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Soundblaster1
01-13-2008, 12:09 PM
Yeah... I needed to jump on the bandwagon. I'll probably start with a few one-panels until I get the hang of things, then I'll start some kind of continuity.

First one needs some help on the glowy-ness... The tutorial I read said to use a blur thing, so I did (hence the foggy-style background):

Storyline started in post #13.

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/456/charginlazersbl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Second installment:
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4192/bl00001ago2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Third installment:
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6329/monkeyscannerak3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


For those wondering, High Score and Ironhide will be making numerous appearances. Movie Deluxe Landmine will probably make a couple appearances, but not like you'd think.

Soundblaster1
01-13-2008, 02:33 PM
#4
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4938/buhloo001ay9.jpg

#5
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9774/rollerderbyia0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

knook
01-13-2008, 02:40 PM
cool, continue please

Autovolt 127
01-13-2008, 03:06 PM
The Karate Kid. :lol:lol:lol

I can't see Numbers #1-3

Soundblaster1
01-13-2008, 03:07 PM
I'll re-upload 1-3 when I upload 6 (6 is set to be the best one yet)

EDIT:
#6
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4396/cheezburgerge8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
01-13-2008, 04:42 PM
it was funny :lol

TCracker
01-13-2008, 04:47 PM
Captioned shots.... nice :D

Soundblaster1
01-13-2008, 05:15 PM
I'm working with what I've got. I have no plot line. I have no character development. Hell, I have no camera batteries. And my main funny guys are a pain in the ass to contact (and when I do find them, it's all inside jokes)

And we all need to start somewhere, right?

#7 (the single-panel comics will continue for the time being)
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3804/roffleow9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

transmetal2dinobot
01-13-2008, 06:47 PM
the lulz just keep on coming

NotAnAutobot
01-13-2008, 07:20 PM
hahaha rofflecopter.

Now if only we could see some lollerskates and some lmaonade.

:lol :lol :lol

Icespark
01-13-2008, 07:45 PM
I just read through your comics, and I enjoyed them! :D Starscream as the karate kid was great! :lol

Soundblaster1
01-13-2008, 07:56 PM
Ask and ye shall recieve (since I had a decent pic anyway)

#8
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/8905/buhloo003yh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


On the plus side, I did get a good idea for some kind of continuity, it's just a matter of finding the time to shoot.

Soundblaster1
01-13-2008, 08:52 PM
Continuity time:

Backstory: Long after the Autobots and Decepticons fought for power, there were new dominant factions. The factions of modern day are BLOO (As the founder has since been killed, they do knot know what it stands for. BLOO was founded by an Autobot survivor) and the Neo-Decepticons (Based off the beliefs of Megatron). BLOO is currently led by Captain BLOO (It's a title) and the Neo-Cons are led by Nemesis, one of the few remaining Decepticons on the planet.

Nemesis has one and only one goal. To capture the Chosen One. The one of the prophecies that will eliminate the Neo-Decepticons. All he knows is that the Chosen One does not know his identity as of yet, but Captain BLOO does. Cannonball is Nemesis's most loyal follower, and second-in-command. Unfortunately, he crashed his ship, and will be a landlubber for a while longer.

Captain BLOO also has one and only one goal. To keep the Chosen One away from Nemesis. This will prove to be a chore for the Captain, because his forces are widely outnumbered by Nemesis's dominant army.

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e223/Squalkbox/Issue1001.jpg
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NotAnAutobot
01-13-2008, 09:04 PM
Oooooh
Intriguing.
I can't wait to see how this shapes up.

Otispq
01-14-2008, 11:27 AM
Looking good so far!

Mintybumblebee
01-14-2008, 01:48 PM
so random but funny

StarscreamFIRES
01-14-2008, 04:48 PM
make the hamburger the main character!
P>S SUPER BOARD IN MIDTERM STUDIES!

Soundblaster1
01-14-2008, 05:09 PM
#2. I'll clarify any questions anyone has, but I think I made it pretty clear.

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9577/issue2001nd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/102/issue2002jv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2803/issue2003xj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/474/issue2004zc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/5215/issue2aec4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/865/issue2007ua1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


EDIT1: Sorry Roy's speach is hard to read
Edit2: Forgot 2 pictures, will fix soon.

StarscreamFIRES
01-14-2008, 05:48 PM
i want a crack freak/ alcoholic in the comic :dunce

Otispq
01-14-2008, 05:48 PM
getting a pretty good plot going on. can't wait to see what happens to cannonballs ship.

Soundblaster1
01-14-2008, 06:00 PM
i want a crack freak/ alcoholic in the comic :dunce
Um... That's what Roy's for. I'll use him more for funny later, but I couldn't introduce Landquake and co. without having someone other than the Captain explaining it. (or taking 3 more updates)
getting a pretty good plot going on. can't wait to see what happens to cannonballs ship.

Thanks :thumb Let's just say his ship will take a lot of editing to feature, so I'm thinking 2-3 panels at most for it. I was looking for a way to remove it, while still featuring it, and this just happened to be the most convenient. #3 will be coming soon (no pictures taken, and I can't decide between the team returning, Dropkick's infiltration, or Cannonball's ship- The ship will probably be next, because it's easily the funniest of the 3.)

TCracker
01-14-2008, 06:07 PM
Interesting...bring it, man :)

Mintybumblebee
01-14-2008, 08:30 PM
it's getting funnier and better

Soundblaster1
01-15-2008, 10:39 AM
#3... Didn't turn out as good as I had hoped for, but it'll do...

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/487/issue3002ht1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4839/issue3003bh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6301/25220936sm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Icespark
01-15-2008, 12:43 PM
Your comic story is really good! Cannonball's pirate talk irritating Nemesis was something I found very amusing! :lol I also enjoyed seeing the downfall of Cannonball's ship! That was a great use of Omega Sentinel! Legends Ironhide as the chosen one is also a clever idea! :D I look forward to seeing what else you have planned! :D

Mintybumblebee
01-15-2008, 02:30 PM
:lol :lol :lol

Otispq
01-15-2008, 04:38 PM
I'd say it turned out allright. Loving cannonballs dialogue.

Soundblaster1
01-15-2008, 04:52 PM
Your comic story is really good! Cannonball's pirate talk irritating Nemesis was something I found very amusing! :lol I also enjoyed seeing the downfall of Cannonball's ship! That was a great use of Omega Sentinel! Legends Ironhide as the chosen one is also a clever idea! :D I look forward to seeing what else you have planned! :D
Thanks. I plan on using Omega Sentinel for various things, just because it's so versatile. This idea came to me while I was thinking of boats for Cannonball to have, and since he is fairly high up in the ranks, he needed an appropriate ship. I hope I can keep up with the standard I've set for myself... The next humorous thing I can think of is probably going to be in part 7 (beginning of chapter 1)... Unless I decide to rush things along, which would involve finding someone that can get an upgrade... I could probably do it with Landquake in part 7/8...

I'd say it turned out allright. Loving cannonballs dialogue.
Thanks. I decided there weren't enough pirates in the funnies forum, so I had to fix that problem...

As it stands...
#4- Dropkick's Infiltration (should be up later tonight, if I can figure out how to explain the Big O values of various algorithms)
#5- Dropkick's Infiltration part 2
#6 Dropkick's Infiltration part 3
After 6, I know what's happening, I just don't know what order I want it in...

Soundblaster1
01-15-2008, 08:54 PM
Part 6: Dropkick's Infiltration. (It's pure coincidence that the BLOO Spy and the Neo-Con guard have the same name. Think of it as two guys named "Bob" or "John")

Once again, I'm more than happy to clarify anything that I may not have explained well enough, but I refuse to say why Payload sounds like a lunatic.

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/7356/issue4002bk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/7974/issue4tx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/4103/issue4003bt0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/5377/issue4005cn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/7489/issue4006ks6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/7489/issue4006ks6.45229f0254.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=530&i=issue4006ks6.jpg)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6128/issue4007jn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6128/issue4007jn5.a5859c568d.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=514&i=issue4007jn5.jpg)

Mintybumblebee
01-15-2008, 08:57 PM
yay bumblebee is in it!!!

it's getting better :lol :lol :lol :lol :lol :lol :lol :lol

Icespark
01-15-2008, 10:00 PM
I found the idea of Payload as a lunatic to be very amusing. The toy already had some personality, but giving him a completely different style was a great idea! :D
I also really liked Prowl's line "we'll be here." :lol I can imagine him thinking about not being able to go anywhere anyway.

I look forward to seeing your future line-up in comic form! :D

Otispq
01-15-2008, 10:43 PM
awesome update, can't wait to see the jailbreak shots.

Soundblaster1
01-16-2008, 04:46 PM
I found the idea of Payload as a lunatic to be very amusing. The toy already had some personality, but giving him a completely different style was a great idea! :D
I also really liked Prowl's line "we'll be here." :lol I can imagine him thinking about not being able to go anywhere anyway.

I look forward to seeing your future line-up in comic form! :D
Well, I wrote the next 7 parts today during some downtime... It's just a matter of putting them into comic form. I plan on throwing in a Payload joke during the jailbreak, if all goes according to plan.
awesome update, can't wait to see the jailbreak shots.

I'm actually only devoting 1-2 updates to the jail break, in favor of something that will be (hopefully) way better (and 10-15 updates, maybe more)... Plot twists FTW!

