Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by darksage78, Jul 14, 2008.
First photo-comic so here it goes...
Pages are out of order.
nice ... very nice start
You've never had a photocomic before? I guess I'm so used to seeing you post here that I'd never realized.
I need to get caught up on your fanfic too. It's been quite awhile since I read it.
yeah pages are out of order, but nice!
LOL, nice. Love the Canadian connection. I wonder if the exterminator would've taken the loonie 6 weeks ago
I still don't care for Animated, but bring on more of these!
"Perhaps a Toonie?" is brilliant.
Only criticism, upon going back... some of the dialog is Budianskyish in the way it's written.
Such as Lockdown's final lines there.
Hey there. Not so bad . Keep it up! ^^
Btw, are the pages out of order? I think only the last two pics need rearranging..
I can't imagine that Grimlock is going to be very pleased when he finds his sword missing.
Not a bad start at all, just as it was pointed out earlier, this was havin' some issues with readin' the layout, but still.
Well, considerin' that SS tends to frag around with Megatron a lot, how much worse could Grimlock be? Right? XD
Ha good stuff!
Holy crap taht's funny.
I wonder if lockdown and Grimlock will cross-paths.
Sorry about the pages and the weird speech bubbles. I'll try to fix those in future updates. Not too good on the funny stuff but hopefully I'll think of something =P But thanks to everyone for the kind comments. I'll do my best to continue with reasonable updates =D
I like it so far! Can't wait for more!
Wonderful start and great cliff-hanger. I'd really like to see Grimlock just frag Lockdown and sell the parts. Poetic justice that.
Thanks for the support guys =D And sorry for the total lack of an update, was away at camp for a week so I couldn't take more pics. Will be away again for a week, and then another so not sure when I can get more up. But here are two pages...
Wow i wished grimlock took the war seriously he's never faced one decepticon except for Megatron his creator.
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