A War of Their Own

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  1. Strarf

    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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    Alright, I guess it's a good time to start this. This is my reboot, kinda, of my serious comic Transformers: Toy Battles. I say kinda because I'm ignoring most of the first arc from the past comic, so it won't be the exact same, hopefully better. I don't have much to offer just a short prologue to get back into the swing of things. I don't know when Chapter 1 will start, I could be a while after this. I'm still trying to write a script I like (I'm on my fourth re-write).

    So, here we go.

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    Not much happening, just the start of the War of the Collection and a few things to build on later.
     
  2. Ezilla82

    Ezilla82 Expect the Unexpected.

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    Looks good.
     
  3. tfmad2010

    tfmad2010 Oh Hai Internet!

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    It's interesting.
     
  4. GladiatorPrime

    GladiatorPrime working on Rampage P2-V2

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    Nice Start!
     
  5. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    *Grabs :popcorn *

    A very interesting start. Looking forward to seeing more! :D 
     
  6. Autobus Prime

    Autobus Prime Transit Former

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    :popcorn 

    Action!

    ...with cool effects, too.
    This should be fun. :) 
     
  7. myhobby

    myhobby ArigatouArigatouArigatou-

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    cool effects, cool customs, excellent start!
     
  8. primal primus

    primal primus Wants more Batman

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    :popcorn 
     
  9. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    Well that's an interesting start.
     
  10. Optimal Primus

    Optimal Primus Enabler

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    :popcorn 
     
  11. Sharktibolt

    Sharktibolt Well-Known Member

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    An 'explosive' way to start a comic! :D 

    :popcorn 
     
  12. Plastic_nomer

    Plastic_nomer Doing the unmentionables

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    And thus the awesomeness, that is CB/GF Prime/Convoy was played out again in the fray
     
  13. halconfenix

    halconfenix Anime Geek!

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  14. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    Interesting.
     
  15. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    Aaah, usage of Star Saber and Victory Leo here? :) 

    And otherwise...

    :popcorn 
     
  16. Strarf

    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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    :D  Thanks. I was hoping to make a good start.
     
  17. Autobot Burnout

    Autobot Burnout SANTARN IS COMING AGAIN TFW2005 Supporter

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    Very nice, I have to say that nothing starts off a promising story such as a huge battle!

    Also, I thought it interesting that Megatron and Optimus Prime started rushing each other with fists, reminds me of the many times that happened in "Funness-on-a-stick!"
     
  18. halconfenix

    halconfenix Anime Geek!

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    ...with the exact same prime!
     
  19. Strarf

    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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    I was thinking more of the Cybertron cartoon, but I can see that.
     
  20. doomboy536

    doomboy536 Universe Onslaught fanboy

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    A very explosive start. Can't wait to see more!
     

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