I'll take a look at it now! Thanks for letting me know.

Thanks. Writing fight scenes is a real strong suit of yours. Great development of Optimus as well; what happened to him on that doomed mission has really affect him hard so he refuses to let anything like it happen again.

Blurr is an enigma; is there more than meets the eye, or is he just a jerk?

For the record, I'm 99% sure it's the first one.

Thanks!

No prob man I like reading your fan fic, it's a really good one !

It didn't seem like you had time to get your sections done; so you've been benched for the rest of Episode 3 and potentially for Episode 5. You'll be a part of Season 2 discussions and writing for certain though.

United is currently moving at a slow rate, but that'll change soon. So I imagine you'll be back in with us within a month or two.

Nothing personal, man; I think you are awesome; but I do expect more than what you were giving. I think you are perfectly capable of it, though.

Oh cool! Didn't know ya had it up, I guess I'm gonna have to go give it a read then !

hey

I read a portion of Broken just a few minutes ago.

I must say, as will be reflected on my review, it is very interesting.

What else would they say?

What all was there? I don't remember.