Transformers: Generations

[Evertransformin]

Hello all. So I booked marked this site about a year ago and have used it to stay up to date on all my TF needs, finally got around to joining and I'm starting my own comics thread. A little note about my story line: It follows the events of the G1 cartoon up until the movie, than I change things around a bit.

Ramjet and Skywarp became Unicrons Hearlds with Megatron
No Headmaster/target Master
Prime's rtn takes place, but he comes in his power master mode (Spike being engine)
WheelJack, Ratchet and Brawn survive since their lasercores were still intact
Optimus destroys Galvatron & from the ashes emerges Megatron in his G2 tank form
Meg's tries to tap into the Dead Universe but is pushed through space bridge by beaten Prime (IE War With in volume II) Rodimus reassumes leadership
Bludgeon and Dark Convoy lead con's sculpting their faces after Megs and Prime to appear more meancing on the battle field, they completely own Rodimus in battle
WheelJack updates Rodimus' shell under same lasercore pretense
Any autobot not appearing in a g1 shell also underwent reconstruction of lasercore (IE Magnus, Grimlock, Prow, etc) Shockwave does the same for any non g1 cons
Rodimus defeates pretenders and Thunderwing and Thunderclash assume control
Autobots science expands over cycles and they manage to repair Optimus again now in laser rod shell.

The rest will be explained as my story progress but that is a few things to keep in mind. Allright lett's get started: This my Prologue

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch0pg1.jpg

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http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch0pg2.jpg

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http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch0pg3.jpg

[Evertransformin]

hehe, size might be a bit large. Anyway I'm telling the story in a now/then fashion inside text will always tell when the story shifts time. The above is a 'WAY' back then installment for a kind of back story. So on we go


THEN:
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch1pg1.jpg

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http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch1pg2.jpg

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http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch1pg3.jpg

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http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch1pg4-1.jpg

[Icespark]

You did a great job! :D You have very good photography skills, and you put the toys into excellent poses! :D Your fight scene was very well done, and your story sounds to be very promising as well! :D I also really like the fact you're using Ratchet, and that he seems to be very much in character! :D I look forward to seeing what you have planned for your future comics!

[Ripclaw]

this is looking good so far

cant wait

im planning a story arc myself

all i need is a title lolvery good effects

[Evertransformin]

thanks guys, I realize its a bit hard to read, i'll try to correct that a bit more with the coming stuff

[TCracker]

Very very nice indeed. Keep it up, I will be checking back regularly :D

[Evertransformin]

MORE :)


http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch2pg1.jpg

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http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch2pg2.jpg

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THEN:

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch3pg1.jpg

[Evertransformin]

still don't like Skywarp's teleporting effect but hopefully my photoshop skills will grow with time.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch3pg2.jpg

[Ripclaw]

this is getting better and better

[Icespark]

Your comic is really starting to move fast! I really the the effects you put in for Wheeljack's scan and for Skywarp's teleportation! :D Your flying effects are also nicely done! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your story and your comics! :D

[TCracker]

The panels are neat and the effects convey to the reader what is actually happening. Kudoes to you, man.

[Shane Anderson]

Great stuff! The fight between Optimus, Thundercracker and Starscream was really good. :thumb

[Evertransformin]

wow. thanks guys. I won't be able to update again until monday but to save any confusion, Cybertron Starscream and Armada Thundercracker are called Thunderwing and Thunderclash. Why exactly they are clashing with the seekers will be revealed a bit later. Stay tuned.

[Soundblaster1]

That is INSANELY good. I'll be looking forward to the next update.

[Autovolt 127]

Kick-ass. :thumb

[DilaZirK]

Whoa, on the very first strip, we get treated to one helluva fight scene. Some nice mess there. :thumb

Unfortunately for me (emphasis on me), I find the story quite a mess to follow as well so far...

The small text is one thing, but there is perhaps...TOO many things going on and too many characters in a single panel. My mind just kinda gets tired trying to keep track of everything.

But that's most likely just me, as I visit the Funnies forum after nearly 12 hours of work some nights. I'm pooped. @_@

[RyakinX]

Good stuff so far, and I loved the fight sceen.

[Evertransformin]

Now I've had a hell of a week. I live in jamaica on a farm (I come into the 'city' to use the internet) and earlier this week my labtop was stolen. Now the cops out here don't really do ANYTHING but luckly I knew who did the stealing (thats the best part of living in a small town, you kinda know who does what and when) So between the the culprit's honest brother, my aunt, and myself I managed to reclaim my property. Hence my small update.

Whoa, on the very first strip, we get treated to one helluva fight scene. Some nice mess there. :thumb

Unfortunately for me (emphasis on me), I find the story quite a mess to follow as well so far...

The small text is one thing, but there is perhaps...TOO many things going on and too many characters in a single panel. My mind just kinda gets tired trying to keep track of everything.

But that's most likely just me, as I visit the Funnies forum after nearly 12 hours of work some nights. I'm pooped. @_@

truth be told D. I have my entire story arc shot already, I just need to add text and effects, so on my end the story is already told. The confusion is to be ironed out as I go along so I hope you'll stay with me. However if everyone feels this way I can revamp my telling style (as it is I sticking with Now/Then process) anyway feedback is always a plus so thanks guys.

[Evertransformin]

K on with the story, we're still in 'THEN' mode

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch3pg3.jpg

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http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k169/dacode34/TRANSFORMERS%20generations/ch3pg4.jpg

[TCracker]

That is alot going in the strips, was that Skywarp sneaking behing Ramjet and tank Megatron?

[Evertransformin]

That is alot going in the strips, was that Skywarp sneaking behing Ramjet and tank Megatron?

Ramjet and Skywarp sneak up on blitzwing (who is flattened under Ramjet's feet) and tank Megatron (he's not Megatron btw, just a lackie)