Beast Wars Search for the Allspark

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  1. GhostLord

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    Okay here's my attempt at a serious comic. I wrote this version before I saw "Predacons Rising". After I saw that episode I tried to rewrite the comic to pick up after "Predacons Rising" but I prefered the first version.

    Now on to the comic itself. This comic is not linked to Transformers Animated. It is a completely separate continuity. This first post contains the two page prologue. Here are the pages.

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    After the prologue a group of Maximals and a group of Predacons will somehow end up on a primitive planet. I haven't decided if the planet will be primitive earth. I will be using images from a video game for backgrounds once they are on that primitive planet.
     
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    Very interesting and a good start.
     
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    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Yay! Good photography, Comic life, gripping storyline, cool effects, Unicron.com Accessory Set #6 (click my sig), this comic is a winner already! :D 
     
  4. GhostLord

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    Thanks

    Thank you for the compliments.
     
  5. Mr. Sparklebot

    Mr. Sparklebot 'Til All Are Juan

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    Wow, that is some pretty photography right there! Can't wait to see more!
     
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    Good start; puts down a good footing quick. My first prediction: Prowl is toast.
     
  7. iwasherenotyou

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    omg gotta see more. when u gonna update?
     
  8. GhostLord

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    Hopefully soon

    I hope to update soon. I am trying to figure out where to begin the first issue.
     
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    Maximal Character Bios

    Here are the character bios for the Maximals. The Predacon character bios will be post sometime later.

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    The first two pages of issue one.

    Here are the first two pages of issue one.

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    I hope you enjoy them.
     
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    Aaaaaaand it's Rattrap with his trademark phrase!

    Let's hope he's not right, or this will be the shortest comic ever. :) 
     
  12. GhostLord

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    Don't worry. Rattrap is wrong.
     
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    Interesting start!

    Nice to see a Beast Wars comic! There's not very many of them.

    What video game will you be using? I use Spore for my screen shots; they work pretty well for BW backgrounds.
     
  14. GhostLord

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    I am glad you like my comic. I've read your comic Beast Wars Rebooted and I have really enjoyed it. I will also be using Spore for my backgrounds. I think it works really well.
     
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    The next three pages.

    Here are the next three pages of my comic. I should probably mention that these three new pages are a bit more comedic than the last pages and probably future pages.

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    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    great start and I absolutely love the layout you have for your comics
     
  17. GhostLord

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    Thank you for the compliments. I'm glad you like my comic and its layout.
     
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    Three more pages.

    Here are three more pages. More plot movement, less comedy.

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    Enjoy. Constructive criticism is welcome.
     
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    Random gag comic

    Here's a random gag comic I made to test the spore backgrounds. I think I might be on to something with this.

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    Do you think I should make a separate comic series with just random gags like this one?
     
  20. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 "No Mas" My Wallet

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    nice start keep it up
     

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