Alone (Galvatron's Poem)

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  1. BrookeGirl

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    Heres a free style poem. Its told from Galvatron's point of view. Hope you like it.

    Alone (Galvatron's Poem)

    As I stand here
    alone, in the dark,
    the superior,
    above the Autobots,
    at the top ranks of the Decepticons,
    I think.

    I've waged countless wars,
    led armies into battle,
    defeated Autobot after Autobot,
    as the years
    wore on.

    I've fought my way
    to the top.
    I've decieved everyone
    who put trust or loyalty
    in me.
    Now I stand at the top.
    Alone.

    No one stands beside me
    those that try
    are soon destroyed.
    I stand alone,
    for I trust no one
    and no one trusts me.
    I stand tall.
    Alone.

    I have destroyed all that oppose me.
    Well, all but one-
    Optimus Prime.

    But that doesn't worry me.
    I know I'll win this war.
    And then I'll rule
    Alone.
     
  2. Alpha Prime

    Alpha Prime Ten Years Strong

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    Nice.
     
  3. BrookeGirl

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    Thanx :)  Personally I thought it was a little lacking but I posted it anyway cuz my friend said it was good and it inspired me.
     
  4. Katamari Prime

    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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    Guess it's true, it's only lonely at the top if you wish to be.
     
  5. M-Prime

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    I never knew Galvatron was an emo kid.
     
  6. Fairlady_Z

    Fairlady_Z Official Voice of Flareup

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    I like it. You get into his head and show his insanity from a different, scary angle.
     

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