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Krem
05-30-2008, 12:03 PM
WARNING: If you read this, you may find yourself addicted to my marvelous tale!!!


Deep in the underground cities of Gigantion, the Mini-Cons live, for fear of being squished by their giant "Bulk" friends. The Great War spread even here, where the young 'bot Rodimus Prime heroically stood up against Galvatron's group of Decepticons and prevented them from leaving Gigantion to assisit Megatron on Cybertron. Optimus never knew about this, indeed, only the Mini-Cons knew these tales.
But The War is over now. The four factions, Autobot, Decepticon, Maximal, and Predacon, are little more than American Earth's political parties now.
And Ransack, a rather small Decepticon, is running late for a very important meeting....

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5920/matrixpanel1lk9.png (http://imageshack.us)

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For those of you who didn't figure it out, Ransack is late for a meeting of the Mini-Con Council of Sages because he over-energized the night before.

Ransack hates hangovers.

a good and interasting start
good beginning

RANSACK IS SHORT!!!!!
Yes, he is. :D

So is Undermine, but he doesn't care cuz he's a Predacon.
"Welcome, Ransack. You are late." :lolol

Nice start :)
Yes, nice job so far!
Actually, Teletraan I's voice is the computer voice LH Michelle if you wanna hear how that would sound!

P.S. Tell your friends about this, I need more readers!
Hey that's cool, photocomic interspersed with text dialog.

Looking good so far!
Huh. Some of the editing ain't that bad.
Nice start. :thumb
interesting, it's taking a while to load because i've reached my bandwidth cap for the month, but a promising start
Rather interesting so far. I'm curious as to what you plan to do with the story.
No one can guess. NO ONE! NO ONE!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! :ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev:


Ahem. Erm, I mean, it's a surprise. However; it will involve a battle. For The Matrix. :D
is it a battle for the matrix?

lol
Are we sure it's not a battle for the Tri-Force? :D
K:
Always good to see somebody finding a little Cybertron in everyday objects. :D Keep up the good work.
Yeah, I was also amazed at how well it looked (except the carpet) It's Gigantion, BTW.

In case anyone was curious:

Gigantonian Street = Treadmill
Council Citadel = A packaging thingy for my Hyper Dash game
Council Chambers Wall = Wall :D
Hand-scanning thingamajig = Piece of orange clay
Council Chambers floor = Big white sewing table
Other Wall in the Council Chambers = A BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG piece of paper
Council Chambers Table = Piece of cardboard and an old shoebox

From now on, I'll explain ALL my props at the end of the comic if you like!
I think that would be kind of cool, a webcomic I read called "Perils of the Bold" does that sort of explanation and I like it.
Just wait till you see what we have planned for our next update...

well, next after next.

or next after next after next... well, we have a pretty good 1 coming up soon. but it's still more proluge. I'm his sister who helps write it. ;) i have no idea what the point of this thing is but i like tacos-->:hookday
mmm tacos.
tacos rule
Tacos are yucky and most certainly do not rule. I hate tacos. So can we please STAY ON TOPIC?

For instance, what do you think the council is discussing?


And if you're gonna say "what kind of taco to eat for lunch" the just SHUT UP.
ok theyre gonna decide what 2 put on their pizza :D
Pedro like... Pedro want see more!!!
Short Ransack is short.
Huge Optimus Prime is Rodimus Prime.
Huh.
Interesting twist, that. I'm liking it!

a comic to rival Shane's? Ho ho, with that kind of a benchmark, expectations from us readers are going to be high. :ev:

That was my intent.
:ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev::ev:

And if you look in the next update later this week, Prime is: Mistransformed so his knees are flamey, has his rubber tires and those shoulder thingies removed, and has a mouth. :D
And now, more comic!

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/7297/secondupdatepanel1lh2.png (http://imageshack.us)

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http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/6015/secondupdatepanel4le8.png (http://imageshack.us)

Oh, a cliffhanger....
Ain't I a stinker? :ev:

Props/Sets:
No new props or sets today.
good questions there...
I don't remember you.....

But yeah, Mr. Annoucer(me) will be at the end of each comic making you hate him and leave you wondering all the time. :ev:
Tough noodles?!:peoples: Nobody says tough noodles!! :crazy:
Tough TACOS! :hookday
I love Drake and Josh. :D

WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT TACOS?!?!?!!! :mad
Hey, look it's next week's update posted early!

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Props/Sets: handheld Holo-projector = plastic bead, piece of a colored toothpick, and some clay
I miss my readers.
you have them


post more comics, then more readers will come and comment
Ah, but I just gave you an early update.
Here's the next part!

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/5363/panel1oy4.png (http://imageshack.us)

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Props/Sets:
Door - Paper with insignia on it
Dissapearium - Photoshopped Glowy Clay
This is quite good.
My comic is quite good! Yay!!! :D
Wasn't I supposed to do something this week? Wash dishes? Spring cleaning?