TCracker
01-16-2008, 05:55 PM
Hmm...I am interested to know how the jailbreak is going to pan out .....

Icespark
01-16-2008, 09:35 PM
Your future updates sound very interesting! :D I can't wait to see what you have planned for Payload! :D I also look forward to seeing how your story unfolds, as well as the plot twist you mentioned! :D

Soundblaster1
01-17-2008, 05:03 PM
No update again :( but I'm going to try for one later. Next one isn't too complicated by any means, just dialogue heavy. I did get a one-shot that I can't help but post 4 times (this time it's captioned to keep with the singles theme)

#9 (I think that's what number I'm on...)
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3281/landmine2vk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Grimwing
01-17-2008, 05:54 PM
There used to be a principle of testing your toys balance by having them kick and hold that pose. (kick test) but landmines handstand is something else. good one.

Icespark
01-17-2008, 07:49 PM
I have Landmine, and I never knew he could balance so well! Having Landmine stand on his hand must have taken great patience! You did a great job on that photo! :D

Otispq
01-18-2008, 05:37 AM
I have yet to even see a Landmine toy in the stores, freakin jealous here!

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 03:21 PM
I have Landmine, and I never knew he could balance so well! Having Landmine stand on his hand must have taken great patience! You did a great job on that photo! :D
:thumb He's probably even more balanced then Classics Mirage, who was probably the most well balanced Transformer of recent years. The only problem with Landmine is the skate-feet making him slightly hard to pose
I have yet to even see a Landmine toy in the stores, freakin jealous here!

So telling you I've had it for a month isn't going to help any, is it? :D It's well worth it, when you do find one.

I took the pics up through the plot twist, so expect a LARGE update before tonight. I'll keep editing this post (until replies start coming) to keep things cleaner.

UPDATE: Dropkick's Infiltration part 2.
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/7110/slide1ij6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5076/slide2wo5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Icespark
01-18-2008, 03:31 PM
This was a great update in terms of setting motivation for the Decepticons! It would appear that the falling out among thieves is about to take place! :D I'm looking forward to seeing your next update! :D

You are right about both Landmine and Mirage. I have seen and tested Mirage's level of balance and it is incredible. Mirage is, without a doubt, one of the best deluxe toys ever released. :D Will you be using Landmine in your comic?

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 03:37 PM
Landmine is the leader of the good guys. He didn't have too many scenes to start, but he'll be a bigger player later in today's update.

You may have missed Infiltration part 3, I just added that...

UPDATE: The Breakout, part 1. If no one catches the Payload joke, I'll be pretty mad.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5861/slide4nr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Is there a reason no one reads this besides Icespark, Otispq, and my girlfriend? Does everyone hate me or something?

EDIT: UPDATE: The Breakout, part 2.
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7993/nexy004rg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
There was an explosion shot to go here, but it became corrupt somewhere between Paint.NET and Imageshack. It wasn't too good anyway, Just BOOM and some blurry stuff.
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6185/nexy006xx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sorry about Spyshot's line being hard to read, he's saying "Wee! I is ridin' a girl! Wee!"

UPDATE: The Breakout, part 3a.
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/5035/nexy007cb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Autovolt 127
01-18-2008, 03:56 PM
:lol

Icespark
01-18-2008, 03:58 PM
Landmine as the leader is rather unexpected, as was the reference to Payload's decals! :D Seeing the breakout take place during an attempt at treason by Galvatron should be very amusing!:D I'm not sure if mass jailbreak was something he calculated into his plans! :lol

I'm sorry that you're not getting many replies. I have subscribed to your thread and I will try to comment as often as I can, time permitting. It could be that not everyone is aware of your comics. It might help if you place a link and reference into your signature, so that when you post in one of the other boards, members will know that you have a comic thread!

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 04:02 PM
I do have a link in my sig, and I'm telling all my friends to read it (but they don't understand that post #13 is on page two, so it takes some searching to find)... I do appreciate the fact that you've subscribed to it.

Here's what happens after Longview plants the explosives...
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/527/nexy008ja9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Edit: 5:05 PM eastern
The Breakout, finale
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8126/nexy009li6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Icespark
01-18-2008, 04:10 PM
I see the link now. It's rather small though. You could try changing the text to the name of your comic thread, and place it above the link to your sales thread or under your signature picture. It might also help to actually make your signature picture itself a link to your comics! :D I've found a few good comic threads that way, and it makes it easier for other members to get to your comics as well.

Otispq
01-18-2008, 04:15 PM
Landmine is the leader of the good guys. He didn't have too many scenes to start, but he'll be a bigger player later in today's update.

UPDATE: The Breakout, part 1. If no one catches the Payload joke, I'll be pretty mad.

Is there a reason no one reads this besides Icespark, Otispq, and my girlfriend? Does everyone hate me or something?

There was an explosion shot to go here, but it became corrupt somewhere between Paint.NET and Imageshack. It wasn't too good anyway, Just BOOM and some blurry stuff.
Sorry about Spyshot's line being hard to read, he's saying "Wee! I is ridin' a girl! Wee!"


As for getting a Landmine, when I see that bad boy I'm getting 2! Beachcomber & Wheeljack were my first ever TF's and one of the Landmines is getting a paintjob!

On to the Payload joke, I had to grab my fig off the shelf to get the joke, as I don't play with him too much, but that was a great line.

Thanks for the recog on reading your thread, I'm enjoying it and all the nuances are intriguing to say the least. I just quickly looked thru the postings, and I'm guessing that MintyBB is your girlfriend, right? seems like the only other consistent multiple poster 'sides me n Icespark.


Might I just add a wee bit of hints to your pics? the text boxes are great, but to see more of the bots, you could use a little smaller font and smaller text box, cuz Spyshot's line was about the right size, just for the background it would've been perfect, the text you used in part 6 was awesome, especially with the little lines telling us who's talking. That way you can put the text anywhere and we still see the action.

Keep up the good work!!

Edit: actually the text size you used today is perfect, but still could make the bubbles a bit smaller on some of them. hope I'm not coming off as the armchair quarterback here.

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 04:25 PM
Yeah, MintyBB is my girlfriend. I'm still working on the text problem, but I think the next portion may have fixed it... It's just a matter of coloring the text in such a way it can be seen on the background... When I work on these, they're practically full screen (camera uploading issue, can't be fixed) so I try my best to plan them out first, and then add the stuff, but apparently that isn't working...

This post will contain Assasination and Takeover when I upload them. EDIT: posted at 5:32 PM eastern
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e223/Squalkbox/Civil%20War/Nexy010.jpg
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http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4347/nexy020mp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Icespark
01-18-2008, 04:49 PM
Interesting plot twist! Now there are two groups of Decepticons to deal with! In the confusion, the prisoners should be able to get away easily! :D Also, how high a rank does Megatron have? Or is he not the original Megatron?

I looked up where the information on how to combine a picture and link is located. You can access it from this page. At the bottom of the page under Thread Tools is Help with Creating Links. In the middle of that article, look for Images. It should hopefully explain how to combine your signature picture with a link! :D

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 04:57 PM
Interesting plot twist! Now there are two groups of Decepticons to deal with! In the confusion, the prisoners should be able to get away easily! :D Also, how high a rank does Megatron have? Or is he not the original Megatron?

I looked up where the information on how to combine a picture and link is located. You can access it from this page. At the bottom of the page under Thread Tools is Help with Creating Links. In the middle of that article, look for Images. It should hopefully explain how to combine your signature picture with a link! :D

Megatron is a low general. He isn't "the" Megatron, per se, but he does have a lot of Megatron's qualities. Think of it like naming someone after a president/celebrity/other leader. I don't know if I made it clear or not, but there's actually 3 groups, all claiming to be the real Neo-Decepticons. Galvatron's got the power, Cannonball's got the title, Scourge/Sharkticon/Megatron did the dirty work for their leaders and want some recognition.

I'll see about making a sig for myself sometime soon. Maybe now... The monkey butt scanner pic seems sig worthy...

Icespark
01-18-2008, 05:10 PM
I thought that Megatron's name might be something along those lines, but I was not sure. I didn't realize that the lower Decepticon officers counted as another group. Landmine and the Chosen One are going to be busy, aren't they! Also, have you given the Chosen One a name?

I see your transformed your picture into a link! :D May I suggest though that you mention the name of your comics in the text portion of your signature?

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 05:16 PM
I thought that Megatron's name might be something along those lines, but I was not sure. I didn't realize that the lower Decepticon officers counted as another group. Landmine and the Chosen One are going to be busy, aren't they! Also, have you given the Chosen One a name?

I see your transformed your picture into a link! :D May I suggest though that you mention the name of your comics in the text portion of your signature?

The Chosen One says his name's Ironhide in the 2nd strip. The lower officers are another group (mostly) because Scourge is the one that actually killed Nemesis. Sharkticon and Megatron went along with him because they could. Dropkick will probably end up fighting for all 3 sides at once, just to screw things up more. I should have another small update coming later, but not quite yet.

Icespark
01-18-2008, 05:26 PM
I wonder how I missed Ironhide's name? I really need to wash my glasses more often! :D Dropkick's interfering sounds as if it will be very amusing! :lol I look forward to seeing how events turn out! :D I hope your signature will make it easier for members to find your comics! :D

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 05:32 PM
I wonder how I missed Ironhide's name? I really need to wash my glasses more often! :lol Dropkick's interfering sounds as if it will be very amusing! :lol I look forward to seeing how events turn out! :D I hope your signature will make it easier for members to find your comics! :D

You aren't the only one with dirty glasses :D

I can't really see Dropkick as more than a saboteur, so that's what he is. It was either that or pimp, and saboteur won.

