Stylin Online T-Shirts
 
Register Rules Be A Supporter Members List Social Groups Mark Forums Read
Hobby Link Japan TFSource Big Bad Toy Store Robot Kingdom ToyArena Captured Prey

Starfire22's Profile

Starfire22 Starfire22 is offline

Swerve's bartender.

Visitor Messages

Showing Visitor Messages 21 to 30 of 517
  1. 07-06-2014 06:29 PM - permalink
    Hadlen_Weltall
    Hadlen_Weltall
    Thanks for keeping the humor alive in the Gundam model thread! happy building!
  2. 07-01-2014 09:47 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    I understand completely- I have SO MANY plot threads that have gone unresolved and I've forgotten about (such as Sharkticomics Soundwave and Swindle). I've actually toyed with the idea of a fan fiction that chronicles their attempts to return to Sharkticomics.
  3. 07-01-2014 06:15 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    [part 2]Another example is that, in my first appearance, there is nothing in the comic that says that Crosshairs is LegoTFGuy, just a side note after the comic. As such, the humor of my line about Scoop wanting to ban Bronies is lost on the audience the first time they read it.

    Also with this is the fact that you haven't established anything about the MMS or who is a part of it, despite that being the main concept that the comic is based on. A better intro comic would have you talking to me and Warpshard about something to do with the MMS, including plenty of name drops so we know who's who.
  4. 07-01-2014 06:15 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    [part 1]I think it's biggest flaw at this point is that you don't introduce the character's personalities, but rather just have them in some random situation. Some personalities parts are implied- such as your cracks at Kup for being an old fart. But beyond that his personality needs to be developed. The most important thing to remember when story writing is that the audience doesn't know everything about the characters- you need to explain it to them. (Also, unless Kup being old plays a major part in the comic, I would have suggested making a different first comic that establishes the setting and using the Kup gag later.)
  5. 07-01-2014 03:28 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    I think two updates per day is about the most frequent that update should be released, so your pace is just fine.
  6. 06-30-2014 05:48 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    Year of combiners next year! (I'm going to need more money...) Also Brainstorm.

    No idea.
  7. 06-30-2014 01:22 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    Nothing really. You?
  8. 05-21-2014 07:02 PM - permalink
    Moy
    Moy
    You're sig!!!! LMAO!
  9. 05-01-2014 11:50 AM - permalink
    Haloid1177
    Haloid1177
    Because they don't know you didn't, you didn't handle the situation maturely and there around a bunch of curse words at her, and threatened to call the cops when she said she would. You don't look good in this regardless of what you know.
  10. 04-25-2014 07:31 PM - permalink
    WhiteMocha
    WhiteMocha
    Thanks, that's fair. Apologies for being overly negative and sarcastic, I think I just get rubbed the wrong way when people generalize about entire states/cities/whatever (and particularly when people casually throw around death wishes... I know it's not serious, it's just obnoxious). Honestly you had the most reasonable opinion in the thread, an opinion that I share (that I wouldn't remove any particular city or state from the country). I guess that's why I was puzzled about your reasons for starting the thread. I should have either stated my opinions more diplomatically or just stayed out of it altogether though. Just hit a few triggers for me, I guess. Sorry!

About Me

  • About Starfire22
    Collection Count
    Dunno, you count them.
    Favorite TF Character
    Black shadow. (victory), animated wreck gar, and armada starscream.
    Favorite TF Toy
    Dont have a favorite.
    Favorite TF Generation
    G1, BW, R.I.D, and animated.
    Favorite TF TV Series
    G1, BW, R.I.D, armada, cybertron, animated, and prime.
    About Me
    Im a nice person once you get to know me, if anyone has anything to say to me please PM me.
    Location
    The middle of america.
    Gender
    Male
  • Signature

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Ranger Silver 6 View Post
    Look at your bot, now back to me
    Look at you bot, and back to me.
    Sadly, he isn't me...I'm on a liger

Statistics

Total Posts
Visitor Messages
General Information
  • Last Activity: Today 11:15 AM
  • Join Date: 08-25-2010

Friends

Showing Friends 1 to 10 of 27
Big Bad Toy Store