ben 10 transforms and rolls out

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by onecoolchris, Oct 30, 2008.

  1. mrfang2

    mrfang2 leader of team rejects

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    continuation, i am helping write this now

    ben ran out of the forest, hitting the omnitrix as it displayed upgrade on the screen. "this should take care of things" upgrade said in his robotic sounding voice, his eye glowing a bright green and pulsing with his every word. as he runs into the disaster area of a street he sees too metal giants battling it out as if they had been fighting for eons. the bright red and blue robot puls out an axe made of pure, flaring energy. "you think your puny axe can defeat me optimus. you are just an insolant, stupid, and weak aoutobot." says the orange and purple robot. "not this time, galvatron!" says optimus as he slashes galvatrons gun right off of his arm. "let me give you a hand optimus!" says upgrade, as he combines with optimus. with new, upgraded guns, and his axe turned into a sword, ptimus is able to blast galvatron out of the street. busted up, and sizziling with smoke, galvatron declares "i'll get you next time prime!"
     
  2. onecoolchris

    onecoolchris commander in chief

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    nice job

    great job! How should we continue this?
     
  3. mrfang2

    mrfang2 leader of team rejects

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    i'll pm you some ideas!
     
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    pm me! i have 10 or 20 ideas for this story already!