Considering views have jumped by almost 100 just in the time I posted the last updates (and I don't think 4-5 people can do that), I'd say I'm getting more viewers. Now I need more commenters...

Mintybumblebee
01-18-2008, 06:31 PM
i really like it's so funny

Otispq
01-18-2008, 06:40 PM
Well if you keep updating the way you did today, there should be plenty of people in here in no time!

PS. I wasn't sure who whas all saying what in the new leader announcement pic, just draw a line to whomever is speaking, as for the off camera folks, not sure how to fix that, but I read it all out of order and 3 times to get it all figured out.

Interesting with the 3 different factions...

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 06:45 PM
PS. I wasn't sure who whas all saying what in the new leader announcement pic, just draw a line to whomever is speaking, as for the off camera folks, not sure how to fix that, but I read it all out of order and 3 times to get it all figured out.

I'll be fixing that when I re-caption it (apparently it was Paint.Net that cut it off) so it's a little clearer, but I have some other things I need to do first.

The only problem with updating like I did today... I'm running out of story. I have Civil War part 1 written. That's it. I'm gonna try for more tonight, but I don't know where to go from here.

Soundblaster1
01-18-2008, 09:29 PM
200 views since lunch. I'm impressed, but half of them are probably me.

I re-added the leadership pic, but it's more condensed than before. Here's the last strip before chapter 2: Civil War and Preparations

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/2206/1aeo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/9177/1bsl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7816/nexybw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



And Chapter 2 intro:
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/4663/chapter2qb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
01-18-2008, 09:40 PM
:lol

tony's in it

Autovolt 127
01-19-2008, 04:52 AM
:lol

Icespark
01-19-2008, 12:22 PM
It would seem that Ironhide's aim is not that good! I find it interesting that you've chosen to make Longarm into a medic; quite a different personality to what I've chosen for him in my comics! Is your Longarm a mechanic as well as a medic? I look forward to seeing what happens next! :D

Soundblaster1
01-19-2008, 12:50 PM
It would seem that Ironhide's aim is not that good! I find it interesting that you've chosen to make Longarm into a medic; quite a different personality to what I've chosen for him in my comics! Is your Longarm a mechanic as well as a medic? I look forward to seeing what happens next! :D

He's the only one with any medical knowledge at all, so they made him the medic. So he pretty much blows the crap out of you and then puts you back together. If anyone noticed, I made them break out of Prison A for a reason. There's a Prison B that contains other people of interest :D (That's still a ways off, but I do have some stuff for later)

Soundblaster1
01-19-2008, 05:59 PM
Update (is the dialogue any better?):
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3887/next001dl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/1048/next002uv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
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http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/402/next005cp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/8696/next006kh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I still have 2 updates ready to go for tonight, but I figure I'll leave it here for the time being.

Soundblaster1
01-19-2008, 06:35 PM
Inspired by a comment by Chaos Muffin, I present to you... #10... Bay Watch Prime
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3994/baywatchprimebe1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Soundblaster1
01-19-2008, 10:54 PM
Didn't really want to triple post :( but I didn't want these two to get lost.
The bombing
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6219/next007lk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4378/next011jg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1371/next012vw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

The fix:
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/2204/next013dw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/73/next0135mb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/6434/next014zr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/7517/next015sq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Autovolt 127
01-20-2008, 04:20 AM
TRU Cybertron Starscream i want him so badly.

Mintybumblebee
01-20-2008, 04:49 PM
:lol

wow...

Otispq
01-20-2008, 10:23 PM
Well that's the most interesting reformat/upgrade visual I've ever seen. And on that note, nice to meet you MintyBB. (cuz if that's a pic of someone else, well you gots sum splainin to do...)

Otispq
01-20-2008, 10:28 PM
So my my wife was reading the page with me and after I posted she said that she saw a commercial on TV about some kind of electronics/cell phone company and that's where you got the pic. Which is weird in that my wife doesn't watch hardly any tv nor does she really pay any attention to the commercials, so tell me who/what commercial eh?

and I guess the nice to meet you MintyBB comment must be retracted...at least in the 'ah, I see you now' department, er, something like that.

Icespark
01-21-2008, 10:08 AM
I liked the small argument between Galvatron and Dropkick. Seeing villians get irritated is always amusing! :lol It also seems that once again, Cannonball is without a ship! Perhaps its time he looked for a new career! :lol Will we be seeing Ironhide's training? I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! :D

Soundblaster1
01-21-2008, 11:19 AM
So my my wife was reading the page with me and after I posted she said that she saw a commercial on TV about some kind of electronics/cell phone company and that's where you got the pic. Which is weird in that my wife doesn't watch hardly any tv nor does she really pay any attention to the commercials, so tell me who/what commercial eh?

and I guess the nice to meet you MintyBB comment must be retracted...at least in the 'ah, I see you now' department, er, something like that.
:lol I'm pretty sure it's Beyonce from a DirectTV commercial. I saw it the other day and thought it was perfect for this.
I liked the small argument between Galvatron and Dropkick. Seeing villians get irritated is always amusing! :lol It also seems that once again, Cannonball is without a ship! Perhaps its time he looked for a new career! :lol Will we be seeing Ironhide's training? I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! :D

I will show some of Ironhide's training, but not all of it...

I will say there's going to be another plot twist somewhere in the future that was hinted on in one of the most recent strips...

I appreciate the comments, guys :thumb

Soundblaster1
01-26-2008, 11:04 PM
Quick single shot I had and captioned (since entertaining 3 people, one of which is my girlfriend, isn't too fun)

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/9695/various2001oq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Otispq
01-27-2008, 01:16 AM
Are you saying you've got houseguests that are boring, or not enough online readers??? And if its the latter, true, you need more readers, as they are missing out on some good funnies.

I had some Bandai stuff when I was a kid, good times...

Mintybumblebee
01-27-2008, 11:44 AM
it is good and funny

Soundblaster1
01-27-2008, 11:52 AM
Are you saying you've got houseguests that are boring, or not enough online readers??? And if its the latter, true, you need more readers, as they are missing out on some good funnies.

I had some Bandai stuff when I was a kid, good times...

I was referring to the latter, however boring houseguests sound like fun. I think.

I should take my next custom project and make it into a comic. That would be almost fun. I think.

I do appreciate the support from those that do read, and I really appreciate the support of those that take the time to reply.

And that's all for now, I just shot a spring into the wild blue yonder that I kinda sorta need to find.

it is good and funny
So are you saying you aren't coming back because you have to, but because you want to? :D

Mintybumblebee
02-01-2008, 09:43 PM
yea

Soundblaster1
02-02-2008, 04:36 PM
UPDATE:
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/4946/nextones001lm0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7342/nextones002fr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9559/nextones003mm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6447/nextones004ts1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/6575/nextones005tn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/9193/nextones006xg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3369/nextones007nt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/5537/nextones008gu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/655/nextones009ve7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
02-02-2008, 06:36 PM
:lol that's great

Soundblaster1
02-02-2008, 08:40 PM
BIG update... Might have to span it over two posts.

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9186/nextones001yv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/5633/nextones002uj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5529/nextones003gq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/10/megatronic2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/1484/nextones005hb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/3783/nextones007tk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/6782/nextones008ya3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4668/nextones009gc2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Soundblaster1
02-02-2008, 08:46 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9739/nextones010an9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8149/nextones011zu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/1831/nextones012mn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/3946/nextones013yo5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/4033/nextones014mi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/2390/nextones015vn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/747/nextones016sa1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7475/nextones017awx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9189/nextones017byk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/1307/nextones017cdg0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1520/nextones017dcr8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
02-02-2008, 09:11 PM
the muchekins are cool! i like how they fleed again :lol :lol :lol :lol

Soundblaster1
02-03-2008, 12:37 AM
Alrighty... Not many views, plenty of panels. Snarl's story will be explained later on.

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7893/nextandbios001bl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4563/nextandbios002fc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/672/nextandbios003us2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9330/nextandbios004ot6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Otispq
02-03-2008, 06:06 AM
Holy smokes that was a ton of updates all rolled into, well 3! I love how huge snarl is compared to voy ironhide, I actually had to look at mine to believe what I was seeing!

If you want more people to check out your comic, you might want to space these out a bit. don't get me wrong, I love the huge update, but if you prepped them only one day a week, then posted them a bit at a time every other day, you'd get more people to read them and make comments before you posted another update. plus it would keep some peoples attentions a bit longer, cuz they wouldn't have to re-read your older stuff to try and remember what's going on. you definitely had enough material here for more than three postings, and if you plan on doing updates of this size, I really do think you should space them out. Hope that you know I just want you to get more readers so you don't stop making your comics, they are great.

Mintybumblebee
02-03-2008, 11:12 AM
:lol that was funny

Soundblaster1
02-03-2008, 12:05 PM
Holy smokes that was a ton of updates all rolled into, well 3! I love how huge snarl is compared to voy ironhide, I actually had to look at mine to believe what I was seeing!