Noooooo.....

Update comic!!!!

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5024/panel1as1.bmp (http://imageshack.us)
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Go hang on a cliff! :ev:

This was all copied from the fanfic thread but I moved it to the funnies for more readers!

Wael
05-30-2008, 12:33 PM
Nicccceeee!

Krem
05-30-2008, 12:37 PM
Nicccceeee!

Next update is forthcoming.

Krem
05-30-2008, 12:43 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6880/theshortestupdateofalltqh7.png (http://imageshack.us)

The shortest update of all time. :ev:

You are NOT lucky, I'm going on vacation next week.

Autovolt 127
05-30-2008, 03:03 PM
:lol

Chaos Incarnate
05-30-2008, 03:07 PM
I'm sure I won't be the last one to point this out, but do you know how simple it would have been to ask a moderator to move the thread to the Funnies Forum?

Krem
05-30-2008, 03:17 PM
I'm sure I won't be the last one to point this out, but do you know how simple it would have been to ask a moderator to move the thread to the Funnies Forum?

:eek: They can do that?!?

Erm, oops? :o

D.Lloyd1990
05-30-2008, 03:34 PM
Nice comic Krem :D

Krem
06-06-2008, 05:58 PM
Nice comic Krem :D

Thanks, Dom!

Krem
06-11-2008, 11:51 AM
Sorry I haven't updated lately, but the FX are HARD. Should see one next week or sooner.

Anodythe
06-11-2008, 12:49 PM
Nicely done! It's also quite nice to begin to read your contribution at its start. Lately, I've found myself doubling over in laughter at one or another of the funnies,only to eventually see that it was posted last year. We will definately keep up with this one.

Krem
06-11-2008, 01:24 PM
Nicely done! It's also quite nice to begin to read your contribution at its start. Lately, I've found myself doubling over in laughter at one or another of the funnies,only to eventually see that it was posted last year. We will definately keep up with this one.

This is my serious sillyness.* I've also got a just plain CRAZY** comic that I make with my sister.

*Sig link.
**again.

Krem
06-18-2008, 12:25 PM
Sorry, still no update, I have been busy with school these past few weeks. But I *think* Friday may possibly maybe see an update.

Krem
06-23-2008, 09:33 AM
I know you are probably so tired of waiting you forgot about this comic, but finishing up school leaves little time for comicing.

Hopefully an update will come soon.

Hopefully.

ShinkisRule
06-23-2008, 02:43 PM
:tumbleweed:

Z.U.D.O.N
06-23-2008, 09:24 PM
Just read ur comics. Not so bad :) The story needs to continue to have us stick with it longer though... XD

Anyway, I'm sure we understand how school works --> Less time for your own stuff.. :S I'll wait for your updates dude, so just do your thing when you can do it! :D

Krem
06-24-2008, 11:19 AM
Just read ur comics. Not so bad :) The story needs to continue to have us stick with it longer though... XD

Anyway, I'm sure we understand how school works --> Less time for your own stuff.. :S I'll wait for your updates dude, so just do your thing when you can do it! :D

Thanks, Z.U.D.O.N., glad to have you as a reader. And good news, everyone who's still here, I'm gonna be done with school by the end of the week! Which means not only more comic updates, but the Video mini-seires on YouTube will appear as well! The comic will still have extra scenes though, specifically, this Prologue!

Krem
06-27-2008, 01:13 PM
What was it I needed to do? Wash dishes? No, it's Shinkis' week for that. Fold laundry? No, the dryer hasn't stopped yet...

Something that rhymes with cupcake vomit........

UPDATE COMIC!

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Krem
07-29-2008, 10:29 AM
And now, the almost-done-with-the-prologue update!

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/KremzeekRulz/BFTM/almost_the_end_of_prologue.bmp

The Autobot writing says "Pause."

Z.U.D.O.N
07-29-2008, 10:48 AM
Interesting ^^

Autovolt 127
07-29-2008, 04:13 PM
Oh Geez ransack and Undermine...The Autobots are screwed.

Krem
07-30-2008, 01:29 PM
Oh Geez ransack and Undermine...The Autobots are screwed.
1. I don't get it.
2. I thought I made it clear THERE IS NO WAR. It's OVER. DONE. FINITO. Though, power-mad freaks like Ravage still exist and some Autobots and Decepticons and Maximals and Predacons don't get along. Then, there's the Vehicon uprising, but, I'm getting ahead of myself. :D

Krem
08-22-2008, 12:00 PM
Okay this one's a doozey:
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http://www.majhost.com/gallery/KremzeekRulz/BFTM/naturedial.bmp
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http://www.majhost.com/gallery/KremzeekRulz/BFTM/end.bmp

So long everyone, it's been fun.

O_O

http://www.nickkelsch.com/transformers/SDicons/wheeliemaul.gif :ev:

Ironhide2005
08-22-2008, 12:13 PM
Awsome