    "as every chromatronion ship takes off swiftcat shoots a left behind chromatronion"

    swiftcat:blackjkb! we must go after them

    blackjkb:your right.....but right now we must repair these dead chromatronions they may be a good junkions....i think i will call him jackets and OG...
     
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    UPDATE#4 the two brothers

    setting:med lab

    blackjkb: how are they doc?

    doctor:OG and jackets? their fine they know everything about the chromatronions

    "blackjkb enters OG and jackets room"

    blackjkb:whats up guys

    OG:hey! aint you the one who saved us?

    blackjkb:well ye-

    jackets: yup thats him!

    blackjkb:dont you two combine?

    jackets & OG: YES! WE DO!

    blackjkb: calm down

    jackets:sorry,oh yes and the reason we arent mad at you is because we wanted to be junkions anyway

    blackjkb:really?!

    OG:yup!

    "blackjkb and the bros talk what felt like 6000000 stellar cycles laughing and happy......but something evil was brewing"

    setting:p lanet chromayon

    general tredmaker:is it ready?

    motor roller:yes sir...are you sure you wanna see it?

    general tredmaker:you question my brilliance!?

    motor roller: no sir here it is

    "a door reveals a dent maker: a killing machine"

    general tredmaker:transform!

    "dentmaker transforms into a steam roller mixed with a spikes and a sports car"

    general tredmaker:excellent! we must send this in to the battlefield at once!

    motor roller:yes sir!
     
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    jackets Gamer/Anime fan

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    thx....i wont update till probly after christmas?....or maybe today im not sure....but idk
     
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    UPDATE #5 the secret wepons

    "setting:the junkions are disscusing battle plans all of the sudden the chromatronions attack"

    OG:what do you want us to do blackjkb?

    blackjkb:combine with your brother and knock out there defenses

    "OG and jackets combine to form a massive battle tank and knock out a wave of chromatronion troops"

    blackjkb: swiftcat! knock out there tanks! shoot for the gas pump

    swiftcat:yes sir!

    "swiftcat aims and shoots a tanks gas pum which results in an explosion and she then takes another tank into her sights"

    blackjkb:Great job siftcat now w-UGH!

    "blackjkb looks down to fine a great big sword jabbed through his spark he then collapses"

    CONTINUED IN UPDATE #5!
     
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    UPDATE #6 down but not out

    setting:still on the battlefield blackjkb is wounded...

    blackjkb:UGHHH!!!!!!!

    "blackjkb removes the sword and then he tries to heal is wound"

    blackjkb:its....not working.....

    "he then signals his men to fall back"

    "setting:med lab"

    doctor:im afaird you arent gonna make it...

    blackjkb:i must make it....

    doctor:the only way you can survive is if we have the junkion medal..

    blackjkb:where....is it?

    doctor:its at the other end of the universe! you will never retrive it!

    blackjkb:not me.....OG and jackets will retreive it......they will start the elite junkions group...

    doctor:you want me t-

    blackjkb: YES!!!!

    doctor:eek: k

    "the doctor sends OG and jackets on there mission to the other end of the universe

    "setting:nearing the planet onmnicon in jackets and ogs ship"

    OG:where are we

    jackets:close to the medal thats for sure.the readings are over 100% junkion

    "theres sputter coming from the ship engine then it cuts off"

    jackets:UH OH!

    "the ship crashes on the planet"
     
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    UPDATE #7 Relaeseing the bat and the dent maker

    setting:OG and jacket's crashed ship on onmnacon a really rocky planet"

    jackets:ugh.....is the ship ok

    "og is checking the ship status"

    OG: i can do some repairs if you look for the medal?

    jackets: ok!

    "jackets transforms and heads to the strongest power source"

    jackets:huh?!...thats funny sounds are coming from where the power source is..

    "as jackets jumps over a hill dentmaker strikes and jackets transforms back into a robot."

    dentmaker: puny junkion... must die!

    "dent maker is about to slam his fist on jackets when OG rams dentmaker head on and knocks him out"

    jackets:thanks bro your real-

    OG:look! theres the medal!

    "OG points at a shiny medal sticking out of the rocky plain...the brothers take the medal and race back to the ship....but just before they reach the ship batcam attacks jackets and OG grabs the medal out of his bros hands and takes it to their ship"

    batcam:come out junkion! or your brother gets it!

    "OG's Rage grows so much he uses the ships wepons and fires at the bat....the bat isnt there but his brothers is still there wounded but suddenly healed and enters the ship"

    jackets:did you fix the ship?

    OG: sure did,lets get blackjkb fixed up

    "the brothers put there ship in over drive and race to their home world"
     
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    batcam11 SHINIGAMI CHOP!!!

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    awesome update dude
     
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    thx!
     
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    UPDATE #8 wheres the leader?

    "setting: jackets and Og are nearing blackjkbs med wing room when they arrive their leader is not there"

    jackets:where is he!

    Og:beats me!

    "the doctor walks in"

    doctor:he.....died.....

    jackets:WHAT!?

    doctor: over an hour ago we tried to contact your ship but it wouldnt connect.

    Og:well we did crash land so know wonder you couldnt reach us.

    jackets:where is his body?

    doctor: oh its right here!

    "the doctor then flips a switch on his arm and their dead leader appears"

    jackets:i wonder....

    "he then holds the junkion medal over their leader's chest plate and it opens..jackets then sets the medal inside and removes his hand...then the chest panals close....then blackjkb's form starts to grow to the size of optimus prime and a battle axe appears in his hands"

    blackjkb:this is the end of the road....general tred maker!

    "blackjkb then transforms into a giant truck and crashes thorugh his hospital room's wall....after nearing the edge of the planet he transforms into a massive starship and heads towards the chromatronion planet"
     
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    a little peice of how wreck gar became leader i wont include this in the update

    "setting:chromatronion jail blackjkb releases all the prisoners and tells one of the released junkions"

    blackjkb:if i dont come back...your the leader of the junkions....oh yes and with my body leave a little water.....some chips if you have em;
     
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    Unicron the Pla Cybertronian Accountant

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    Very nice, I like what I see so far.
     
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    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Pretty good, although I was expecting them to talk a little more TV. So far, so good!
     
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    yeah .... i say BISCUTS alot "not on here" so i want him to match myself
     

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