If you want more people to check out your comic, you might want to space these out a bit. don't get me wrong, I love the huge update, but if you prepped them only one day a week, then posted them a bit at a time every other day, you'd get more people to read them and make comments before you posted another update. plus it would keep some peoples attentions a bit longer, cuz they wouldn't have to re-read your older stuff to try and remember what's going on. you definitely had enough material here for more than three postings, and if you plan on doing updates of this size, I really do think you should space them out. Hope that you know I just want you to get more readers so you don't stop making your comics, they are great.

I had a hard time believing how large Snarl was and I was the one that shot the pic :D

I'll try to start prepping everything and making smaller updates throughout the week and see how that goes. Maybe I'll draw people in if I do it around the time Shane updates his?

I know I won't stop for the time being because Dark Fang Wolf is a bit of a camera whore (Seriously, I wasn't even gonna use it and all the sudden it's a main character)... The comments make it easier to keep going, though... I'll see what spacing it out does.

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1040/jazzmh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Another single... Caption it yourself, as anything I can think of probably stretches the limits of the rules.

Autovolt 127
02-03-2008, 02:19 PM
:lol

I envy that Fangwolf.

Otispq
02-03-2008, 03:14 PM
did you repaint Snarl yourself, as I've not seen him with those colors before, or is he an exclusive or repaint I just missed?

I can't tell you when to post, just that you should really space them out. Plus, a little help for you on the pics, do you know what the 'Macro' function on the camera is? if not I'll tell you anyways, it's the 'Flower' icon, and it's meant to be used when you are within a foot of the target, so for your last pic of voyager Ironhide, the closeup of his face, if you use the macro setting, it will come out as a clean crisp closeup. I also just noticed that there is another pic after that one, but you need to repost it cuz imageshack didn't link to it correctly. hope that helps.

One shot caption:

Meet Sword-Slashin Jazz, guardian of the cash stash for Pimpimus Prime.
or:
Look at all the money Jazz saved by switching to Geico...
or:
Jazz's down payment on getting his G1 paintjob...
or:
Jazz accepts the assasination contract put out on Michael Bay...
or:
Jazz readies his sword and (disgustedly) says "A twenty on the outside? come on, didn't you watch Donnie Brasco, everybody knows a wiseguys gotta have a Benny on the outside of the money roll!"
or:
Pontiacs new zero-percent financing, through GMAC, will save you a whole roll-o-dough!
or:
Jazz tries to bribe the writers into having a nice, long flashback sequence in the sequel so he can get some more screen time.
or:
After starring in the Transformers Movie, Jazz was the belle of the ball until the money ran out and he had to resort to back alley muggings to make ends meet.

Ok that's all I got...

Soundblaster1
02-03-2008, 06:28 PM
did you repaint Snarl yourself, as I've not seen him with those colors before, or is he an exclusive or repaint I just missed?

I can't tell you when to post, just that you should really space them out. Plus, a little help for you on the pics, do you know what the 'Macro' function on the camera is? if not I'll tell you anyways, it's the 'Flower' icon, and it's meant to be used when you are within a foot of the target, so for your last pic of voyager Ironhide, the closeup of his face, if you use the macro setting, it will come out as a clean crisp closeup. I also just noticed that there is another pic after that one, but you need to repost it cuz imageshack didn't link to it correctly. hope that helps.


I had it on macro but hit the top of the chest instead of the head and I didn't feel like retaking it.

Snarl is a Toys Dream Project exclusive from Japan. It's limited but not insanely limited. BBTS clearanced it out for like $18 a while back but now the price is up. I like it better than the original deco (that I also have and will use in Snarl's history) and like I said... It's a camera whore. All I have to do is have a camera close to it and I have some wierd impulse to take its picture.

Now I'll violate everything that makes sense to me and leave off with a cliffhanger.
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/309/next001zb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/1231/next002fl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/5443/next003xt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5462/next004vm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/3035/next005ku7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/4888/next006ui5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/1249/next007av4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4907/next008lr0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NotAnAutobot
02-03-2008, 07:29 PM
WRECKAGE!!! WHYYYYYY?!?!?!?!

Ah, whatever. :)

Mintybumblebee
02-03-2008, 07:55 PM
:lol that was funny!!!

Soundblaster1
02-03-2008, 08:12 PM
WRECKAGE!!! WHYYYYYY?!?!?!?!

Ah, whatever. :)
I found that funnier than the comic itself. More readers FTW!
:lol that was funny!!!

So you enjoy dramatic battle quickies? I'll remember that for later.

And the munchkins, while defeated, are not out. I spent way too much money on that Legends collection to give it one lousy update.

TCracker
02-03-2008, 08:29 PM
Oooo! I like the prison action...come on man, keep it coming!

Soundblaster1
02-03-2008, 09:20 PM
Another one panel to celebrate getting more readers!

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/276/tig001lx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Story behind this one: I went to shave tonight and the razor wasn't charged.

Shane Anderson
02-03-2008, 09:23 PM
:lol

Autovolt 127
02-04-2008, 06:03 AM
Good word on pun. :lol

Mintybumblebee
02-04-2008, 02:15 PM
so random

Soundblaster1
02-04-2008, 07:54 PM
:lol
You do know this means there will be a Megabolt reference in the future, right? :D
so random

It's what I'm going for with the singles... The comic is staying on track with random shit thrown in.

Autovolt, I live for bad puns. I was having a discussion about "engrish" right before I went to shave, making that even funnier.

Today's installment: (I took another 20 pics but I'm spacing them out until about Wednesday/Thursday... I gotta put everything on hold until Animated Starscream shows up... Assuming no one does before hand, would I be the first to feature an Animated toy in a comic?)

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/9739/thenexts004ui1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/7797/thenexts005zi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/1829/thenexts006kv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9343/thenexts001qh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/55/thenexts002nl5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/6110/thenexts003wr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/6765/thenexts007cx0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Snarl calling the shots at the end there will be explained very soon. Galvatron was responding to the intrusion because it was so close to his capital (and there were some peoples of interest to go after).

Mintybumblebee
02-04-2008, 07:59 PM
:lol

Otispq
02-04-2008, 10:17 PM
I like Ironhides huge thunder cannon.

congrats on more readers!!

Soundblaster1
02-05-2008, 03:39 PM
I like Ironhides huge thunder cannon.

Do you really expect one of Galvatron's prototype bodies to not be armed to the teeth? :D

I really appreciate the comments, guys. They make doing this a lot easier and seemingly less time consuming.

Today's update (maybe I'll have a second today, maybe not)

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7681/thenexts008er5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6269/thenexts009ti0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/38/thenexts010mo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Caution: Classic Megabolt reference ahead.
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/4665/thenexts011ja9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/1521/thenexts013up5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Apparently the pics will sometimes work, sometimes not. As we're all claiming different one's are(n't) working, we'll just have to make do.

Fez Findie
02-05-2008, 03:52 PM
As much as you have been starting up a major storyline and all...

Best of luck tryin' to make Megabolt a character to be taken seriously XD

Otispq
02-05-2008, 05:02 PM
All the pics worked on this last set.

I like the little Snarl, but not recognize the yellow car, not that it matters for the story, but really cool the idea of little guys!

Mintybumblebee
02-05-2008, 05:23 PM
Muchkin land!!!!! is cool. :lol

Soundblaster1
02-05-2008, 07:09 PM
Best of luck tryin' to make Megabolt a character to be taken seriously XD
I gave him a relatively minor part as a fortress for a reason. Chip loving fortress FTW!
All the pics worked on this last set.

I like the little Snarl, but not recognize the yellow car, not that it matters for the story, but really cool the idea of little guys!
The yellow car is Sparkplug (came with large Armada Prime). He was Prime's only redeeming feature, so he stayed.
Muchkin land!!!!! is cool. :lol

:lol The munchkins will be back on Thursday/Friday.

Mintybumblebee
02-05-2008, 07:17 PM
YAY!!!!!! they are coming back

Otispq
02-05-2008, 10:06 PM
Just thinking about the Munchkins gave me a nice chuckle.

Soundblaster1
02-06-2008, 04:27 PM
Today's installment...

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9585/thenexts014by9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/710/thenexts015ez9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6436/thenexts016fz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/797/thenexts017nm0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/6885/thenexts018sd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6660/thenexts019hu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Autovolt 127
02-06-2008, 04:30 PM
Fangwolf is teh cool.

Mintybumblebee
02-06-2008, 05:36 PM
:lol bloo!!!!!!!!!!

background!!! lalalalalalallalaa

Otispq
02-06-2008, 10:57 PM
Cool backstory, really like the attitude he's giving off!

Soundblaster1
02-07-2008, 05:14 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3329/a1001dm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/5338/a1002em1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5554/a1003wq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/6554/a1004ur2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

As I attempted to subtly explain, Galvatron's empire is so large that he didn't even know about Munchkin land or anything else in the desert-esque area they're in.

Animated Starscream is making his first appearance tomorrow if all goes well.

Mintybumblebee
02-07-2008, 06:18 PM
YAY MUCHAIN!!!!! :lol

Soundblaster1
02-07-2008, 06:23 PM
Anyone have any suggestions for making bios? I'd really like to do one for Snarl (damn kick ass character stuck in a sub-par storyline)...

