Sorry, I've been busy this week! It was a great chapter!

Off the top of my head;

“But anyway, according to him, “your heroics must be rewarded, your status as a Major is renewed and you should assemble a team of your own as soon as you are able.””

His paraphrase of Ultra Magnus should have singular... things, like these ' ', rather than the double " "

Thus;

“But anyway, according to him, 'your heroics must be rewarded, your status as a Major is renewed and you should assemble a team of your own as soon as you are able.'”

The single digits help identify his relay

And this:

“Well then, let’s get ready for our next adventure!” Optimus put his hands on his hips proudly, to the laughing cheers of the others.

I think he should have a declarative word there, such as, well, declared. Since it's his first of a sentence, it helps make it a bit more concise then going to his physical action

Huzzah

okay thx

is there any after-credits scene in Iron Man 3?, NO SPOILERS plz, just tell me if there's one or not

Huzzah!

Would you mind having a quick glance at TF Meta? I've nearly finished the third episode

It's a fun story; glad to review

No problem at all, Ironhide! I shall check it out straight-away!

The Return (Part 2) is now up! Sorry for the long delay. Hope you enjoy

Awesome. Sounds great.