Lost Hero

[Ripclaw]

here is my first story arc(which i will make up as i go lol)

this is just the prologue (no actual pictures yet)

i will update this weekly starting when i can

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2594/lostheroepilogueqz9.png

tell me what you like and what you dont like about it

and offer some solutions on how to make it better (aka constructive criticism)

[Ripclaw]

i have one update for this (still no pics yet, need to replace batteries in camera)

anyway

i have everything set up for the first pics.

i will take them as soon as i can.

[Ripclaw]

update

i have it ready

just need to figure out how to keep it the real size

[Ripclaw]

ugh sorry for so many empty posts

[Icespark]

The strange symbol-like language you placed above and below your introductions text was well done! I like the way the text seems to have a three-dimensional quality to it. :D Could it actually be translated into an English equivalent? Also, is this story focused on the Decepticons or Autobots, and is the Lost Hero an Autobot or Decepticon? I look forward to seeing what kind of style you plan to use! :D

[Ripclaw]

The strange symbol-like language you placed above and below your introductions text was well done! I like the way the text seems to have a three-dimensional quality to it. :D Could it actually be translated into an English equivalent? Also, is this story focused on the Decepticons or Autobots, and is the Lost Hero an Autobot or Decepticon? I look forward to seeing what kind of style you plan to use! :D

that is an actual font called "ancient autobot"

i typed what i wanted it to say

then i retyped it (copy and paste) in a font called "convoy"

and the lost hero is an autobot

and here is the first one

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[Evertransformin]

we'll you've caught my attention but... your panels appear out of order. maybe thats just my computer. I'm loving the ancient autobot text. can't wait to see more.

[Ripclaw]

we'll you've caught my attention but... your panels appear out of order. maybe thats just my computer. I'm loving the ancient autobot text. can't wait to see more.

i fixed it

there is still a 1 pixil gap but oh well

[Icespark]

Thank you for the information about the text font! This is certainly an interesting start! I look forward to seeing how your story develops! :D

[Ripclaw]

I look forward to seeing how your story develops! :D

so do i lol

[Autovolt 127]

Are you using Photoscape for this.

How do make a background to put your comics on,Can you upload it to photobucket

Nice job. :thumb:thumb:thumb

[Ripclaw]

Are you using Photoscape for this.

How do make a background to put your comics on,Can you upload it to photobucket

Nice job. :thumb:thumb:thumb

in order


no i am not using photoscape, i am using a gimp/ms paint combo

i made the background by just filling it in with purple (on ms paint)

that is where i have uploaded this to

[Ripclaw]

well, i decided to post whenever i can

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[Ripclaw]

sorry that is is squished

ill fix it after i fix the errors i have

[Autovolt 127]

The Decepticons should really watch their back.

How do you fill MS Paint with Red and Purple?

[Ripclaw]

The Decepticons should really watch their back.

How do you fill MS Paint with Red and Purple?

use the paint bucket

fill it with purple

then using a different ms paint window

use the rectangle tool and click the top right corner and move down to the bottom, stopping in the middle

then using the paint bucket tool again fill the rest of it with the other color

the cut and paste in the first window

[Icespark]

Your story is certainly picking up speed! I like the way you are using both versions of Bumblebee at once! I also got a laugh out of seeing Nemesis Breaker standing on his hands for no reason. I look forward to seeing what happens next! :D

[ShadowDragon]

I can't follow this one, having to go down a couple panels then back up, repeat. Since photobucket resized your format and made you chunk it up like that maybe you should just ditch the format and just post each panel separately like you were in the other strip? That way they'll be in order and you'll have more readers.

[Ripclaw]

I can't follow this one, having to go down a couple panels then back up, repeat. Since photobucket resized your format and made you chunk it up like that maybe you should just ditch the format and just post each panel separately like you were in the other strip? That way they'll be in order and you'll have more readers.

they are in order

it goes like this

panel 1
______panel 2
panel 3
______panel 4
so on and so forth

that is how i am making it

in order that way

[ShadowDragon]

Okay, I see, I have to maximize the browser just to read it properly, otherwise it splits everything weirdly.