Ripclaw
02-07-2008, 06:42 PM
Anyone have any suggestions for making bios? I'd really like to do one for Snarl (damn kick ass character stuck in a sub-par storyline)...

if you look at mine that might give you some ideas

also look at Grimlock_13's and shanes as well

Otispq
02-07-2008, 07:22 PM
If you don't try to emulate others' bios, then you'll really have created something, Snarl is such a cool fig, and the background you've just provided for him and Bloo, you should make the bios all your own, IMO. If they end up looking similar to someone elses, oh well. But I think that your own version would come with it's own uniqueness, and I'd like to see that.

Autovolt 127
02-08-2008, 03:29 PM
Brawl's a munchkin. :lol

Soundblaster1
02-08-2008, 09:32 PM
I'm thinking the bios will just be low-tech for the time being, maybe with improvements later. I'll work on those this weekend, since I finished enough pics to take me until Monday if I want. Snarl's "It was a good idea at the time, and still is, even though it's not" thing is coming up shortly. I'll subtly hint that he "acts" like a "president." Feel free to guess on this, but please mark it for those that don't like the spoilers. (Silver text is good) (I think Otis has the best chance of coming close, but it will go right by all the other regulars)

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8635/imgp0044gb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1266/imgp0045ss6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9098/imgp0046dl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/7623/imgp0047wn2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1622/imgp0048ed4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9306/imgp0049rw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/7483/imgp0050ic1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8408/imgp0051py8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Otispq
02-08-2008, 10:52 PM
wow, Snarl really kicks some butt, and Ironhide the uh, chosen one, is sittin on his, hahaha. Mini Brawl the mekanik? wow, didn't see that coming.

As for the guessing, we are supposed to be guessing what president he's acting like? right?
Spoiler alert:cuz if that's the case, your talking about president Bush and the Iraq war...the one that was a good idea at the time, still is, even though its not...makes sense to me. and if I'm right, then you mean that Snarl is going to be making some decisions that he thinks are right but that in the end really aren't, but he won't admit to it, or even acknowledge that he was wrong at all..
Let me know if I got it right.

Mintybumblebee
02-08-2008, 10:53 PM
the red was kinda hard to read
sad the captin is hurt

Soundblaster1
02-09-2008, 11:18 AM
wow, Snarl really kicks some butt, and Ironhide the uh, chosen one, is sittin on his, hahaha. Mini Brawl the mekanik? wow, didn't see that coming.

As for the guessing, we are supposed to be guessing what president he's acting like? right?
Spoiler alert:cuz if that's the case, your talking about president Bush and the Iraq war...the one that was a good idea at the time, still is, even though its not...makes sense to me. and if I'm right, then you mean that Snarl is going to be making some decisions that he thinks are right but that in the end really aren't, but he won't admit to it, or even acknowledge that he was wrong at all..
Let me know if I got it right.
You're on to something, but what I'm referring to is a bit older.

I'll get into why Brawl can do what he can do later, but it has nothing to do with him being a mechanic. It does have to do with him being a Munchkin, though.
the red was kinda hard to read
sad the captin is hurt

Sorry about the red being hard to read :(

Small update for now, as going any farther will be like an insanely spoiled cliffhanger (and the answer to the riddle...).

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/717/imgp0052pa7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2176/imgp0053mg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5757/imgp0055vq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4339/imgp0056ae8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
02-09-2008, 03:15 PM
:lol they look small getting to the helcopter (spelling might be worng)

Fez Findie
02-09-2008, 03:18 PM
Whoah, Animated Starscream? XD

And... wait, how does a peace agreement work that way? :S

Soundblaster1
02-09-2008, 04:01 PM
And... wait, how does a peace agreement work that way? :S

Backstory:
Nemesis and Landquake signed it to express rules of war and reasons to end peacetime to go to war. As we will see (spoiler) Landquake is against space travel, so he (Landquake) found no reason to care what happened in space. Nemesis didn't like the idea of mass-shifting on Cybertron because he was afraid it would be used against him (I tried to make it out that he was a paranoid ruler). They agreed it would be allowed for anyone that isn't a citizen of Cybertron, who they assumed was no one at the time. I will say Animated Starscream and Incinerator are the only ones that are able to mass-shift, being the only ones from space. Snarl didn't know about the existance of the document because he was imprisoned when it was signed.

Yeah, I made all that up, but it all fits, especially with the spoilers.

Otispq
02-09-2008, 06:57 PM
wow, that was rather complicated...the peace agreement. Sounds like a real world government type document. Twisted and convoluted, but at least somebody can decipher it.

Is your Animated SS one of the 1$ ebay ones? regardless, was he worth the money to get him early...

Soundblaster1
02-09-2008, 07:09 PM
wow, that was rather complicated...the peace agreement. Sounds like a real world government type document. Twisted and convoluted, but at least somebody can decipher it.

Is your Animated SS one of the 1$ ebay ones? regardless, was he worth the money to get him early...

:D Complicated stuff to explain the plot holes is what I do.

Yes and Yes on both Animated Starscream questions. It turned me from "I'm buying this because it's Starscream, so I'll buy it anyway with some extra Christmas cash" to "Almost a fan of TF: Animated..."


http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4831/imgp0057pd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9868/imgp0058tj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4609/imgp0059ml6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

We'll see who Ironhide chooses sometime later.

Ripclaw
02-09-2008, 07:33 PM
awww

but i want to know now

and this is getting interesting

Otispq
02-09-2008, 10:35 PM
Shut up Roy, don't know why but makes me laugh like he's the retarded 5th wheel or something.

Razorbeast
02-09-2008, 11:01 PM
Hey Soundblaster1, how did you get Longarms' cannon off of his hand?
Cuz I can't get mine off.....

Soundblaster1
02-09-2008, 11:10 PM
Hey Soundblaster1, how did you get Longarms' cannon off of his hand?
Cuz I can't get mine off.....

There's a screw holding it on. Remove that. He can then hold it in the other hand. I'm pretty sure there's a way to hook it on his back, too. It doesn't change anything other than that hand being unable to hold the gun.

Autovolt 127
02-10-2008, 05:36 AM
This is getting good.

Soundblaster1
02-10-2008, 10:50 AM
Here's a shocker...

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/2394/imgp0060uz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/8968/imgp0061aha1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/953/imgp0061bci9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4313/imgp0061ctr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/2170/imgp0061dkz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

As for the riddle, I was comparing Snarl to Reagan and his space defense system thing.

Otispq
02-10-2008, 12:34 PM
Here's a shocker...
As for the riddle, I was comparing Snarl to Reagan and his space defense system thing.

Wow, that makes brilliant sense, the fighting in space, and I can also see how that might not be such a great idea also, it can be rather hard to hide in the middle of nowhere. good story writing!

Mintybumblebee
02-10-2008, 01:53 PM
the pruple was kinda hard to read oh well

Soundblaster1
02-10-2008, 05:11 PM
Wow, that makes brilliant sense, the fighting in space, and I can also see how that might not be such a great idea also, it can be rather hard to hide in the middle of nowhere. good story writing!
:D I should probably keep making this up as I go, since it's working so well. Thanks for the compliment!

the pruple was kinda hard to read oh well

Note to self: Shrink image further before editing. It looks fine when I put the text on at first, then hosting it shrinks it down (and makes it hard to read)

Let's see what Spyshot has to say...
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/3320/aaaaa001wu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
02-10-2008, 07:29 PM
i see

Otispq
02-11-2008, 01:24 AM
you could try using a shadow on the text, just enough to make it stand out a bit, but not so much that it makes the eyes go all buggery.

Soundblaster1
02-11-2008, 03:52 PM
you could try using a shadow on the text, just enough to make it stand out a bit, but not so much that it makes the eyes go all buggery.

Interesting... How would I go about doing that?

Today's installment (in the 4th pic, Snarl is NOT giving Galvatron a blowjob. It's just a really bad angle. *awaits someone to say "Sure..."*):

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6137/aaaaa002iz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/9989/aaaaa003og3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/4248/aaaaa004jg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1739/aaaaa005ol2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/994/aaaaa006zc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9905/aaaaa007fa2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I might make some irrelevant singles sometime... Depends on how bored I get.

Autovolt 127
02-11-2008, 03:55 PM
So Dropkick is getting towed buy Longarm?

Soundblaster1
02-11-2008, 03:59 PM
So Dropkick is getting towed buy Longarm?

And Bee is being towed by Landquake. Part of it is injuries, part of it is conserving resources. Snarl hasn't been riding on Ironhide all this time because he can.

Otispq
02-11-2008, 10:01 PM
So Dropkick is getting towed buy Longarm?

And Bee is being towed by Landquake. Part of it is injuries, part of it is conserving resources. Snarl hasn't been riding on Ironhide all this time because he can.

I think what he means is that in pic 2 Dropkick is standing right next to Galvatron, and must be a decepticon, yet after the battle he is being towed and (presumably) is an Autobot. So what's up with that? (I'm wondering that myself)

As for the Bee, I saw that he got on the wrong side of a beat-down in that battle, so I was quite pleased that he's getting towed also.

Oh, and before I forget...Yeeaaaah, Suuuure.

Soundblaster1
02-12-2008, 05:57 AM
It was mentioned early on that Dropkick is a spy.

:D

Otispq
02-12-2008, 09:49 AM
It was mentioned early on that Dropkick is a spy.

:D

I thought that might be the case, but I read too many funnies to remember every last detail, pretty tuff to do, so thanks for clarifications...as for the text shadows, what editing program are you using for the pics?

Soundblaster1
02-12-2008, 12:30 PM
I thought that might be the case, but I read too many funnies to remember every last detail, pretty tuff to do, so thanks for clarifications...as for the text shadows, what editing program are you using for the pics?

