I think making Ishmael more of an ass to others in the first-person revision, but still not giving up on them even if he's alienating himself would work better.

Since the two songs I see for him are both by Hollywood Undead: We Are and Bullet.

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new avatar i see

Can I PM you the little bit I've written of the ALT 'Prologue' (the plane scene) in first-person?

i saw Iron Man 3

Taking advice from a story writing book I have, I'm writing three scenes that are floating in my head to give me something to write towards in A Thousand Lies.

And one line, but that stems from Grimwing's kickass toy.

The next chapter of "Return to Cybertron" is up now if you'd like to read it.

Return to Cybertron (Part 2)

Well, it could work as a highlight of Grimlock's brutal yet compassionate nature, and I could throw in several individuals (Wheeljack, Kup, Brawn, and a few others) who, though not future Dinobots, fit the team's mentality.

Weiss' Myrtenaster is by far my favorite of the weapons, even moreso than the Crescent Rose (even though I loved Soul in Soul Eater). As for Blake, we'll have to see. If she wasn't third I'd think better of her, because having Ruby and Weiss come beforehand really made high expectations. She's got potential though. And Yellow is supposed to be out mid May, but I hate the color so it'll have to be really something to sway my mind.

Not ever going to post it, but I've got a story idea that I may write and pitch to Hasbro in my quest to be a Transformers official writer.

How the hell did Grimlock found the Lightning Strike Coalition, and why did he pick such volatile individuals for it?