[Grimlock_13]

Cool start!

Ol' Grimlock...when will he learn?

[Shane Anderson]

Yeah, some of the panels are out of order on my browser. Some of them are chopped in half too. It's strange.

On the other hand, I do like the Ancient Autobot type. I found that one myself somewhere, though I haven't found a use for it.

[The621]

It's meh and I have seen better. But you'd want to work on using Photoshop more like you do with your effects, rather than using MSPaint. Unless if you're just converting the JPEG files to PNG, and then converting it back to JPEG with Photoshop, that would be different.

[Ripclaw]

It's meh and I have seen better. But you'd want to work on using Photoshop more like you do with your effects, rather than using MSPaint. Unless if you're just converting the JPEG files to PNG, and then converting it back to JPEG with Photoshop, that would be different.

im not going to be using ms paint for the effects

im going to us gimp for the effects

paint for the words and placement of the pics

[The621]

Oh alright. I had a bad eye back there. Yeah. Gimp should work as well.

[Ripclaw]

here is part 3 of 4 or 5

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sorry for taking so long to update

and for anyone who asks

soundwave is outside of the picture (in the air)

[Icespark]

I like the effects you used for the lasers! :D I also like your transformation effects! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! :D

[TCracker]

Nice effects man!:thumbs2:

[Ripclaw]

I like the effects you used for the lasers! :D I also like your transformation effects! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! :D

thank you

and so do i

Nice effects man!:thumbs2:

thanks for that complement TCracker

it means alot coming from an effects master such as yourself

[DilaZirK]

I'm sorry Ripclaw, but the comic layout is rather confusing for me. It might be due my monitor's limited resolution (or my browser), but your comic panels currently look all chopped up with purple lines...

Still, what little can be seen about the FX looks brilliant.

[Autovolt 127]

So Brawl is in charge not Megatron?

How you do the transformation part?

[Ripclaw]

I'm sorry Ripclaw, but the comic layout is rather confusing for me. It might be due my monitor's limited resolution (or my browser), but your comic panels currently look all chopped up with purple lines...

Still, what little can be seen about the FX looks brilliant.

i guess ill chage it then

So Brawl is in charge not Megatron?

How you do the transformation part?

yes brawl is the leader of the decepticons

and its simple

kinda

just take 2 pictures

one of them in mid transformation

and one when they are finished

cut out each of the mid transformations and make them transparent with gimp or photoshop

then put them over the robot modes in the other picture and there you go

[Ripclaw]

update

i have taken the pictures

all i need to do now is get them onto my laptop

edit them

then post them

and seeing as how many of you are having problems viewing my pics as i was posting them

i will be posting them as i was in my funnies thread

until someone can give me some help on making it so everyone can view them without it being messed up

[Ripclaw]

here is episode 4

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[Autovolt 127]

So Galaxy Force Optimus is dead?

Wicked.

[Ripclaw]

So Galaxy Force Optimus is dead?

Wicked.

did you read the first thing?

there are no casualties

[TCracker]

I like the idea you named the other BB Yellowjacket. It gives him another character all together. Great stuff!

BTW, the post battle scene, you pop out the arms of legs of your toys? :D

[Shane Anderson]

Hey, I can read this one! :thumb

Weird seeing Megatron bossed around by Brawl. Then again, Brawl is much bigger.

[Ripclaw]

I like the idea you named the other BB Yellowjacket. It gives him another character all together. Great stuff!

BTW, the post battle scene, you pop out the arms of legs of your toys? :D

yeah, makes them look more battle damaged

Hey, I can read this one! :thumb

Weird seeing Megatron bossed around by Brawl. Then again, Brawl is much bigger.

brawl is the leader fo the decepticons

bumblebee and yellojacket are the leaders of the autobots

and currently

i just make it up as i go

[Ironhide2005]

Wait which is yellowjacket and which is bumblebee!?!:confused:

[Ripclaw]

Wait which is yellowjacket and which is bumblebee!?!:confused:

09 bb is bb

76 bb is YJ

[Ironhide2005]

09 bb is bb

76 bb is YJ

Oh okay wicked comic

[Autovolt 127]

yeah, makes them look more battle damaged



brawl is the leader fo the decepticons

bumblebee and yellojacket are the leaders of the decepticons

and currently

i just make it up as i go

BB and Yellowjacket are Decepticons?