Paint.NET but I could upgrade to GIMP if I need to... (I won't because of the sexual references implied by "gimp" but I could if I had to)

Soundblaster1
02-13-2008, 01:19 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2040/a001ta9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/76/a002di9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9654/a003jm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8468/a004zt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/730/a005cw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1614/a006qb5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Things will start to get interesting again shortly... And Spyshot's background will come out a little bit.

Otispq
02-13-2008, 02:50 PM
That's cool, that Longarm is using his weapon as a jack.
Question: Incinerator and SS were fighting the Autobots, and now he acts like he's been part of the team for years and years? Did I miss the part that explained that, cuz I know the Pax had a space loophole, and I thought they were all still enemies, but that a temp. truce had been made till SS could get fixed, does that mean that until then, Incinerator is just following orders and as soon as SS is fixed their both outta there?

Soundblaster1
02-13-2008, 03:00 PM
That's cool, that Longarm is using his weapon as a jack.
Question: Incinerator and SS were fighting the Autobots, and now he acts like he's been part of the team for years and years? Did I miss the part that explained that, cuz I know the Pax had a space loophole, and I thought they were all still enemies, but that a temp. truce had been made till SS could get fixed, does that mean that until then, Incinerator is just following orders and as soon as SS is fixed their both outta there?

Plot holes I can't fill with bull crap FTL

I'll go create an explanation and make it Double Update Snow Day Wednesday... I'll see how I can integrate it into what I have done. For now, though, I can offer a single... Doesn't explain anything at all, but seems pretty amusing.

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/9964/abeu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fez Findie
02-13-2008, 03:10 PM
With this one strip you've given characters many times more of personality than Galaxy Force/Cybertron...

Oh sorry, that's a bar set so low that one doesn't need much for... seriously though the point is, you are makin' clear that what kinda people they be just from the dialoques and all that XD

Soundblaster1
02-13-2008, 03:45 PM
With this one strip you've given characters many times more of personality than Galaxy Force/Cybertron...

Oh sorry, that's a bar set so low that one doesn't need much for... seriously though the point is, you are makin' clear that what kinda people they be just from the dialoques and all that XD

Thanks.

For the record, I'm pretty surprised no one brought up the fact that Landquake and Snarl can stand Spyshot, but they can't stand Roy and everyone else exibiting lower intelligence. It's an intentional plot hole, but I figured someone (out of the maybe 3 people that read this) would find that "off" or at least worth commenting on. Spyshot's accidental decapitation also went unnoticed, but that was on big update day.

Double Update Wednesday:
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/2065/a007qj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/9963/a008er7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9978/a009oz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MEANWHILE (forgot to add that in)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/4746/ab001vq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9891/ab002tw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1888/ab003sd8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/1340/ab004po9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3535/ab005sb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Does that fill in the huge ass plot hole?

Autovolt 127
02-13-2008, 03:51 PM
:lol

Otispq
02-13-2008, 06:20 PM
Thanks.

For the record, I'm pretty surprised no one brought up the fact that Landquake and Snarl can stand Spyshot, but they can't stand Roy and everyone else exhibiting lower intelligence. It's an intentional plot hole, but I figured someone (out of the maybe 3 people that read this) would find that "off" or at least worth commenting on. Spyshot's accidental decapitation also went unnoticed, but that was on big update day.


Does that fill in the huge ass plot hole?

That's a pretty good sized hole to fill, but its not over til SS gets fixed...aha!
(my point is, when you run out of ideas, this is an excellent side story to fill in, or you could even do the classic cliffhangers where you almost show the end of the battle, then jump to surgery on SS, stuff like that.)

I don't remember Spyshots accidental decapitation, if is was buried amongst a lot of other details, they are easy to overlook. But I also have another reason...and hopefully you take this in a positive manner, but a lot of your pics are just a bit blurry, and some small stuff like a bot missing his head, unless it is mentioned, or has some effects put to it dramatically advertising it just can't be seen very well. I don't know if you have a tripod, but I know that you can buy one for $15 or less, put the camera on timer and you'd eliminate the blurriness. I like the lighting you have for the most part, but if you have a darker pic and it turned out just a bit blurry, I mostly read the words and that makes the pic understandable, then move on to the next pic.

That's why some things might be going unnoticed. I would hate to have you take the time to make such a great comic and have your readers miss out just cuz they couldn't make out all the details in a few pics. Those little details make the comic though, (the pic quality, and the little story details) and without them nobody will care about anything but the absolute main characters. For example, now that you mentioned that the guys tolerate Spyshot's less than stellar IQ, I want to know more about it, but if I'd caught it in the actual pics, it would've been even better.

Hope that helps, your doing a fine comic here, and I am certainly enjoying it.

Soundblaster1
02-13-2008, 06:55 PM
That's a pretty good sized hole to fill, but its not over til SS gets fixed...aha!
(my point is, when you run out of ideas, this is an excellent side story to fill in, or you could even do the classic cliffhangers where you almost show the end of the battle, then jump to surgery on SS, stuff like that.)

I don't remember Spyshots accidental decapitation, if is was buried amongst a lot of other details, they are easy to overlook. But I also have another reason...and hopefully you take this in a positive manner, but a lot of your pics are just a bit blurry, and some small stuff like a bot missing his head, unless it is mentioned, or has some effects put to it dramatically advertising it just can't be seen very well. I don't know if you have a tripod, but I know that you can buy one for $15 or less, put the camera on timer and you'd eliminate the blurriness. I like the lighting you have for the most part, but if you have a darker pic and it turned out just a bit blurry, I mostly read the words and that makes the pic understandable, then move on to the next pic.

That's why some things might be going unnoticed. I would hate to have you take the time to make such a great comic and have your readers miss out just cuz they couldn't make out all the details in a few pics. Those little details make the comic though, (the pic quality, and the little story details) and without them nobody will care about anything but the absolute main characters. For example, now that you mentioned that the guys tolerate Spyshot's less than stellar IQ, I want to know more about it, but if I'd caught it in the actual pics, it would've been even better.

Hope that helps, your doing a fine comic here, and I am certainly enjoying it.

d00d, at this point you could tell me the comic sucks and I'd take it in a positive manner. I'll see about busting out the tripod next time I take pics (if I can find it...) for this. I can't really tell what's blurry and what isn't when I take the pics cause the little screen on the camera sucks.

As for Spyshot's accidental decapitation, it was right in the midst of everything, as a bit of Shakespearian comic relief. Refer to post 79 for the details. Doesn't surprise me it was overlooked. I probably found it funnier than it should have been (try posing a figure on a very smooth but uneven surface. It's not easy) because everyone in the "bunker" setting would always slide.

As for the tollerance of Spyshot's IQ... That was something you'd only get from reading it. It's not like Snarl pulls a gun and threatens death when he tells someone to shut up. I will tell you (no sense making you read page 1-now) Longview is the only one that has lashed out at Spyshot at this point and Longarm actually expressed his version of sympathy when Spyshot was decapitated.

Let's get a running list of things I should strive to improve on going... Then I have it all in one place and don't have to dig...
1. Plot holes
a. Build team went missing
b. Incinerator/Starscream (working on it)
c. Spyshot (covered later)
d. Snarl is the only techno-organic being (no one noticed that either, eh?)
2. Blurriness
3. Is the text still hard to read? I can do bubbles again (not dirty-looking, like they were) or I can work with more consistant backgrounds to keep 1 color easy to read throughout... I'm more than willing to improvise or whatever to make improvements.

If it's for the good of the group, I could just bring in Unicron and abruptly end this story... It wouldn't be too much of a problem to start fresh (at least on my end)

Also, I'm upgrading to GIMP so I can use Polenicus's tutorials he may/may not continue posting (all I've seen is the explosion one)

Input is always appreciated.

Ripclaw
02-13-2008, 07:22 PM
the HUGE plotholes are what makes me read this

I LOVE PLOTHOLES!!!!!!!!!!

Soundblaster1
02-13-2008, 07:26 PM
the HUGE plotholes are what makes me read this

I LOVE PLOTHOLES!!!!!!!!!!

:lol
My carelessness brings you back? Awesome.
Unfortunately, it may drive away other people.

Otispq
02-14-2008, 12:07 AM
I went an looked at post 79, yeah its one of the blurry ones, and I totally missed it. I just thought that he was dead, and when you brought him back into the story I'd forgotten about him. Some elements of stories just get forgotten since it's played out a couple times a week vs buying it off the shelf at a bookstore...

As for Snarl being technorganic, nope, just thought he was a regular 'former who turned into a wolf.

As for text bubbles, they are nice and easy to read, but since you have them talking in order, top to bottom, that makes it easy to follow, some people's bubbles are hard to figure out the order to read them. Might want to include characters names a bit more though, as some secondary folks, or large groups make figuring who said what a bit tuff.

Still overall quite impressive IMO. Takes guts to put it out there for all to see, and I know I'm not quite ready to do that...

TCracker
02-14-2008, 12:41 AM
Unfortunately, it may drive away other people.

