Added some Panel Lines and Red Lips. I think she looks better. Closer Pic. Its Blurry I will try and get a better shot.
sharpies look awful. for a bit of panel lining, they're okay, but for anything that'll draw attention, use something else.
Close its a red Extra Fine Paint Pen. Not a Marker. Correct and the wings, arms, waist and her hip packs.
What did you use for the black? I agree, sharpies tend to look terrible. Black always gives off this strange reddish color under light. -G