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Chapter 5 The two cloaked figures made their way through the darkness. Moonlight shone down on the filthy street. Dirt kicked up with every...
Chapter 4 In the weeks since he was accepted into the Pax Olympia, Hayden's world view had very much changed and he still wasn't sure how he...
Chapter 3 As sunlight shone through the window of his private office, King Atlas Stritan paced back and forth, crossing the light cast upon...
Chapter 2 The majesty sickened him. The ostentatious displays. The regal surroundings. The delusions of grandeur. Greggor fought to keep...
I’m writing a sci-fi epic about the lost continent of Atlantis. It’s still untitled. I would love feed back and constructive criticism. I’ve...
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