Nope, not me. I always read your strips and I enjoyed them. True I dont post often, but that does not mean I dont read :D

On the contrary, I see ALOT of potential on your strips and I cant wait to see how it progresses. Please continue your comics. :D :D

Autovolt 127
02-14-2008, 04:46 AM
:lol

Soundblaster1
02-14-2008, 04:39 PM
I went an looked at post 79, yeah its one of the blurry ones, and I totally missed it. I just thought that he was dead, and when you brought him back into the story I'd forgotten about him. Some elements of stories just get forgotten since it's played out a couple times a week vs buying it off the shelf at a bookstore...

As for Snarl being technorganic, nope, just thought he was a regular 'former who turned into a wolf.

As for text bubbles, they are nice and easy to read, but since you have them talking in order, top to bottom, that makes it easy to follow, some people's bubbles are hard to figure out the order to read them. Might want to include characters names a bit more though, as some secondary folks, or large groups make figuring who said what a bit tuff.

I'll stick with the text as I have it, but I'll be a little more picky when I do the text colors. I know exactly what you mean with the bubble order, so I do plan on staying away from that unless I have to.

Snarl's techno-organic-ness wasn't actually intentional... But I did notice it and I will be using it later.
Still overall quite impressive IMO. Takes guts to put it out there for all to see, and I know I'm not quite ready to do that...
I'd love to see what you can come up with. You seem to know what you're doing, so it's not like there's too much to do other than work on something.

Nope, not me. I always read your strips and I enjoyed them. True I dont post often, but that does not mean I dont read :D

On the contrary, I see ALOT of potential on your strips and I cant wait to see how it progresses. Please continue your comics. :D :D

I appreciate the kind words. I think the lack of replies had me on a "They aren't replying so it must suck" mindset, when in reality, these improvement discussions have led me to believe otherwise.

:lol

Wut'chu laughin at, punk? :D

No one noticed the absense of Roy, either? I know I can't take pictures for crap, but still... He's big and green.

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/8767/a010sp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3715/a011se4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Here's what happened to him...
He was knocked out and the group left him for dead. He couldn't contact them, so he went to hang out where he knew they were headed.


Curiosity question... How badly would it confuse everyone if I did a side-comic with all my Legends figures? If there's too much of a problem, I can figure out some other way to incorporate them.

Mintybumblebee
02-14-2008, 08:54 PM
:lol really random gald came back twice

Otispq
02-14-2008, 09:41 PM
It's your comic, you can do as you please. I wouldn't start a new thread unless you have some long and very well thought out stuff, just keep it here and come back to this when your ready. Kinda like TCracker, he has his BA Megatron that rocks, and when he gets done with his current serious stuff he has said he'll give BA Megs some much aniticipated screen time, and I know I'm waiting patiently, as his current stuff is good. My point is, don't just abandon this one, you put too much into it already and it's good, but you can shelf if for a while until your ready to complete it.

Ripclaw
02-14-2008, 10:15 PM
It's your comic, you can do as you please. I wouldn't start a new thread unless you have some long and very well thought out stuff, just keep it here and come back to this when your ready. Kinda like TCracker, he has his BA Megatron that rocks, and when he gets done with his current serious stuff he has said he'll give BA Megs some much aniticipated screen time, and I know I'm waiting patiently, as his current stuff is good. My point is, don't just abandon this one, you put too much into it already and it's good, but you can shelf if for a while until your ready to complete it.

uh

maybe i shouldnt of started my "Lost Hero" thread then, cause i am making that up as i go lol.

Otispq
02-15-2008, 12:20 AM
uh

maybe i shouldnt of started my "Lost Hero" thread then, cause i am making that up as i go lol.

I guess I'd better go and read that eh? nothing wrong with making it up as you go along, but if you already have something going, to abandon it for something else that you are planning on winging it with, well that's not gonna keep a lot of readers happy or tuning in unless it's just really good improv.

Ripclaw
02-15-2008, 12:56 AM
I guess I'd better go and read that eh? nothing wrong with making it up as you go along, but if you already have something going, to abandon it for something else that you are planning on winging it with, well that's not gonna keep a lot of readers happy or tuning in unless it's just really good improv.

im really good at making stories up as i go along

its kinda like roleplaying lol

Soundblaster1
02-15-2008, 01:38 PM
I'll stick with this for the time being, but after today's shoot, it will be going down an entirely different path.

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/2032/a012uc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/965/a013yu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/1351/a014rn2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/6039/a015hr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1958/a016fo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/8812/a017zg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I'm going with TWO updates today so I can start with new (and improved?) pictures tomorrow. And I didn't give much to look at yesterday.

EDIT: To keep patching up the whole I made, Starscream is able to function but he is not yet fully recovered.

Otispq
02-15-2008, 02:13 PM
That was great dialog! spyshot is great at the Lulz!

Soundblaster1
02-15-2008, 04:44 PM
That was great dialog! spyshot is great at the Lulz!

:D
I always laugh when I come up with dialog for Spyshot. I know what he's gonna say, but making it '1337' is kinda hard. The fact he's probably the smartest one there (pioneering a science, no less) makes him even funnier.

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/710/a018ot5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4010/a019ii9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4624/a020re9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9797/a021hj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Just so we're on the same page, Nemesis found no need to advance technology, as it was about as badass as it needed to be at the time. Galvatron, Cannonball, Scourge, Megatron, and Sharkticon are still too busy feuding to worry about that stuff. They were temporarily allied, but not for long (and some of them didn't make it through the battle)

Icespark
02-15-2008, 06:04 PM
I'm sorry that I haven't been able to post for so long. I've caught up, and I see that your story is moving very fast! The way you placed Jetfire and Overload into the story was great! I don't think Overload is used by people often enough, I can't wait to use him in my own comics. I'm really enjoying the speech for Spyshot! :D Imagining what his voice must sound like along with others reactions is very amusing! :D I look forward to seeing what happens next! :D

Mintybumblebee
02-15-2008, 07:15 PM
:lol again with the glad twice in this up date

Otispq
02-16-2008, 07:07 AM
I love that part of your launch pad is a Priority Mail box. "Gotta send some stuff into space...? Use Priority Mail!"

Soundblaster1
02-16-2008, 10:03 AM
I'm sorry that I haven't been able to post for so long. I've caught up, and I see that your story is moving very fast! The way you placed Jetfire and Overload into the story was great! I don't think Overload is used by people often enough, I can't wait to use him in my own comics. I'm really enjoying the speech for Spyshot! :D Imagining what his voice must sound like along with others reactions is very amusing! :D I look forward to seeing what happens next! :D

Don't be sorry, d00d. Health > comics (although I hear laughter is a good medicine)

Jetfire and Overload aren't sentient (yet? Not sure where I'm headed with them) so I have no idea where they're headed... I'd like to see what you can come up with for Overload.

Spyshot-ese was pretty much adopted from the LOLGear thread. It was one of those "good luck getting him to be taken seriously" things, so I went with what was established (and that twist...). I'm quite fond of the "HAY GUISE" lines, personally.

I love that part of your launch pad is a Priority Mail box. "Gotta send some stuff into space...? Use Priority Mail!"

:lol The vertical stand for it in the "warehouse" is the box for my postal scale :D USPS IS INFILTRATING MY COMIC!!!!!!!!

These were taken with the tripod and I bothered to utilize the "zoom" feature my camera has, too. Are they any better (not much to see yet, but still)?

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5666/cbdefg001lv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/702/cbdefg002kl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

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http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/1708/cbdefg005ox6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Autovolt 127
02-16-2008, 02:13 PM
NOOOO! Not tony!

Otispq
02-16-2008, 09:05 PM
Yes, the pics looking much better, and by adding who's speaking it really makes it a better reading experience. I even like the 'Automation' without having to put bubbles and lines to the individual characters, it makes things go very smoothly, like the shot next to last with everybody grouped together, I can't even see SS or Spyshot, but it works great.

Mintybumblebee
02-16-2008, 09:51 PM
:lol haha tony and gald box again

Grimwing
02-16-2008, 11:26 PM
But I think tony cartoonishly grabed jetfire and withheld the power of the momentum. If that's the case then +2 humor points, I liked that punchline.

Soundblaster1
02-17-2008, 12:29 PM
Yes, the pics looking much better, and by adding who's speaking it really makes it a better reading experience. I even like the 'Automation' without having to put bubbles and lines to the individual characters, it makes things go very smoothly, like the shot next to last with everybody grouped together, I can't even see SS or Spyshot, but it works great.
So until I begin to epically fail at lines of text in this style, it's gonna be done this way.
:lol haha tony and gald box again
I don't have that much stuff for a set! Should I wrap it for next time?
But I think tony cartoonishly grabed jetfire and withheld the power of the momentum. If that's the case then +2 humor points, I liked that punchline.
More like "Cartoonishly did something stupid because it made sense at the time"
NOOOO! Not tony!

:lol Your reactions are probably funnier than the comic. Seriously.

Small update now, larger one later.

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/5334/cbdefg006op0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/750/cbdefg007rl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1306/cbdefg008vb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
02-17-2008, 05:10 PM
no just saying u use a lot
:lol

Soundblaster1
02-17-2008, 05:19 PM
It's like the only box I have other than the USPS boxes and the HLJ box...

Longer update:
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/9657/cbdefg009sn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/84/cbdefg010sw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3070/cbdefg011hv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/1141/cbdefg012kr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/859/cbdefg013gn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/8661/cbdefg014ah8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

TCracker
02-17-2008, 05:30 PM
Like the effects:thumb The story is moving very progressively without any dragging ( like mine :() :D

Autovolt 127
02-18-2008, 06:18 AM
:lol:lol:lol

Soundblaster1
02-18-2008, 02:54 PM
Let's see how an unnatural break in the story goes over... (lead balloons can fly, so I don't want to see that reference.)

