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  1. 08-22-2014 05:31 PM - permalink
    nobleboivin
    nobleboivin
  2. 08-22-2014 07:32 AM - permalink
    nobleboivin
    nobleboivin
    Saw what Chaos Incarnate said and he shouldn't have said it. I think he's just overreacting.
  3. 07-18-2014 10:08 AM - permalink
    nobleboivin
    nobleboivin
    Oh okay. Thanks.
  4. 07-17-2014 06:23 PM - permalink
    nobleboivin
    nobleboivin
    Do I need to ask anyone's permission if I want to make a character that's from the MMS? I have an idea for a plot line but I didn't want anyone to get mad at me either.
  5. 07-06-2014 06:40 PM - permalink
    Hadlen_Weltall
    Hadlen_Weltall
    Hard to pick just one except for the television series part of the Cosmic Era.
  6. 07-06-2014 06:29 PM - permalink
    Hadlen_Weltall
    Hadlen_Weltall
    Thanks for keeping the humor alive in the Gundam model thread! happy building!
  7. 07-01-2014 09:47 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    I understand completely- I have SO MANY plot threads that have gone unresolved and I've forgotten about (such as Sharkticomics Soundwave and Swindle). I've actually toyed with the idea of a fan fiction that chronicles their attempts to return to Sharkticomics.
  8. 07-01-2014 06:15 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    [part 2]Another example is that, in my first appearance, there is nothing in the comic that says that Crosshairs is LegoTFGuy, just a side note after the comic. As such, the humor of my line about Scoop wanting to ban Bronies is lost on the audience the first time they read it.

    Also with this is the fact that you haven't established anything about the MMS or who is a part of it, despite that being the main concept that the comic is based on. A better intro comic would have you talking to me and Warpshard about something to do with the MMS, including plenty of name drops so we know who's who.
  9. 07-01-2014 06:15 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    [part 1]I think it's biggest flaw at this point is that you don't introduce the character's personalities, but rather just have them in some random situation. Some personalities parts are implied- such as your cracks at Kup for being an old fart. But beyond that his personality needs to be developed. The most important thing to remember when story writing is that the audience doesn't know everything about the characters- you need to explain it to them. (Also, unless Kup being old plays a major part in the comic, I would have suggested making a different first comic that establishes the setting and using the Kup gag later.)
  10. 07-01-2014 03:28 PM - permalink
    LegoTFGuy
    LegoTFGuy
    I think two updates per day is about the most frequent that update should be released, so your pace is just fine.

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