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[ironkaty]

this my fisrt time writeing hope yuo like

i woke up feeling sore and then it came back to me in a flash . A great battle agaisnt megatron and me ironhide running to meet him with the others a big bang the nothing until i woke up in med bay and ratchet smileing down at me" hello mate next time jump away form the blast not in it

[Rhinox007]

It sounds ok, but next time, just a good tip, before you post, reread your text and undo your mistakes. it's a comon mistake of first-time wrighters

[ironkaty]

ok thanks for the tip