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6564/cbdefg015nh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/5863/cbdefg016gt0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/1858/cbdefg017xq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8379/cbdefg018oq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/844/cbdefg019qh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

EDIT: the 5th image is supposed to be VERY irrelevant to the others.

Icespark
02-18-2008, 03:27 PM
Spyshot's speech is still hilarious! :lol I'm really enjoying reading it. :D The discussion was rather interesting... I found the comment on launching stuff into space rather amusing! :) I look forward to seeing what happens next! :D

Soundblaster1
02-18-2008, 03:34 PM
Spyshot's speech is still hilarious! :lol I'm really enjoying reading it. :D The discussion was rather interesting... I found the comment on launching stuff into space rather amusing! :) I look forward to seeing what happens next! :D

Spyshot always cracks me up. I'd have left him decapitated if he wasn't full of lulz (Hell, even the toy's funny)

Thanks :D

Snarl's just blunt like that sometimes :D Out of the 24 panels I shot/captioned, that was probably my favorite line.

I look forward to seeing what happens next, too :D (Seriously, I hit the bottom of the barrel. I think I'm just gonna finish this set tomorrow and cut right to what happens next)

And just to clear something up (maybe someone else caught it and I missed it) Scourge was also techno-organic, but it was only him and Snarl. I'll come up with a way to relate that in.

Otispq
02-18-2008, 04:16 PM
I thought that the 5th panel was actually quite relevant. Sets up the Bloo members a way to get off of Cybertron, since with the mass shifting they should all be able to fit into Incinerator, and with SS becoming a member, they would have his expertise in navigating space and finding a suitable place to rebuild their forces...kinda makes the 5th panel highly important in that sense.

Mintybumblebee
02-18-2008, 08:46 PM
:lol

Soundblaster1
02-19-2008, 03:19 PM
Small update (would have been larger if Otis didn't give me a much nicer idea)

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/531/cbdefg020zf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5431/cbdefg021dh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Otispq
02-19-2008, 03:39 PM
Small update (would have been larger if Otis didn't give me a much nicer idea

Well thank you very much! looking forward to seeing just how/where you take this from here. And the idea of SS being one of the good guys is definitely a new thing, but since your using the animated toy, which with its coloring and style doesn't really look like most SS's it feels ok and not wierd at all...although saying that does seem wierd eh?

Autovolt 127
02-20-2008, 04:17 PM
This is good.

Icespark
02-20-2008, 05:03 PM
I'm really enjoying your use of Animated Starscream! You've done a really nice job with him! :) As always, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned next! :D

Soundblaster1
02-20-2008, 06:37 PM
Well thank you very much! looking forward to seeing just how/where you take this from here. And the idea of SS being one of the good guys is definitely a new thing, but since your using the animated toy, which with its coloring and style doesn't really look like most SS's it feels ok and not wierd at all...although saying that does seem wierd eh?
I know what you mean... I'm not feeling Starscream as Starscream, but just calling him Starscream feels off.
I'm really enjoying your use of Animated Starscream! You've done a really nice job with him! :) As always, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned next! :D

Thanks :D Since you're so exited... Here's what happens next (a bit jumpy in the continuity, but it's still maintained):

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/2330/asasd001zc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/176/asasd002jn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2340/asasd003ev2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/372/asasd004of7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Yeah, I know... Spyshot's language improved this time around. Wasn't too many ways I could butcher it (aside from Snarl's misunderstanding)

Here's a poll for the readers...
Poll 1:
Should the blue planet's natives speak:
a. English translated to Spanish, translated back to English
b. English translated to Mandarin, translated back to English
c. English
d. English translated to French, translated back to English
e. English translated to Japanese, translated back to English

Mintybumblebee
02-20-2008, 07:28 PM
D OR E both are good!! :p

Icespark
02-20-2008, 07:43 PM
First of all, that is a brilliant upgrade for Tony! :D I never noticed the similarities between those two toys before, but it is a very fitting both visually, and story-wise! :) I also liked the surprise Spyshot had in store for everyone, he really is hilarious! :D About your poll, I would vote for either of two things. First, C, only using very proper and dignified English. So proper, it confuses anyone they speak to. In turn, have Spyshot able to understand them perfectly, but do not let them understand him! I know it would be difficult to write, but it could result in hilarity! I do realize that this would go against what Starscream spoke of earlier, but it would in turn open the door to another story-telling possibility of explaining how these others suddenly became so well versed in grammar. In contrast, although it would be difficult, it would be very interesting if these characters spoke half English and half Spanish, or half English and half Japanese. Please remember though, these are your comics, and the final decision is up to you! Write the stories you want to write, and make the comics you want to make! :D I'm certain that whatever you decide on, the results will be great! :D I continue to look forward to seeing more of your comics! :D

Otispq
02-20-2008, 09:21 PM
I also think that Tony's new body is perfect!

I would go with D for the language, seems only fitting for a comic to have them land on a planet full of Frenchy-bots...

Autovolt 127
02-21-2008, 04:16 PM
Stockade does look alot like tony.

Soundblaster1
02-21-2008, 06:02 PM
D OR E both are good!! :p
I knew you'd say that. But I am surprised you didn't say anything about Stockade looking like the guy Tony is based off of.
First of all, that is a brilliant upgrade for Tony! :D I never noticed the similarities between those two toys before, but it is a very fitting both visually, and story-wise! :) I also liked the surprise Spyshot had in store for everyone, he really is hilarious! :D About your poll, I would vote for either of two things. First, C, only using very proper and dignified English. So proper, it confuses anyone they speak to. In turn, have Spyshot able to understand them perfectly, but do not let them understand him! I know it would be difficult to write, but it could result in hilarity! I do realize that this would go against what Starscream spoke of earlier, but it would in turn open the door to another story-telling possibility of explaining how these others suddenly became so well versed in grammar. In contrast, although it would be difficult, it would be very interesting if these characters spoke half English and half Spanish, or half English and half Japanese. Please remember though, these are your comics, and the final decision is up to you! Write the stories you want to write, and make the comics you want to make! :D I'm certain that whatever you decide on, the results will be great! :D I continue to look forward to seeing more of your comics! :D
:lol Sometimes the ideas brought up are better than the comic itself.
I also think that Tony's new body is perfect!

I would go with D for the language, seems only fitting for a comic to have them land on a planet full of Frenchy-bots...
:lol If I go with English-French-English I can translate it myself... That makes things easier.
Stockade does look alot like tony.
:lolol Tony as in High Score, Tony as in your perception of the character, or Tony as in the guy I based it off of?

Another meme, followed by Trial by Snarl.

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3715/asasd005gz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/6134/asasd006rw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

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http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/6871/asasd008oq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

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http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/7227/asasd011dc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
02-21-2008, 06:58 PM
:lol well i'm not sure what to say..

Otispq
02-21-2008, 11:27 PM
And it was written..."Death came quickly to the chicken-bot."

Of course, bonecrusher always hated him anyways...

Soundblaster1
02-22-2008, 09:01 AM
:lol well i'm not sure what to say..
Say what you think, then. It's not like anyone will think you're stupid or anything (right, guys...?)
And it was written..."Death came quickly to the chicken-bot."

Of course, bonecrusher always hated him anyways...

:lolol This is another one of those cases of "the comments are funnier than the comic"

Otispq
02-22-2008, 10:37 AM
Say what you think, then. It's not like anyone will think you're stupid or anything (right, guys...?)


:lolol This is another one of those cases of "the comments are funnier than the comic"

As for MBB, go ahead and say your peace, nobody hatin' here.

and the comments, well I try. ordered a Light Box so I can take some decent pics to make a few of my own one-shot funnies, cuz I have no desire to make an ongoing plot based one, but I seem to do alright at coming up with good one-liners, so I'm going for it soon enough...

TCracker
02-22-2008, 10:55 AM
ordered a Light Box so I can take some decent pics to make a few of my own one-shot funnies, cuz I have no desire to make an ongoing plot based one, but I seem to do alright at coming up with good one-liners, so I'm going for it soon enough...

Oh please do! :D :D

Autovolt 127
02-22-2008, 04:03 PM
That's was sooo badass.

Soundblaster1
02-22-2008, 08:06 PM
and the comments, well I try. ordered a Light Box so I can take some decent pics to make a few of my own one-shot funnies, cuz I have no desire to make an ongoing plot based one, but I seem to do alright at coming up with good one-liners, so I'm going for it soon enough...

I'd love to see what you can come up with, brah. You have loyal readers and you didn't even start anything yet :D

Last new character intro on Cybertron... I promise. (Spyshot's remaining "thinkers" don't count... They don't talk yet.)

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6439/buhloo001am3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/1130/buhloo002dr8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2817/buhloo003zj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

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http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6098/buhloo005iw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mintybumblebee
02-22-2008, 08:15 PM
SANDSTORM!! :lol

Otispq
02-23-2008, 12:06 AM
I..AM..DARK

cue heavy, overbearing music with a dun dun duhhhh at the end.

Well, that's what happened in my head at least.

Soundblaster1
02-23-2008, 10:15 AM
Today's update skips a bunch of crap I don't feel like dealing with.

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4074/buhloo006ul1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8389/buhloo007xv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

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