Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by SilverBlade, Dec 5, 2006.
I finally got around to completing the top portion of Sky Lynx. Here it is. Feedback is encouraged!
Better than I could do,
But you wanted feedback
A little too shiney, can't see where the plane ends and the reflection begins.
Too thick, looks like a bad dimestore knockoff.
You did great work on the head though, so why didn't you round off the body?
I hate to be a bitch though, good work.
yeah maybe drop the reflection down 50%. You don't see too much Sky Lynx art Now put up some images of the two pieces together.
Um, I no see nothing. Where is the pic?
Looking promising d00d, but the reflections are indeed WAY too strong; he looks almost transparent because of it.
It has potential.
i like it and its way better thn i could do but it looks a bit to legoie lol if ya get what i mean but well done otherwise
I think you should take some time to refine it from this point on. I mean you've got the basic shape, but there's no sophistication in the design, it's all hard straight corners. Heck, even the wings are blocky. I think you're too dependent on standard geometrical shapes at this point in time. However, that's the basics.
Now that you've got the basics under control, I'd go back and start upgrading each part's geometry to make him look more advanced, more complex, and by detailing it it'll look much larger and real.
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