[Ripclaw]

BB and Yellowjacket are Decepticons?

thanks for showing me that

i fixed it now

[Ripclaw]

Update

i have taken the pictures for Imprisioned Part 5

and will get them onto this computer soon and edit them

then i will post it

[Ripclaw]

ok here is episode 5

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[Ironhide2005]

Awsme!

[TCracker]

Rescue successful! Yay!

[Ripclaw]

Announcment

i will take little break from the story arc to think of a name for the next episode

and in the meantime i will post character profiles, i have the cards ready just need the pics, stats, and bios ready lol

i will post a sneak peek in a bit

[Ripclaw]

here it is

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/716/charactercardsneakpeekvv1.png

[Ripclaw]

the collectable character cards are no longer available

[Autovolt 127]

I'd like to know how you make Collectable Cards?

[Ripclaw]

I'd like to know how you make Collectable Cards?

well

first off

create what you want the character card to look like

then take one picture of the robot mode (take another pic of vehicle mode if you want)

then shrink it to fit in the picture part of the card

then create how you want the stats to look

then the rest is easy

just type up the name, function, faction, bio

then do whatever you want the stats to look like

[Ripclaw]

Collectable Character Cards are no longer available

[TCracker]

Great character cards. I 'll print them put as I did with Grimlock_13's. :D

[Autovolt 127]

Awesome. :thumbs2:

[DilaZirK]

Nicely done with the character cards! The stats and the profiles for each character are well thought out, and I particularly like your choice of a backdrop.

And of course, very interesting how Brawl and Bumblebee are in charge of their respective factions now instead of Megs & Ops.

[Deviant Anomaly]

Interesting concept. You have a good grasp of storylines and characterization. I'm glad to see you changed the format to a single collumn as well. The jumping back and forth between panels was confusing in the beginning.

Keep up the good work. :)

[Ripclaw]

i have the pictures for the last 6 character cards.

only 3 of them are on this computer currently

also i have created a name for the next chapter of the story arc

it is going to be called "recr..." just a little teaser for ya actually

find out the name when i post it (which will be a week after i post the last 3 character cards) at which point, all the character cards shall be removed

[Ripclaw]

Collectable Character Cards are no longer available

[Autovolt 127]

well

here are three more Collectable Character Cards

and they are a special three, its the three prisioners

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1472/convoycharactercardtg2.png

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/7017/redalertcharactercardby7.png

That was funny.

[Ripclaw]

Collectable Character Cards are no longer available

[Autovolt 127]

Megatron is the Starscream,Awesome.

[Ripclaw]

update time

i got the pics edited and done

now just need to wait for the 14th to come by then i can post

oh and its going to be big

also i actually planned a little bit of this one (the episode i will be posting isnt actually part of the next chapter)

[Ripclaw]

i cant wait

so here is episode 6

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the collectable character cards are still avalable until the 14th

[Autovolt 127]

This is getting good.

So Optimus Prime can no longer fight.....Would this mean they may have to do a Spark trans-plant.

[Ripclaw]

This is getting good.

So Optimus Prime can no longer fight.....Would this mean they may have to do a Spark trans-plant.

you forgot about grimlock

but as you can see, he is going to recover soon

but prime

im not going to say anything other than

hes going to ........

[Autovolt 127]

you forgot about grimlock

but as you can see, he is going to recover soon

but prime

im not going to say anything other than

hes going to ........

Alright Grimlock's gonna kick butt again.

Prime's going to be placed into a new body?

[Fez Findie]

Brawl: Wastes no time in notifying his troops.

[Ripclaw]

later today

i might get a new delux figure to add to the comics

so i will take the pictures when i can, then update on thursday

[Ripclaw]

Prime's going to be placed into a new body?

im not going to spoil something from my own story arc

so im not going to say anything other than "prime is going to......." that is all

[TCracker]

Hmm...I wonder what reinforcements they will be getting?

