2D Artwork: Beast Wars: Dark Glass.

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  1. Rattrap587

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    Page 1.

    Page 2: As soon as possible.

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    Very nice.
     
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    nice :) 
     
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    Cool, are you going to be following the original script of Dark Glass? And how did you draw the page? Sketch with pencil first and then ink in photoshop or?
     
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    I wouldn't break the panels like that, especially that many times. Variation in figure sizes might help as well. Like a close up of someone then a full body shot later. As it is the figures kind of blend togther. IE they look to similar.

    Remember storytelling is key. Try and use panels that only progress the story.

    Without lettering and words go for more iconic imagery. So we can understand the story.

    Overall not bad, just could use some improvement.
     
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    So so... I´ll follow the original script but with a personal touch in the middle... And I drew exactly as you said... Pencil sketchs and inking. After that I made minor corrections on Photoshop.
     
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    Thanks for the observations. I´ll try to improve in the next pages.
     
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    Optimus wants a high five. It's looking good. :) 
     
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    After a millenium... Page 3 here:


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    Edited. Sorry about that.
     
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    Not a problem, thank you.
     
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    These look really clean! I like that you have done well taking criticism and using it to better your work :) 

    Also, you can attach your higher res images here as well. Keep in mind that you can attach up to 20 images per post :wink: 

    Keep up the great work :thumb 
     
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    After a millenium... Page 4:

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    They're pretty good. Any colors by chance?
     
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    Thanks! Colors are not planned for now because I have to make about 20 more pages to finish this project... But if someone could add the colors... Would be just Prime...
     

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