Alternate Story

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Halo, Aug 6, 2006.

  1. Halo

    Halo Well-Known Member

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    So for my Photography project at school, I've decided to make a comic strip. This is only a preview and will have the other chapters filled out soon enough. Anyways, click the link and view the first chapter, and feedback would be great...(i know the text is sorta small, but thats what photobucket did, not me...the pics are a lot bigger then what they show...)

    Click for album:

    http://s69.photobucket.com/albums/i49/JP_Lee/Alternate_story/1_Gathering/

    Im not sure how many total parts/chapters I will have, so bare with me now...
     
  2. Seth Buzzard

    Seth Buzzard R.I.P. Buzzbeak Content Contributor

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    That was a cool way to do a comic.
     
  3. Optimal Optimus Prime

    Optimal Optimus Prime The Ultimate Prime

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    Well, it was kinda neat.......Prowl as luke.

    You did really mess up the Dialouge from that acutal scene horribly.

    "Search your Soul" I always thought it was "Search your feelings, you know it to be true"
     
  4. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    That looks good! Hope you do more...
     
  5. JesusChrysler

    JesusChrysler i got robotz

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    All those circleley thingies made me go for a pee after I finished watching it. You should get the Chewie and Han set. Don't be afraid to include your own hands in the shot.

    Good things,
    J.C.
     
  6. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    cool! :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol 
     
  7. Eric

    Eric RIP AND TEAR!!!

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    Good work! :lolol :lolol 
     
  8. Optimus Scourge

    Optimus Scourge Arcee's boy toy Veteran

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    I thought it was funny... The diolouge wasn't perfect, but give the guy a break. I would like to see more, Halo, MORE!!! :lolol 
     
  9. Halo

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    yeah, the dialogue wasn't perfect, but it came out ok....everyone knows what i was trying to get to...hahahaha....im working on some, they wont be in a slideshow mode like this one was...i just did this as a test and it came out ok...and thanks, ill change the dialogue now...hahahaha
     
  10. Sol Fury

    Sol Fury The British Butcher Administrator News Staff

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    That was cool! I've never seen a comic done that way, and it worked pretty well.
     
  11. omega knight

    omega knight Chibi lancelot launch

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    whatg grade are you in im going into 7th welcome
     
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  13. Halo

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    Arts Institute of MN, Sophomore in college. Major is Photography. Minor is in Graphic Design.
     
  14. omega knight

    omega knight Chibi lancelot launch

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    oh no I dint mean to insult you with the gradeI justsaw u were doing a prject and its for school!and most of the school system uses grades up until coollege im sorry mam.Split lil wtf is wrong with going into the 7th grade!!
     
  15. Halo

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    hahaha dun worry...school is school.... anyways, hope this turns out okay...
     
  16. omega knight

    omega knight Chibi lancelot launch

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    good luck!!
     
  17. Halo

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    thanks. I added another slideshow just for the heck of it...its on my first/original post...so enjoy...
     
  18. omega knight

    omega knight Chibi lancelot launch

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    ur avatars cute I mean uh.......
     
  19. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol 
     
  20. omega knight

    omega knight Chibi lancelot launch

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    hahaha ur making me luagh sheba at my own joke!but really I like the avatar though ............not like like ewwwwwI mean just like dont get it wrong!
     

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