[Shane Anderson]

Nice job with the storytelling. :thumb

[Ripclaw]

Nice job with the storytelling. :thumb

to be honest

i just make it up as i go

i just dont have enough patience to write out the story before hand

[Ripclaw]

i have the new transformer now

got him yesterday

will he be Autobot

or Decepticon

you will find out tomorrow.

[Ripclaw]

guess what

it is officially the 14th for me

so here is the next update

and autovolt, get rid of the quote you have of the character cards plz

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[Autovolt 127]

WOOT landmine!

Wow you're starting to get on a roll Ripclaw.

Tonight, I'l hopefully get my Movie Landmine.

[TCracker]

Gearshot - Small guy with a big kahuna of a gun. :D

[Icespark]

I just got caught up! I'm sorry I haven't been able to post for so long. Your story is really getting interesting. I really enjoyed seeing Brawl lose his temper and shoot his cannon into the air, and I loved Grimlock speaking like Wheelie! That joke was particularly hilarious! :lol I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next! :D

[Shane Anderson]

to be honest

i just make it up as i go

i just dont have enough patience to write out the story before hand

That's pretty much what I do too. Not with Vehitopia of course; that needs plotting and planning. But with my funnies, it's all made up as I go.

[Ripclaw]

i have the pictures for episod 8 on my computer

i have shrunk and added effects to most of them

and i will finish it either later tonight, or monday

[Ripclaw]

here is the next episode

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[TCracker]

Dude! Nice flashback!

[Ripclaw]

Dude! Nice flashback!

and there are more to come

and ill say this, another movieformer will be in the next one

heh heh

that is all im saying for now

[Autovolt 127]

and there are more to come

and ill say this, another movieformer will be in the next one

heh heh

that is all im saying for now

Can i guess Your Brothers Nightwatch Optimus Prime..

[Ripclaw]

Can i guess Your Brothers Nightwatch Optimus Prime..

DAMN!!!!

>_>
<_<

i mean

no

[Autovolt 127]

DAMN!!!!

>_>
<_<

i mean

no

It is cuase it's the only other Movie-former in your house.

[Ripclaw]

It is cuase it's the only other Movie-former in your house.

he isnt in my house

[Autovolt 127]

he isnt in my house

My bad.

[Icespark]

I really liked the flashback! :) You certainly gave Landmine a unique motive for wanting to fight Brawl! By the way, I noticed Grimlock is there. Has he recovered? I'm looking forward to seeing what happens! :D

[Ripclaw]

I really liked the flashback! :) You certainly gave Landmine a unique motive for wanting to fight Brawl! By the way, I noticed Grimlock is there. Has he recovered? I'm looking forward to seeing what happens! :D

if you look closely, he isnt standing on his feet, he is on his hands and knees

so he is still injured, just not that badly

[Shane Anderson]

:thumb

[Ripclaw]

the long awaited episode 9

sorry it took so long, i needed to wait until the weather was sunny outside so i could take the last 2 pics, i also have the pics for episode 10 as well

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[Autovolt 127]

I liked the last two pics.

I wish all the snow was gone, Wjere do you live Ripclaw, Cuase i'm getting sick of snow in Ottawa.

[Ripclaw]

I liked the last two pics.

I wish all the snow was gone, Wjere do you live Ripclaw, Cuase i'm getting sick of snow in Ottawa.

im in the country below you

and on the west coast

[Shane Anderson]

"Everyone, meet out in the yard beside the giant shadow." :lol :lol

[Autovolt 127]

im in the country below you

and on the west coast

California?

[Ripclaw]

"Everyone, meet out in the yard beside the giant shadow." :lol :lol

that was in the park

California?

nope

north 2 states

[Icespark]

I'm sorry that I've been gone for so long. :( I like that the story has moved outside! It makes for a very interesting visual contrast with the previous parts of the story! :D I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! :D

[Ripclaw]

new update later today

plus the next episode after that update will be a suprize

[Autovolt 127]

that was in the park



nope

north 2 states

Washington?

