Not bad! Definitely has the face hugging plate look that Andrew Wildman drew.

I'd say paint/draw in the black vertical lines to section it like the bottom picture.
Although that woulda bin effectiver if you'd left it Gray.

 

Not really. He's a harrier jet which can take off vertically. Hence, the name Lift Off.

 

Oh, your name makes lots of sense.
But Blast Off as a non-shuttle is disappointing. No excuses for Hasbro.

 

Oh, I agree. That's why I'm calling him Lift Off. Lift Off is not Blast Off, he's a new character. Blast Off is being made by Takara.

 

I'm sorry but that does not look good