[Ripclaw]

Washington?

correct

[Ripclaw]

ok

sorry for lack of episodes

but my laptop (which has the pictures to the next episode on it) is down for now

hopefully i can get it back up soon

both its battery and powercord are kaput

[Ripclaw]

i will be getting a new powercord for my laptop soon

hopefully my computer isnt kaput

[Icespark]

Good luck! :D I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your story! :D

[Ripclaw]

i have the new power cord

but my computer still isnt working yet

so if it doesnt work soon, ill get a new battery for it

and still, i hope my computer isnt fcked

[Icespark]

Can the computer turn on? Or is it not coming on at all? Either way, I hope that it can be repaired easily! I'll be lookg forward to seeing your return! :D

[Ripclaw]

Can the computer turn on? Or is it not coming on at all?

it isnt turning on at all

which makes me think it is the battery

but still...

[Icespark]

That does sound like a battery problem.... Unlikely as this is the problem, you can try checking to make certain the battery is locked down completely. Also check to make sure the power cord is in all the way. Make certain to check the warranty for it too.

[Ripclaw]

That does sound like a battery problem.... Unlikely as this is the problem you can try checking to make certain the battery is locked down completely. Also check to make sure the power cord is in all the way.

the powercord is pluged in completely

and the battery is locked in place

[Icespark]

The only other thing I can think of is maybe try a different power outlet. Perhaps the wall plug is not giving the computer any power.

[Ripclaw]

The only other thing I can think of is maybe try a different power outlet. Perhaps the wall plug is not giving the computer any power.

i just did that

[Icespark]

Well, I can think of one more thing you can try, but check the instruction book before you do. Try to find out if your computer can be run straight off of wall-supplied power without the battery. If the instruction book says this is possible, you can try removing the battery and seeing if it works off of just the power cord. Make certain to check the instruction book first though. The computer will be damaged if this isn't allowed. Make certain to take safety precautions as well.

[Ripclaw]

Well, I can think of one more thing you can try, but check the instruction book before you do. Try to find out if your computer can be run straight off of wall-supplied power without the battery. If the instruction book says this is possible, you can try removing the battery and seeing if it works off of just the power cord. Make certain to check the instruction book first though. The computer will be damaged if this isn't allowed. Make certain to take safety precautions as well.

it wont work without the battery

[Icespark]

I'm sorry, That was the only other suggestion I could make. :( I will be waiting to see your return though! :D

[Ripclaw]

I'm sorry, That was the only other suggestion I could make. :( I will be waiting to see your return though! :D

if my computer never works again, ill just do a quick drawing of what happens

[Icespark]

if my computer never works again, ill just do a quick drawing of what happens

That's determination! :D I'll be looking forward to it! :D

[Ripclaw]

not an episode

but here is what they are doing with their time off

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[ShadowDragon]

Truck pong FTW!

[Icespark]

:lol This was hilarious! :lol I never saw this coming! It took me a moment to realize what was happening, and I really found this hilarious! :lol When I saw the two Primes, the last thing I expected was Pong! :lol You really did a nice job with the effects to! :D I'll be looking forward to seeing what you come up with next! :D

[Ripclaw]

Truck pong FTW!

just wait until i post the next part XD

:lol This was hilarious! :lol I never saw this coming! It took me a moment to realize what was happening, and I really found this hilarious! :lol When I saw the two Primes, the last thing I expected was Pong! :lol You really did a nice job with the effects to! :D I'll be looking forward to seeing what you come up with next! :D

thanks

[Coolhand]

Optimus Pong!
That-is-AWESOME!
"One shall stand, one shall miss the ball..."

[Autovolt 127]

Truck pong. :lol :lol :lol

What with Energon Prime's Window?

[Ripclaw]

Truck pong. :lol :lol :lol

What with Energon Prime's Window?

it is scratched up

OKAAAAY?!

>_>
<_<

and im hyper

[Ripclaw]

good news bad news moment

i got a new laptop

but my other one is kaput

so the next ep will take a while to complete cause i will be drawing it by hand (and from my head)

[Icespark]

I'm sorry that you other computer failed. :( I'll be looking forward to seeing what you come up with! :D

[Ripclaw]

ok, so i may have to just type what happened

and all that

not even a beginning thingy either

well

here that is no pic

Lost Hero Episode 10

Cease Fire Part 2

The leaders of both factions make a deal so that both sides can recover.

there you go

[Ripclaw]

i have come to a decision

seeing as i dont have enough time or patience or the attention span to draw each frame

im going to just type it all up, but not a very long thing where its one paragraph just to explain a tiny detail or anything like that, no, this is going to be the short and sweet version


anyway, no actual talking will be typed up, just what happened in general

in between episodes, the autobots transformed. Brawl, Bumblebee, and yellojacket decide to have their groups leave, except for one extra on both sides: Gearshot and Landmine. Bumblebee, Yellowjacket, and Brawl talk about a truce until both sides have recovred. They will have Red Alert install bombs into all the troops so that if any decepticon is hurt by an autobot, then that autobot will be destroyed, same with if an autobot is hurt by a decepticon. Brawl and Bumblebee shake hands and both sides go home.

[Ripclaw]

NEW PICTURE!!!!

just a preview of the next comic (i will actually take pics tomorrow or thursday, sometime after i get home)

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7770/bootupscreenpreviewsi4.png

[Icespark]

I'll be looking forward to seeing it! :D

[ShadowDragon]

zomg Rippy's back!

[Ripclaw]

i will be getting home tomorrow night as i said

i might be able to update then, idk, but i will be able to update soon

ill take the pics tomorrow for sure (unless i get home LATE late)

[Ripclaw]

what you see there a few posts ago is the first pic in the next episode

and right now i have the first 4 (including the first) done

all i need is to get home and take pictures to finish it

[TCracker]

Take your time...I bet it will be awesum

[Ripclaw]

Thanks TCracker

but i dont really like taking things too slow

so this update may look a bit sloppy on the gimping but oh well

[ShadowDragon]

but i dont really like taking things too slow

You don't say. :lol

[Ripclaw]

dammit

all my movieformers plus cybertron soundwave have disappeared

>.<

so until i find them i cant update

[ShadowDragon]

disappeared?

[Ripclaw]

disappeared?

yup

but i know one thing

they will be all together in one bag

plus in their own baggies (some are double baggied)

[Icespark]

I hope you find your Transformers! I know I would probably be going insane trying to locate them! :( I'll be looking forward to seeing this new installment! :D

[Autovolt 127]

yup

but i know one thing

they will be all together in one bag

plus in their own baggies (some are double baggied)

You said to me earlier that you wanted to bring your movie-formers and Soundwave to Michigan maybe they might be in the car? and maybe forgot to take them out?

Check everywhere it should be hard to find transformers?

[Ripclaw]

You said to me earlier that you wanted to bring your movie-formers and Soundwave to Michigan maybe they might be in the car? and maybe forgot to take them out?

Check everywhere it should be hard to find transformers?

that is the problem

they didnt get to go with

[Ripclaw]

well, even without my missing transformers (blackout is needed, but oh well) i made an update

it will be up sometime later today (after i get some things in order on this computer)

[Ripclaw]

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[GladiatorPrime]

:popcorn

[ShadowDragon]

:lol long-legimus Prime

[Autovolt 127]

Since when did you have a movie Vyoager Megatron....Your collection is really shaping up.

So atleast you found Cybertron Prime and Red Alert.

[Coolhand]

Nice effects on Prime's boot-up HUD. And :lol at his legs comment.
I suspect Magnus might be about to experience pain...

[Icespark]

Hi Ripclaw,

I'm sorry to hear that you still haven't found your Transformers! :( I'm wishing you the best of luck in getting them back!

This newest comic was really interesting! :D I'm really wondering what Optimus's new body is. I'm also wondeing how Megatron vs. Magnus will turn out, especially seeing the size difference between the two! :D

I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens next! :D

[Ripclaw]

Since when did you have a movie Vyoager Megatron....Your collection is really shaping up.

i got him a while back from my oldest brother

So atleast you found Cybertron Prime and Red Alert.

they were never lost

its just leader brawl, bumblebee, bumbelee, landmine, soundwave, blackout, and scorponok that went missing

[Mastergeorge]

Hope you find them soon. Did you try the car? ><

[Ripclaw]

Hope you find them soon. Did you try the car? ><

if they were in the van i would of saw them on the trip

[Autovolt 127]

i got him a while back from my oldest brother



they were never lost

its just leader brawl, bumblebee, bumbelee, landmine, soundwave, blackout, and scorponok that went missing

How can they be all missing?

You can ask your brother for hus Soundwave.

[Ripclaw]

How can they be all missing?

You can ask your brother for hus Soundwave.

wont work

our laserbeaks are different

i broke one of the wingtips on mine, and took the other one off so they would match

and his is still complete

[Z.U.D.O.N]

Hmm... so far so good. :) Good luck finding your toys, btw. :wink:

[Autovolt 127]

Have you tried the attic.

did anyone housesit your house while you were gone? maybe whoever it is took it,

[Ripclaw]

Have you tried the attic.

did anyone housesit your house while you were gone? maybe whoever it is took it,

we dont have an attic

and it was my brother and his fiance who where staying here cleaning the house (supposedly)

and they didnt see them

>.<

[Autovolt 127]

we dont have an attic

and it was my brother and his fiance who where staying here cleaning the house (supposedly)

and they didnt see them

>.<

Do your parents know.......

Have you tried thge basement.

[Ripclaw]

Do your parents know.......

Have you tried thge basement.

yes my mother knows

and no, we dont have a basement

[Autovolt 127]

yes my mother knows

and no, we dont have a basement

Ever think who might of taken it?

[Ripclaw]

Ever think who might of taken it?

the only person who would of taken them is my oldest brother

but no

[Autovolt 127]

the only person who would of taken them is my oldest brother

but no

Who never know Seattle has a huge population anyone could of taken them.

Why didn't you leave them in your house after your mom said you couldn't take them all?

[Ripclaw]

Who never know Seattle has a huge population anyone could of taken them.

Why didn't you leave them in your house after your mom said you couldn't take them all?

our house was not broken into while we were gone

so still, no one took them

and they were supposed to go into something and into the trailer

and it was only 7

[Autovolt 127]

our house was not broken into while we were gone

so still, no one took them

and they were supposed to go into something and into the trailer

and it was only 7

Did you leave them out in the yard.....

Who knopws they might be in a box that you brought and might of left back in michigan.

[Ripclaw]

Did you leave them out in the yard.....

Who knopws they might be in a box that you brought and might of left back in michigan.

they didnt even make it to the van or trailer

and i never take them outside except when i amd going to take pictures of them for the comic, or when packing (for a trip or for moving)

[Autovolt 127]

they didnt even make it to the van or trailer

and i never take them outside except when i amd going to take pictures of them for the comic, or when packing (for a trip or for moving)

Have you tried under your bed?

HAVE YOU TRIED EVERYWHERE!!!!!

[Z.U.D.O.N]

Hey Ripclaw. How bout checking your kitchen? I know it's very unlikely, but give it a try..?

[Ripclaw]

Have you tried under your bed?

HAVE YOU TRIED EVERYWHERE!!!!!

my mattress is on the floor

Hey Ripclaw. How bout checking your kitchen? I know it's very unlikely, but give it a try..?

and i did try the kitchen and everywhere

[Autovolt 127]

Hpw they hell can you just lose track of it, you've checked everywhere?

Do you have a shed or Garage they might be in it.

[ShadowDragon]

Hpw they hell can you just lose track of it,

The bag could have gotten thrown out by who was there while he was in Michigan.

[Ripclaw]

The bag could have gotten thrown out by who was there while he was in Michigan.

and i sure hope it wasnt

if it was lost hero will have to be shut down until i get buy the figures again

[brr-icy]

nice comic so far, hope you find the lost heros,

[Ripclaw]

nice comic so far, hope you find the lost heros,

nice pun

but it isnt only autobots missing x.x

i need to find them since they are the major characters >.<